FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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So here is the next part. It's kind of short but I hope u like it! Please tell me what u thought good or bad!!!!

Part 6

Rani looked at Yudi as he was putting on the bangles smiling when he looked up at her. They both were lost until Rani jerked her hand as the bangles pinched her hand. Yudi quickly pulled the bangles he was trying to put on her hands pulling her hand and gently massaging it and apologizing.

"Aap ko zaida to nahin lagi? hume maaf kardijiye."

Rani placed her free hand over his lips stopping his apology while shaking her head.

"Koi baat nahin Kuwarji, hum theek hain. Aapne humare liye itne khoobsurat churiyan li, aapka bohot dhanyewad."

"Rani, yeh to kuch bhi nahin hai. Hum to aapke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain."

As Rani looked away blushing, he pulled her hand up his lips gently brushing them over her knuckles, smiling at her small gasp of surprise.

"Kuwarji, hume chalna chahiye, Payal humara intezaar kar rahi hai."

Yudi nodded and they both walked back to Payal with their hands clasped tightly with Yudi gently brushing his thumb across her knuckles sending shivers through Rani who just squeezed his hand tighter. They strolled through the palace looking at the different portraits of the many kings and queens that had lived there. However, Yudi was too busy looking at Rani whose face was lit up with happiness to notice anything around him causing him to bump into a man walking by. He turned to apologize but was stunned as he stared at the man standing across from him. Rani also stopped when she was jerked back as he had not let go of her hand. She was surprised to see Yudi so surprised and then got confused as he let go of her hand and hugged the man with a smile creeping onto his face. The man responded by shouting out Yudi and hugging him back. Rani then noticed that he was accompanied by a beautiful woman wearing a pink sari who looked just as confused. She looked up at Rani who smiled at her and she smiled back.

Just then Yudi pulled back and said, "Raj! Tum yahan? Itne saal baad hume mile bhi to kahan mile!"

Raj smiled and said teasingly, "Mein? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Kuwarji? Tume koi kaam nahin hai apne mehel mein jo yahan ke mehlon mein ghoom rahe ho." Then he turned to see Rani staring at them. "Acha! Mein samaj gaya. Lagta hai kay tum meri nai bhabhi kay saat yahan aye ho! Tumne shadi kar li aur mujhe bataya bhi nahin. Kaise dost ho yaar!"

Yudi smiled, "Tum koi kam nahin ho, mujhe lagta hai kai mere ko bhi aik nai bhabhi mili hai. Tumne mujhe bhi to nhain khabar ki!"

"Acha theek hai, pehle hame hamari bhabhi say to milao."

Yudi smiled and pulled Rani towards them. "Yeh hai meri patni, Rani. Aur Rani yeh hamare bohot purane dost hai, Raj, hum inhe school kay dino say jaanthe hai aur hum dono aik hi college mein the."

"Namaste Rajji," Rani said as she pressed her hands together and smiled greeting him.

"Namaste Raniji, yeh hamari patni hai, Sadhna." Sadhna stepped forward smiling and saying, "Namaste Raniji, Kuwarji."

Rani smiled back saying, "Sadhnaji aap hume sirf Rani kahiye." Sadhna pleased replied, "Agar aap hume Sadhna pukarengi to!" They both laughed and nodded agreeing with each other.

Yudi and Raj looked at each other and shook their heads. Raj just said, "lagta hai kai ab yeh dono humare ko to nahin lift karaengi." Yudi just nodded and Rani and Sadhna just turned and laughed.

Yudi was glad to see Rani getting along with one of his closest friends wives and opening up to others. He invited Raj and his wife to join them in their tour and for lunch after looking at Rani who nodded her consent. Raj agreed and they both were surprised to find that they were staying in neighbouring cottages. Yudi and Raj walked behind the women as they continued walking through the palace watching their wives laugh and bond together.

Rani was glad to meet Sadhna who reminded her of Gauri and her friend from her village. Soon the tour was over and the couples separated to go to their cars to make their way to their cottages to prepare for lunch.

Rani turned to Yudi as they sat in their car saying, "Kuwarji, hume aapke dost bohot ache lage. Sadhna bohot achi hain. Hume un dono se milke bohot khushi hui."

"Hame bhi acha laga Rani. Laikin hume aik baat ki chinta hai." Yudi had a worried look on his face that worried Rani as well.

"Kya Kuwarji? Hume bataiye aap itne parshaan kyun hai." She placed her hands on his squeezing them to comfort him.

Yudi just turned his hands to grasp her and smiling cheekily said, "Hume lagta hai ke aap apni nai dost say milne ke baad humare saat waqt nahin bitaaingi. Lagta hai ke aap to ab hame bhool hi jaingi."

