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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac


nahi yar it was heart touching..maybe the words were :)
wow! Yar! Mera to ek sal aur baki he
best of luck 4 future nd m waiting 4 ur comments

Sue ur words are always heart touching no matter what.
And best of luck for ur future too.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA


Sue ur words are always heart touching no matter what.
And best of luck for ur future too.


aww! 😕
thanku
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story..
misunderstandings leading asya...
hope zoya will soon realise asad is real AAK..
will you please update in english
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
So asya in a dilemma
Don't know what to do
She seeks jiju advice
And his ammi helped him knowing he is disturbed
Even if he didn't tell her she know
Mom after all she ask her name 😆
So will they follow the advice
I like when u have the English along with her Hindi it was better
When all Hindi I suffer
Thanks
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

nice story..
misunderstandings leading asya...
hope zoya will soon realise asad is real AAK..
will you please update in english

Thank u.
I did updated in English too but in the end it was left because I was in hurry, then I forgot, check now I have done it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So asya in a dilemma
Don't know what to do
She seeks jiju advice
And his ammi helped him knowing he is disturbed
Even if he didn't tell her she know
Mom after all she ask her name 😆
So will they follow the advice
I like when u have the English along with her Hindi it was better
When all Hindi I suffer
Thanks
Continue soon

Thanks

I am so sorry, but was in hurry so had to leave but check now I have translated it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Credit:starry-Phoenix

PART-2
Asad in his mind promises Zoya that he will not break her trust ever again.

Zoya on the other hand ,receives the contact details of her jiju relatives or whatever relationship they had. She dials the no. And after a few bells a lady picks up the call.

Lady: Asalamualikum!

Zoya was about to introduce her self when lady's voice gave her a soothing effect and she felt like talking to her mother although she hardly remember her. Instantly her eyes were wet with tears.

Lady: jee... Kon?
(Who?)

Zoya wiped her tears and made her self talk despite her voice was not supporting her.

Zoya: walikumasalam! Wo actually jiju... I mean anwar farooqui...

Lady: tum zoya ho na.
(U r zoya, right)

Zoya: jee... Wo mein ... I mean i ...
( yes... I... I mean I )

Zoya wanted to tell her but she was hardly able to voice her own words.

Lady: anwar meray bhai jaisa hai... Tum meray ghar jitnay din chaho reh sakti ho.
(Anwar is like brother to me... U can live in my house as long as u wish..)

Zoya: shukriya...
(Thank u)

Lady and zoya greeted goodbye and hunged up. After so long zoya had this feel of motherly love. Zoya knew that even nobody say but she instants that being an actress she has to limit her while living at others place. She immediately called her manager.

Zoya: assalmalikum!

Shifa: hey zoya whats up?

Zoya: shifa, yaar plz cancel all the upcoming assignments for at least one month.

Shifa was taking some drink which she spits out listening to her.

Shifa: what... R u mad?

Zoya: i mean every word I say...

Shifa: D ne mujhay bataya tha k something is wrong with u... But mujhay nahi pata
Tha k he was really serious.
(D told me that something is wrong with u... But I didn't know that he was serious.)

Zoya: tum wo karo jo kaha hai mein ne.
(U do what I say..)

Shifa: zoya assignments cancel ho gain gi first humain kisi achay doctor k paas jana Ho ga.
(Zoya assignment will be cancelled later first we need to see a good doctor.)

Zoya: shifa whats wrong with u?

Shifa: no, what's wrong with u zoya? Babe they will sue u.

Zoya: mujhay koi farq nahi pardata, ya tu cancel Karo ya unn se baad mai arrange kernay
Ko kaho.
( I just don't care, either cancel them or deal with them to arrange them later.)

Shifa: okay..

Zoya: khuda hafiz!

Shifa: khuda hafiz.

Shifa in mind says "nobody deals with her when she is angry" and then sighs. And then remembering the bosses shouting at her when she will infirm them about zoya she says.

Shifa: chalo beta kaam pe lag jao, waisay bhi abhi iss se boht ziyada sunna hai.
(Ok babe lets get to work, after all I have to listen much more than this)

Next morning asad went to the office and saw that zoya didn't came as she was supposed to come when the tour for the company was not over. But somehow asad was not shocked. During whole day asad was lost as to why Zoya didn't came although he knew best that why didn't she.

Zoya on the other hand went to dargha to pray. She prayed for her confusion to be resolved. Then she came out and a baba came praying and blessing her.

Baba: ye pyar ka hi noor hai, allah tujhay teray pyar se jald milaye.
(This can only be the glow of love, May allah let u meet ur love soon, )

Zoya was stunned but she didn't knew why.

Baba: aur tujhay ussay qubool kernay ki taqat de.
( and give u the strength to accept it.)

Zoya (unintentionally): shukriya!

Zoya was having mixed expression but none was clear as to what is in her mind and what is troubling her. Although baba had left but zoya was standing still at the same place.

Asad had left the office and came dargha but didn't had the guts to go in. He thinks to himself that he can't go in because he is under the burden of lieing to someone. He turns back and is about to sit in the car when he sees zoya coming out of dargha in mirror. He turns and see her walking lost. Asad felt like he has seen his life . Asad was happy but some tears also blurred his vision. His eyes were like fixed on her while she walking like a dead looking down. Then a horn caught asad's attention. A car was about to hit zoya when asad saves her and she closes her eyes. When she open her eyes she saw eyes who were filled with fear of loosing someone, eyes which seemed so true.

Asad (shouting): tum theek ho na, kaheen lagy tu nahi?
(R u ok, r u hurt somewhere?

Zoya was standing still looking at him with tears in her eyes. Assad like a mad man was checking her that if she is hurt somewhere.

Asad: aap ka dehaan khaan hai, agar aap ko kuch ho gata tu I would have gone mad.
(Where were u lost, if something had happened to u, I would have gone mad)

Zoya: kyon... Kyon aap meri itni parwa kertay hai?
(Why.. Why do u care so much?)
Asad cupped her face .

Asad: kyon k mein aap se mohabbat kerta hoon... I love u.
(Because I love u... I love u)

And asad took her in soft hug while she didn't respond. Zoya was still shocked at his confession but soon zoya made a conclusion to her confusion and responded to his hug.

Zoya: I love u mr. Khan... I love u too.

It seemed that asad was waiting for her to speak and hugged her tight and she responded too. They were passionate and both in tears but happy.

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Previous= CHAPTER-9:PART-1
Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I don't know that how many of u know that ramadan is coming and is expected to start on 19 june. I want to say that I will not be updating during Ramadan and will try to keep all gutter thinking aside during it. So RAMADAN MUBARAK in advance.
Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow yaar so lovely update n they confess so soon 😲 but i love it n their hug also n Ramadan Mubarak to u too 🤗
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting start
Asad and zoya still in confusion. ..

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