relationships - a fan fic,part 46,pg82

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ok guys this is the first time i am trying something known as writing a fic !! so plzz tell me whether u guys liked it or not !! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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RELATIOSHIPS


situation : yuvi and ranveer have excanged their names in front of mitra ,so now yuvi and varun are in the same room and so are ranveer and sid .
There's a new admission :Neal Arora , a person from the very famous arora family who presently live in nainital ,from St.Marks School . neal's a very handsome and is usually a lady magnet ,
Khushi ,who's also from the same school as him and she is an orphan and due to his persistance even she is admitted to maurya coz his parents love khushi very much and they have pretty much accepted her as a family member .
both these people have not come to maurya just coz its the elite school in india but for someone whom they missed very much and who departed very suddenly from that person .

Neal is asked to share the room with yuvi i.e ranveer and varun . both yuvi and varun are informed about him and they pretty much know him just by his name !!!!

thakur comes to meet yuvi and they both are discussing about the next meeting of REMIX and suddenly someone barges in !!!!!!! its none other than Neal . yuvi and ranveer are shocked to see someone with soo much luggage but they dont show it . neal gives a friendly smile to both and they both introduce themselves to him and start helping him to unpack ................
...............meanwhile ashi recieves a message "come to room no 10 now !! "
ashi : ab is psycho ko kyaa chahiye ??????
well mate main abhi baahar jaa rahi hoon , ok byee !!!!!

sid enters the room of uv and varun and then is shocked to see a new person .
uv:hi sid !!! tum yahaa ????
sid : haa dude woh main ........
uv : kyaa hain sid ??
sid : main tumhe miss kar raha tha !
ranveer : banaa aapko hamesha inshe chipke rehna hain kyaa ??
sid : yaa rite !! tumhare saath rehthe rehte main toh totally paagal ho jaaongaa . tum toh aate hi yaa to padne lagte ho , yaa phir apne kaam main lage rehte ho , mere ideas toh kahi nahi sunte
uv in his mind " is nek kaam ke liye thank u mitra sir !!! " and gives a sigh

meanwhile sid sees neal and has a question mark on his face !!

ranveer sees this and tells : yeh neal hain yuvi ka nayaa room mate

neal : yuvi kaa !! oh main galat room main hoon kyaa ?? mujhe toh ranveer aur varun ka room diya gaya tha .....
uv: no ! no ! yeh tumhara room hi hain and main ranveer ho and yeh yuvi hain college records ke liye and vice versa in real life

neal is now very much confused !!!

and suddenly ashi enters the room and is shocked to see neal .........
her mouth is wide open and she is standing like a statue !!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really gud u shud continue wid it 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its totally sufi so plzzzz continue. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow......please continue asap 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow....its awesome...
u shud hav started writin fics ages ago.....yur too gud at it....
and me just waitin for u to continue....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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It is very very good 👏 👏 .Pls continue...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nishi.. plz continue soon...

its fablous
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Posted: 19 years ago
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uv notices ashi's behaviour and is boiling with jealousy

and anger that she is fida over this new person ,whose name is also

unknown to her !!!!! ranveer and sid also notice her behaviour and

feel bad for yuvi , sid thinks " uv toh iske liye itnaa kuch karta

rehta hain aur yeh use ghaaas tak nahi daalti and rite now she is fida

over this new person !!!!"

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM !!!!!!!!!!!!

ashi : tum .............neal .........i mean..........tum yahaa

!!!.....kaise ......kyun ............. (she is just blabberring what

comes to her mouth )

neal : (imitating ashi ) main .........neal.....i mean ......main

yahaa.........flight se ...... and starts laughing

ashi : (comes near him ) u idiot !!!!!! bataaya kyun nahi !!!!!!

mereko heart attack aa jaata !!!! ( and gives him a solid punch )

neal :(holding his stomach ) awwwwwww !!!!!!! annie (he calls her

annie) bataa deta to surprise kahaa se aata !! aur madam toh itni busy

hain ki no phone, mails nothing !!! hum sab ko bhool gayi kyaa !!!

yuvi , sid and ranveer :annie ????????????

neal :i call her annie with loooooooooove !

ranveer : u ppl know each other ?????

ashi : nahi !! hum log ne toh ek doosre ko dekha hi nahi !!!! duh uh

thakur !!!!!! neal ko main tab se jaanti hoon jabse aankhen kholi hain

!!!!!

meanwhile ashi just goes near his luggage and starts unpacking ,infact

searching for something . all the maurya guys specially uv is not able

to digest that neal is quite close to ashi

neal : kyaa dhoont rahi ho ??
ashi : mere cheezen !!!!

neal : tumhare toh koi cheez main nahi layaa ( trying to be fake )

ashi : yaa rite and your parents let u come like this without sending

anything for me ??

neal finally giving up gives her a huge bag and tells ; yeh lo !!!!!

ab khush ?? pata nahi , mom dad mujhe samajhte kyaa hain ??

ashi : delivery boy !!! and starts gigling
neal : annie !!!!!!
ashi : ( in a cute childish way holds her ears ) sorry
neal : and one more thing ,( and removes a gold chain with a cute

locket inside which there's a pic of some god ) yeh lo !! tumhare

b'day present meri taraf se ! tumhe us din pasand aaya tha naa ?

ashi :( almost in a senti voice ) u remembered ?? thank u !
neal : offcouse dear , tumhe kuch pasand ho and me not getting it for

u ??? IMPOSSIBLE !!!
ashi : u know what ?? u are the best ( and gives him a small peck on

his cheek and then hugs him ) and this doen't mean that i will u any

stuffs given by aunty !!!
and she leaves . neal too leaves carrying her luggage

meanwhile yuvi is too much angry and is fuming

uv : tum logon ne dekha !!!!!! she left even whithout even seeing me !
ranveer : c'on banaa ! unka dost itne dinon ke baad unse mila hain ,

so is too much in shock
uv : but then ......
sid :(as usual ) dude !! i think u must forget ashi ! dekha nahi woh

neal ke kitne close hain ! i think ......
ranveer pulls sid towards him
uv leaves feeling sad
ranveer : kab kahaa kyaa nahi bolna hota hain , aap hamesha wohi kyun

bolte hain !!!!!
sid : what !!! maine kyaa kuch galat kahaa
ranveer gives up and leaves to get uv leaving a confused sid behind



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Posted: 19 years ago
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its gr8 👏 👏 👏 👏......plz continue soon

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