OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Fears (completed)

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MaroRudra

@MaroRudra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Eeek excited for the next update! Tbh even though she's a negative character I wasn't expecting Laila to be the shooter as she's a woman, but as they say hell hath no fury like a woman scorned...

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the update intense loved how the general blasted rudra he need to here some home truth loved how he went to her and spoke to her even in her state she knew it was him awesome

Oh my!! RR fan fiction world is also completed!! hehe i know we haven't interacted much, but seeing ur signanture picture attacked reply to a RR FF!! made me feel our old show feel!! 😳

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

OMG!!! Laila?? Fabulous update but no surprise there 👍🏼

Fantastic portrayal of Rudra's anguish. I could imagine myself watching from the sidelines. Just wow!! Hopefully Paro and the babies pull through. I'd hate to imagine Rudra getting a glimpse of heaven then it being cruelly snatched away. Can't wait to read on. Thank you for keeping us thoroughly entertained with your fabulous writing. Your a star ⭐️

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

OMG! OMG! OMG!

Laila shot Paro?

Rudra is furious.

Tense.

Amazing and thrilling update.

Very well written

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

OMG with this story being so Paro & Rudra centric i had forgotten that Laila existed in this!

i wonder if this could even be a premonition of what Laila could do in the real story too.. if she will shatter their happiness after they truly become one and surpass the problems and find happiness..

wow amazing writing once again..

I only have a small disconnect - would there be a part inb/w the yesterday of this update and the previous yesterday where Rudra beats up the other two jawans for trying to get to Paro?

anyway just fab! and i cannot wait to read the next awesome part!!

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dreamwinner

@dreamwinner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

This was not what I was expecting
Well u r update confused me so much
that I'm not even sure what I was expecting

Laila's deed did surprised me especially
that paro was 8 months pregnant how
can another woman stoop so long

Pure anguish what I felt after reading this
update

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Meena

@chotidesi

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Holy wow. That was intense- I feel like, or maybe it's just me?- that the yesterday and tomorrow's are merging into today, and this, makes me incredibly excited. It's such a cool idea, and your writing is absolutely phenomenal. I love the way you portray Rudra as the Protector, and have refrained from making Paro the demure girl who only sits in a corner. She has her own personality, and it's great.

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: napstermonster

No No, you are totally right. I set the scenes for Yesterday--Fears to take place within hours of the Tomorrow-Protector segment. They go from the dungeon in the last scene of the Protector OS straight to the hospital scene in the Fears OS.

Clearly the "Tomorrow-Fears" I've just uploaded n pg, 6 matches the concept of "fears that these two might have in a hospital" BUT the shooting and the future/tomorrow hospital scene takes place much more in the future--a year away from where Rudra/Paro are in Yesterday-Fears. Does that make any sense? If not, mein keh deti hu--blame the vodka!

I got it now. Thanks for clarification.

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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ArshiAnalyst

@ArshiAnalyst

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Part 1 was jus too fab dat part 2 failed to impress me somewhere or the other
Sti u captured the emotions beautifully. I could imagine each n every move of Rudra.
N Tadaaa Laila... That was a twist.

Beautiful writing n concept
Craving for more.. :)