OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Fears (completed)

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

👏 Loved it...although it was quite different from what I was expecting.
Feeling really sad for Paro 😭. I hope she and her unborn sons survive.

One kostin...how do they know that the unborn children are 'sons'? Sex determination is illegal in India...isn't it?

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: hkdrama
👏 Loved it...although it was quite different from what I was expecting.
Feeling really sad for Paro 😭. I hope she and her unborn sons survive.

One kostin...how do they know that the unborn children are 'sons'? Sex determination is illegal in India...isn't it?

I totally forgot that--its standard practice during pregnancies where I'm from! Hmm--Bholenath told them? Wishful thinking since Paro wanted two sons? Guess away! I needed to do this for where i want the story to go next, so please bear with me!

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Arrrgh! Never in my dreams! Of course, a woman can handle guns just like men, but but but... Laila???

What i loved the most is how Rudra transformed into Jallad. What would happen to Laila now? *shudders*

And please, write more scenes on Rudra and Paro - as in, more detailed ones, with dialogues. Now that Rudra is a changed man, would love to read a conversation between them.

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Very intense... but i do want Paro to live...You are diabolical...so intense that i could literally see the Jallad drinking whisky in shive mandir and that too on the eve of Maha Shivratri...

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: napstermonster

I totally forgot that--its standard practice during pregnancies where I'm from! Hmm--Bholenath told them? Wishful thinking since Paro wanted two sons? Guess away! I needed to do this for where i want the story to go next, so please bear with me!

If Paro wants two sons...she will get two sons 😊😊.

Now I am off to read your IPKKND FF "Perfection". I stayed up till 2 AM last night and read the first 19 chapters. Addiction...Obsession...

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

On the brink of losing everything, just when he made peace with his past...

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Great update. Rudra lost the meaning of his life with the thoughts and fear of parvati not being anymore in his life.

But i am little confused here. Is the yesterday part in this update the continuation of the tomorrow part in "Protector" or am i wrong? Can you enlighten me?

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Ow my days that was so good! Felt like I was reading a book! Wow!!

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

I think I just died and went to RR heaven! Thank you for this! I can't wait for tomorrow Part II!

PS: Will you be updating Perfection by any chance? HUGE fan of that fic!

Edited by khushiarnav88 - 11 years ago

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Navin

@napstermonster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: imran78
Great update. Rudra lost the meaning of his life with the thoughts and fear of parvati not being anymore in his life.
But i am little confused here. Is the yesterday part in this update the continuation of the tomorrow part in "Protector" or am i wrong? Can you enlighten me?

No No, you are totally right. I set the scenes for Yesterday--Fears to take place within hours of the Tomorrow-Protector segment. They go from the dungeon in the last scene of the Protector OS straight to the hospital scene in the Fears OS.

Clearly the "Tomorrow-Fears" I've just uploaded n pg, 6 matches the concept of "fears that these two might have in a hospital" BUT the shooting and the future/tomorrow hospital scene takes place much more in the future--a year away from where Rudra/Paro are in Yesterday-Fears. Does that make any sense? If not, mein keh deti hu--blame the vodka!

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