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Posted: 10 years ago


AND ONE MORE THING I AM CONVERTING THIS SS INTO FF CAUSE IT ALMOST SEEMS IMPOSSIBLE TO WRAP IT UP IN THIS LESS SPACE, IN FACT ALREADY I HAVE MADE BLUNDERS WHILE TRYING TO END IT.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA

SO HERE I AM AGAIN, I KNOW I SAID THAT I WILL UPDATE ON EID BUT ACTUALLY U GUYS WILL NOT BELIEVE, I FORGOT MY STORY SO FIRST I HAVE TO READ IT FROM THE BEGINNING AND THEN WRITE.


watt???
how can you🤣
oh girl ur so sweet yaar😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA



AND ONE MORE THING I AM CONVERTING THIS SS INTO FF CAUSE IT ALMOST SEEMS IMPOSSIBLE TO WRAP IT UP IN THIS LESS SPACE, IN FACT ALREADY I HAVE MADE BLUNDERS WHILE TRYING TO END IT.


well that's a gud news
but where's the update????
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Posted: 10 years ago

Credit: starry-Phoenix

Chapter-10
AsYa were still hugging when asad felt that they are in public many eyes were on them, asad knew that I t will cause problems for both of them. As zoya was coming from dargah so she was wearing a scarf, He immediately covered zoya's face with scarf and took her to the car. While zoya thought that he is kidnapping her.

Zoya: Help...Help...

Asad was annoyed by her screaming. He covered her face again this time with his hand and they went into a romantic eye lock.
They became conscious after sometime and zoya corrected her posture and then burst on asad.

Zoya: Allah miyaan whats wrong with u Mr. Khan?? Koi aisa kerta hai kya??
(Allah miyaan what's wrong with u Mr. Khan?? Who does like this??)

Asad: sheeesh!!! Kitna loud bolti hain aap.
(Sheeesh!! How loud u speak.)

Zoya was about to say something when asad gave her the full explanation.

Asad: ... ... And then aap hi ko problem hoti iss liye... I did that.
(And then u ur self would have got problem ... So I did that)

Zoya was a bit ashamed that she accused him but choose not to apologize, and asad knew very well about it. Zola saw her car parked behind.

Zoya: mr. Khan mein ab chalti hoon actually mujhay kisi k ghar jana hai.
(Mr. Khan I should go now actually I have to go to someone's house)

Zoya was about to leave when asad stopped her.

Asad: mein aap ko drop ker daita hoon.
(I shall drop u.)

And then he signaled outside from his tinted car where everybody was still staring at the car in which they went because they saw asad. Zoya understood and compiled.

They went a little further and asad got a call.

Asad: Asalamualikum!

Prassad: sir are ki meeting hai 15 min mein.

Asad looked at zoya and zoya knew that he must have got meeting.

Zoya: mr. Khan go attend ur meeting drop me here I will call my car.

Asad: but ms. Farooqui...

Zoya: mr. Khan plz its not that important to drop me besides we have left the crowd far away.

Asad: ok as u say so.

Asad says him to keep them waiting and that he is coming. While zoya calls her driver to bring the car.
After a min or two zoya's car was there. She went to her car after awkwardly saying goodbye.
They both sat in there car and drove away.
AsYa knew that after confession of their love for each other their first meeting was very formal actually it was due to hesitation or something like that because they have spoken their hearts to each other and now they have nothing to hide.
That day every thing was going right asad had never done such a great presentation ever and zoya was more confident on her love and choice now.
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Zoya told her driver to go back and that she will drive on her own from here. Zoya drove her car into a villa which was huge and beautiful. It's guards were already insformed of her arrival. One guard came and opened the door of car and he asked for the key to park the car while the other was ready to take out luggage. For once zoya thought that she has entered a hotel. Another guard escorted her to the main gate of the house. She was feeling like a real royalty. The guard rand the bell and after a few sec a beautiful lady opened the door and greeted her while the guard left. It was none other than Dilshad asad's mother but zoya was unaware of it.

Dilshad: Asalamualikum!

Zoya: wa...walikumasalam!

Dilshad: ao undder ao.
(Come.. Come inside.)

She walked indside to find a very precisely designed house. This house was way beautiful then any set where zoya had acted. She was checking the house as if she hadn't seen anything like it and that was true too that she hadn't seen such a house, which was already giving the feel of home.

Dilshad: tumhay yahaan anay mein koi takleef tu nahi hoi.
(Did u had any difficulty reaching here)

Zoya: no... No bilkul nahi ... I must say aap ne achi training di hai guards ko.
(No... No no at all... I must say u have very well trained ur guards.)

Dilshad: ye sab meray betay ka kaam hai, he need everything perfect.
( this all is the work of my son, he needs everything perfect.)

Zoya: really. Phir tu mujhay un ka intazaar rahy ga.
(really then I will be waiting to meet him.)

Then a innocent girl came out and greeted zoya, she looked very excited to meet her.

Girl: Asalamualikum!

Zoya: walikumasalam!

Dilshad: ye meri beti hai. Najma.

Zoya: nice to meet u. I am ...

Before zoya could complete Najma spoke.

Najma: zoya... Zoya farooqui... Aap ko Kon nahi janta...
( zoya...zoya farooqui... Who doesn't know u...)

Zoya: okay!!

Najma: I just love ur acting..

Zoya: really... Oh thank u.

Dilshad: najma buss uss ko araam kernay do.

Zoya just felt relief seeing so much care for her.

Najma: oh sorry, come this way.

Zoya: ya ... Let's go.
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Chapter-10. Part -2 coming soon
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Previous = CHAPTER-9:PART-2
Next= CHAPTER-10:PART-2
Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac


watt???
how can you🤣
oh girl ur so sweet yaar😃

Lol sue didn't u forget ur story ever???
The time u take to update ur story is always I feel k u forgot the story and is reading again and then writing 🤣

Just kidding...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac


well that's a gud news
but where's the update????

I have updated look up 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was nicely written yar👏
loved how asad cared for her image
dilshaad is such a sweet heart and
even nzma is so much welcuming
i loved the update
waiting when zoya will know that the house is asad's😉
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA

Lol sue didn't u forget ur story ever???
The time u take to update ur story is always I feel k u forgot the story and is reading again and then writing 🤣

Just kidding...



hahaaa...aww!!!
🤣
yeah i know i take a lot of tym...par abhi skul chal re hena isiliye esa hota he...
in my initial days of writing i used to update 2 3 parts in a week😆
and whr have u been
jaake meri story padh...jaldi
m waiting

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac


hahaaa...aww!!!
🤣
yeah i know i take a lot of tym...par abhi skul chal re hena isiliye esa hota he...
in my initial days of writing i used to update 2 3 parts in a week😆
and whr have u been
jaake meri story padh...jaldi
m waiting

Le abhi gai.
Buss yoon gai aur yoon ai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful chapter.
Loved it.
Asad seemed caring for zoya.
Dilshad n najma r such a sweethearts.
Continue soon

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