relationships - a fan fic,part 46,pg82 - Page 13

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plz plz plzzzzzz continue soon ....,,what next???

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amazin specially tht joke!..mean ...average kuch nahi hai!!....wht humour amaming!
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plzzzzzz continue we r eargely waiting for the next part
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exiting mahaa extiting its getting exting more dan d serial how i wish all dat happnes dere too
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hey! i agree with u on this! its gr88 & now pleasee continue.


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Hey cool chapter!!! Please continue!!! I'm waiting for your next! 😛


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Nishi where are you .
Please post the next part soon.
I am waiting.
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nishi plz plzz plz post soon 😃
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Neal and yuvi are in their room, Yuvi's just sitting like a statue.
Neal: toh UV!! What is the problem between u people??
Uv: kyun?? why should I tell u ?? ..................itna hi interest hain to us "annie " se hi pooch lo na !!
Neal :I will ask her too .........but I need to know your story too !!
Uv: why ?? are u any sort of agony uncle or what ?? ...........listen Neal !! I don't wanna talk to u right now !! mujhe jaana hain , .......(taking his guitar ,goes to the door,and while closing the door blabbers ) and btw Neal ......mereliye sabse bada problem tum hi ho !!
Neal is shocked to hear that ! but prefers to let go coz uv wasn't in the best of mood . at the same time Khushi enters with vrinda
Khushi : hi Neal ! ....(Sees he is upset ,goes and hugs him) kyaa hua ?? ..........any problem my dear ??
Neal :em..........u know it right ?? what's the problem (sees vrinda ) ..........oh hi vrinda !! how are u ??
Vrinda :fine !!(cannot believe that Khushi and Neal are so close ,coz .......duh uh guys she didn't know about it )
Khushi :yeh yuvraj kahaa jaa raha tha ?? (Neal explains it all to them )
Vrinda : yeh dono !! ashi aur uv !! bilkul paagal hain ......pata nahi inka kyaa hoga ?? hamesha ........hamesha aise kyun karte hain ? kisika gussa kisiaur pe nikaal dete hain ...dono bilkul ek jaise hain !.......oh god !! please kuch karo !! (just then Khushi catches her )
Khushi : vrinda !! hello !! aap theek hain ?? itni tension mat lo .......varna high bp ho sakta hain !!
Neal :haa vrinda !! ..........now I know why annie calls u maate !!
Khushi :huh !! .........woh sab baad main .......i have a plan right now (and tells the plan to Neal )
Neal :brilliant !! ........no ........really !! but isme ek choti si problem hain !!
Khushi and vrinda :woh kyaa ??
Neal :iskeliye sabse pehle ek main character ki zaroorat hain !! ...........YUVRAJ !!
Khushi : toh isme kyaa problem hain ?? (asks like a kid )
Neal : problem yeh hain .....ki woh hum sabse naraaz hain !! I mean everyone ........humara saath dena toh door ki baat hain ........woh toh humara baat bhi nahi sunega !! pata chala kyaa problem hain ??
Khushi : ( after a pause ) idea !! ...........main jaake usse baat karti hoo !!
Neal : (in a sarcastic way ) kyun ?? tum kyaa koi president yaa pm ho jo woh tumhari baat sunega ??
Vrinda :and btw use politicians bilkul pasand nahi !
Khushi: oh shut up both of you !! woh meri baat sunega aur humara saath bhi dega !!
Neal : (raising and eyebrow ) really ??
Khushi :haa !! really !! aur abhi main jaa rahi hoo !!
Neal :kahaa ??
Khushi :usse baat karne !!
Neal : madam !! halt please ..........tumhe pata bhi hain woh kaha hain ??
Khushi :canteen main hoga !!
Neal : I don't think so !! woh apna guitar leke kahi gaya hain !!
Vrinda :maybe I know where he will be there !!
Khushi :accha ?? toh chale !! ...........bye Neal (goes and hugs him again )hope ki main successful ho jaao ...and haa annie should not know any of this !!
Neal :all the best dear !! (both leave, Neal goes and takes out a pic of ashi ) ..........annie !!tumhare liye anything !! kaha tha naa ........jo tum chaaho main use tumhare liye laaonga ?? ab tumhe uv ke pyaar ki zaroorat hain .....toh woh bhi tumhe milega and it's a promise to u by me !! I always want to see you happy !! always !!


