OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Fears (completed)

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ashask07

@ashask07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

I dnt know whether to tell u i loved ur story or say dat ur 'Tomorrow' takes forever to come... I v been reduced to visiting dis page every 5 mins to see if U 've updated... 😳

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ashask07
I dnt know whether to tell u i loved ur story or say dat ur 'Tomorrow' takes forever to come... I v been reduced to visiting dis page every 5 mins to see if U 've updated... 😳

Okay, that is totally sweet! Welcome to the RR forum as well, I see you are a newbie, so its awesome that you are here! hehehe--You are not the only one who yells at me for taking "forever" to update! you should see my PMs!

But seriously, each update is around 2500 words, so it takes time to type out, not to mention that sometimes I'm actually too busy to spend even 5 mins thinking about plots! Never too busy to think about the Major-sa's dreamy eyes and biceps, mind!

But chinta maat karo, my dear, I will be updating the Tomorrow Part 2 soon. Not for another 2 hrs, at least--there, woh bhi bol diya! LOL! Please let me know what you think of the piece when it IS up!

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sony1990
hi this was really a suprise when i requested the os of laila i was not expecting this i thought it would involve face off of laila and paro but this is really great to read and after reading 1 st part i really could not guess what the 2nd would be about i thought you would end with the same part n i was in for a surprise with laila element will b waiting for the third part thank you for the post

Told you I was working on your request---I really appreciated you pointing out that Laila was an "item" in the RR list of symbols. Thank you for your suggestion, by the way--made me come up with this concept and I hope you liked it!

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Varisha sheikh

@vari3241

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

thanks alot ...just love it.

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Thanks for such a heart wrenching update. I was thinking that Rudra was paying respect to Shiv on Shiv ratri to only find him completely broken. I hope Paro and the babies are safe and sound to reunite with Rudra. It's endearing to read how caring Rudra was to his wife. I can't believe that Laila shot Paro, I suspected it to be an unexpected crossfire. It's ironical how PaRud's past is getting better when their tomorrow has taken a drastic turn to the worst.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

After my entry into RR forum with drabbles, next was to read your series of OS'es. Its brilliant how you envision the yesterday and tomorrow of their lives. I was particularly impressed by the Bindi and the Protector parts. Just so detailed i descriptions and so thorough with characters, the yesterday and tomorrow blend in so beautifully together, and I dont feel as if I missed any part of today, if you know what I mean. The flow is brilliant.

Now getting to this - the part 1 was hilarious at first, I mean seeing how everybody was indirectly manipulating the truth to keep Rudra in hospital. But it does outline how the protector in him came forefront, even if he was the one who needed bandages and help, he believed his being there will help Paro. And that was true, to some extent.

Aah the part 2 is heart-wrenching. What beautiful life they had, and it all just crashes down one day. Rudra finally healed, only to be left lost again. Wow, beautifully written that part. I cannot wait to read the next. Havent watched any recent episodes, so I am glad your OS'es have little to do with the current storyline.

Great piece of work, Navin. (btw I was big fan of your Perfection.)

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Where is the final part of Fears???? Did I miss it? Love this series.

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: SherryGS
Where is the final part of Fears???? Did I miss it? Love this series.

Hi!

No you haven't missed it---i'll be posting the final part of Fears tomorrow evening. I ended up writing Part 8 (Possession) this evening---stay tuned for the Fears ending, though. It will be posted on this thread.

Navin.

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Hi!

No you haven't missed it---i'll be posting the final part of Fears tomorrow evening. I ended up writing Part 8 (Possession) this evening---stay tuned for the Fears ending, though. It will be posted on this thread.

Navin.

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