(#1)AsYa-FF:Ek pal Jo dil mein Utar jata hai

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I am starting a FF on AsYa played by KaBhi.

Credit: starry-Phoenix
PROLOGUE:

The roads are blocked. The people are shouting only one name. Everyone is in hurry to reach there and attend a person. All ages the kids, the youngs and even the old ones are excited. All are fighting to reach first. All are impatient to see. Today police has surrounded the airport to secure the awaited person. It's is seen impossible to control the people. One mad young man which appears to be having curly hair in the crowd seems most impatient. The airport is buzzing like a bee hive. People are arguing on being the biggest fan. Then a black car came with full protocol and a smart, tough hunk came out. Soon the bodyguard surrounded him and made his way through the crowd to the boy having curly hair. Before he could reach him the media came questioning him.

Media: aaj india ka mashoor architect bhi yahan mojod hay, aye unn se unki becheni k baray main pochtay hain.

Reporters fired questions on him.

Reporter: Kya Aap bhi inn sab ki tarhan unn se milnay aye hain?
Kya aap bhi unn k boht baday fan hain?
Aap yahan un se milne aye hain ya kuch aur?

He was getting irked by the question he said in his breath: what nonsense.
Then very smartly signled his P.A to make my way through them. The p.a understood.

P.A : plz. abhi sir kisi swal ka jawab nahi dena chahtay... No more Qs plz.

And finally he met the boy and hugged him tight. The two were circled by the bodyguards. And then they broke apart and the hunk gave a smile and love slap on his head.

Boy : baijan, I knew u would come. Tu mein sahi tha ander hi ander aap bhi un k fan hain.

Hunk: tum jantay ho mein kyon aya hoon.

They smiled and hugged again.


So iam done with it till now how much do u like it let me know by liking.
And also will continue if I will get 25+ like.




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue- up
Ch-1: pg. 4. CHAPTER-1
Ch-2: pg. 6. CHAPTER-2
Ch-3: pg. 9. CHAPTER-3
Ch-4: pg. 10. CHAPTER-4
Ch-5: pg. 13. CHAPTER-5
Ch-6: pg. 15. CHAPTER-6
Ch-7: pg. 18. CHAPTER-7
Ch-8: pg. 21. CHAPTER-8
Ch-9, part-1.pg. 24. CHAPTER-9:PART-1
part-2.pg.27 CHAPTER-9:PART-2
Ch-10, part-1.pg.32. CHAPTER-10:PART-1
part-2.pg.40. CHAPTER-10:PART-2
Story till now- pg.38. TILL NOW
Ch-11. Pg.51. CHAPTER-11
ch-12. pg.61. CHAPTER-12
Ch-13. pg.67. CHAPTER-13
Ch-14. pg.81. CHAPTER-14
Ch-15. pg.100. CHAPTER-15

VM . Pg.120. EK pal...VM

Ch-16. pg.126. CHAPTER-16

Edited by NnonaA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH:
ZOYA FAROUQI (SURBHI JYOTI):

Young but famous actress. She is bubbly With attitude. She is self comforter, but also caring. Being a NRI she feels hard with Hindi. She is confident and stubborn. She doesn't give heed to flattering people. Most of all she is an eye candy.

ASAD AHMED KHAN (KARAN SINGH GROVER):

He is tough looking hunk. He is famous architect of India. He is very traditional and also judgmental. He looks tough but is very soft hearted person. He cares for his family and defend them from cruel atmosphere. He is known as AAK.

AYAAN AHMED KHAN (RISHAB SINHA):

Young spunky man. He is charming and is huge fan of Zoya Farouqi. He is nothing like his brother but is broad minded.






Edited by ztvrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii..
Interesting...

About title , - "mere brother ki dulhan "

..kesa rabega?...I always found it best suitable for zoya...she is caring and mordern...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Hii..
Interesting...

About title , - "mere brother ki dulhan "

..kesa rabega?...I always found it best suitable for zoya...she is caring and mordern...


Yea it's cool ... Let's see what others had to say abt this title.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is it a suggestion for a title...
If yes I love it ,it goes with the story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting
excited for updates
plz pm me for updates
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

very interesting

excited for updates
plz pm me for updates
continue soon

Yaar plz suggest a title I am very confused
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And as for the title if Zoya is the main and an actress and the story is mostly about her then... Ek Haseena Thi..
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