In the shed ,uv is trying to calm himself down , but ......
Uv : (to himself) ashi ! kaha ho tum ?? every time I am upset tum mere saath thi .....but now ....now I am upset because of u !! tumhe us Neal ki kyaa zaroorat hain ........oh god !!
(covers his face with his hands ,he is missing all his friends ,ranveer the most coz he used to calm him down ,sid coz atleast he would be lost in sid's confusion ,tia .........just then feels a hand on his shoulder )
uv : vrindaaaaaa???
Vrinda :kyaa hua uv ?? tum itne upset kyun ho ?? (observes his face )..............were .....were u ..........crying ??
Uv: (trying to hide his emotions ) nahi .........nahi toh .........woh some dust fell into my eyes ...........
"dust fell into the eyes ?? dust !! yaha pe dust kaha se aayegi ?? and btw for dust to fall into your eyes there should be some wind ......but yaha to kuch bhi nahi !! "
uv : tum ??
Khushi :haa .........main !! ab yeh mat kehna ki "mujhe tumse baat nahi karni " .......tumhe karni padegi !! u don't have a choice !!
Uv :listen Khushi !! I don't have any business with u guys .......
Khushi : accha !! annie se bhi nahi ?? (raising an eyebrow )
Uv : nahi !! (turns back )
Khushi : (goes and stands in front of him ) u know what ??jinhe jhoot bolna nahi aata ........unhe bolna bhi nahi chahiye ! specially in front of me !!
Uv : what do u mean by that ??
Khushi : woh bhi yehi kehti hain !! but u know she is a better actress than u ! I think tumhe usse sheekh lena chahiye !!
Uv :tum kyaa bol rahi ho ?? ..............and btw tumhe yeh shed tak kaun laya ??
Khushi :don't pretend !! subha se tum donon ki drama dekti aa rahi hoo main !! and u know what ?? I am fed up !! and rahi baat shed ki main koi choti bacchi nahi hoo ki kisiko mujhe laana chahiye !!
Uv : oh !! toh tum ashi ki baat kar rahi ho !! u are fed up ?? go and tell her not me !!
Khushi : offcourse I will !! but I thought ki mujhe tumhe yeh baat pehle kehni chahiye !! pata hain kyun ?? kyunki yeh saaari confusion jo hain iska nirmaan tumne kiya hain
Uv: kyaa maan ??
Khushi : nirmaan .......matlab ...creation !!and btw uv .......kyaa tum sachme annie se pyaar karte ho ?? yaa yeh bhi .........
Uv :just shut up !! will u ??
Khushi :no I wont !! u know what ?? tumse kuch nahi hone waala !! other than creating confusions kuch nahi hone waala !!
Uv : (now really losing his temper ) what do u mean ??
Khushi :I mean ........tumse kuch clear nahi honewaala !! tum bas aise hi akele baithkar khud se baat karte jaao and ek din paagal ho jaao ,poori tarah se !!abhi sirf ek misunderstanding hain ..........baad main u will completely lose her !! do u get that mr ??
Uv : ( he had never heard such hard words from anyone ,but he was even more astonished that he wasn't angry on Khushi ) huh !! .........(just sits down with sad expression)
Vrinda : (going near uv ) Khushi !! what are u doing ?? I thought u wanted to speak to him ?? but ...........uv tum theek toh ho ??
Khushi : baat toh main karna chahati hoo !! but the problem is kyaa yeh meri baat sunega ??
Uv : (in a low voice ) bolo ......kyaa kehna hain ?? abhi taane sunne ke alaava koi aur chara nahi hain !!

Khushi was in all smiles as she knew that her first step was successful !! she had hit the right chord ........Yuvi's ego !! she had hurted it and he responded !! she knew that guys were hurt the most when their ego was hurt and at that time they would listen to anyone !!she was also happy coz she was doing this for a cause ........for someone's happiness !! that someone who had given her everything .......a name, a family , her love ........that someone without whom she would have been no one !!
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Posted: 19 years ago
mindblasting!!!!!!....amazin depiction of khushi character n feelings!!!
way 2 go...plzzz continue...
itss rockin n boucin too!!!!!

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