Rani surprised to see the smile cross his face blushed at his words and tried to pull her hands away from him realizing that they were in still in the car where the driver could hear them. However Yudi refused to let go smirking at her attempts and holding her hands until they reached their cottage. He helped her out of the car and followed her into their bedroom. He leaned against the door watching her move across the room gathering her clothes to prepare for lunch. As Rani sat at the dressing table to unpin and brush her hair, he moved forward gently grasping and pulling hands away from her hair and started to remove the few pins in her hair. As he gently removed each one he pulled his fingers through every strand he unpinned causing a fluttering sensation in the pit of Rani's stomach. She closed her eyes as he picked up the brush and started brushing her hair slowly. Yudi could smell the floral scent of her hair and glimpsed her neck as he brushed her hair. The bare skin seemed to be calling him. He pulled Rani up jerking her out of her haze and brushed her hair aside as he hugged her from behind and gently caressed her neck with his lips moving down her neck to her shoulder and back up her neck leaving a blazing trail of heat on Rani's skin. She closed her eyes at the sensation leaning her head back against his shoulder. Yudi gently turned her around lifting up her chin to look into her eyes as Rani blushed and hid her face in his chest. Yudi hugged her tight, smiling at the sudden change in Rani, from sensuous to shy. "Kuwarji?" Rani mumbled into his chest. Yudi just nodded and said, "Hmm."

"Hume taiyaar ho jana chahiye. Rajji aur Sadhna humare intezaar kar rahe hongay." Yudi just sighed and hugged her tighter.

"Humne kaha tha na. Lagta hai kay Sadhnaji se milne ke baad aap hamare saat waqt nahin bita na chahti hain."

Rani just moved her hands up his chest slowly causing him to sharply take in a breath and pushed him away laughing at the look on his face and picked up her clothes. She walked to the washroom quickly dodging his attempt to grab her as she walked by still giggling at him.

Yudi surprised at first was getting used to his wife's mischievousness. He realized that there was still a lot that he didn't know about her and he knew that there was a lot that she didn't know about him but they had the rest of their lives to learn about each other and he knew that he would enjoy every single moment of them learning about each other. If it was up to him, he would be happy just spending every moment with her without caring about anyone else because to him she was his life now, his very reason for living. She was a part of his very being making him whole. He didn't need anyone or anything else. He knew there would be ups and downs but he knew that they would get through them together.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
👏👏👏
Great job....Loved the romance......
Keep it coming..😍😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
😃 😃 😃

Perfect way to start the day. Good to see Rani mischevious...poor Yudi, seems no matter where, Rani is still eluding him!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
Simra,
Just spent a good hour reading through your FF, from part 1 - 6.
All I can say is that boy am I glad that I did so. Just imagine what I would've missed if I didn't?! The though is just unbearable!
What romance filled FF. I was literally blushing and not once did I wipe the goofy smile from my face!
I think the RKAB creatives need a lil peek and portray some of the stuff in here.
Edited by jyk88 - 16 years ago
TSharan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

Amazing....outstanding....Keep it coming👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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AMAZING!!!!!! LOVE IT !!! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

👏👏👏

Great job....Loved the romance......
Keep it coming..😍😍



Thanks! I try 😳 ..LOL

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

😃 😃 😃

Perfect way to start the day. Good to see Rani mischevious...poor Yudi, seems no matter where, Rani is still eluding him!!



Glad u liked it and 🤣 So try...poor Yudi Indeed!!!

Originally posted by: jyk88

Simra,

Just spent a good hour reading through your FF, from part 1 - 6.
All I can say is that boy am I glad that I did so. Just imagine what I would've missed if I didn't?! The though is just unbearable!
What romance filled FF. I was literally blushing and not once did I wipe the goofy smile from my face!
I think the RKAB creatives need a lil peek and portray some of the stuff in here.



Really?! I am glad u liked it so much!! Thank you so much for reading it and appreciating it! 😳😳 We arent seeing much romance on the show so I thought my FF should be romance filled to make up for it 😆

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.sooon



Thanks. I'll try to update soon!

Originally posted by: sharan99

Amazing....outstanding....Keep it coming👏



Thanks!! 😳😳 and welcome to the forum btw...

Originally posted by: julielaldin

AMAZING!!!!!! LOVE IT !!! 👏👏👏



THANK YOU!! 😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
how did i miss this ok will read and come back with comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: bsingapury

how did i miss this ok will read and come back with comment



I was wondering if you saw it or not too!!! and yes plz let me know what you thought! :D
sakuraa thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
new part coming tonight! :D

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