(#1)AsYa-FF:Ek pal Jo dil mein Utar jata hai

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

All who gave suggestion for the title, I am thankful to them but I think this suits the best. Tell me if not and I will change.

Once again thanks.

"EK PAL JO DIL MEIN UTAR JATA HAI"

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
Very nice
Pls continue soon

Thank u... 😳

And I will update today evening...😉

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ajanshul
Interesting

Thank u.

Further the story becomes more interesting.

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Credit: starry-Phoenix

CHAPTER -1

The both hugged.

Asad: chalo ayaan, mein tumhay ghar le ganey aya hon

Ayaan: kya bhaijaan abhi tak tu unn ki flight bhi land nahi hoi.

Asad: ayaan miyaan ghar pe sab app ki rah dekh rahay hain at

nikhat ki engagement hai.

Ayaan: bhaijaan meray honay se kya farq pardta hai, aur waisay

bhi mein nikhat ko bata ker aya hoon.

Asad: acha tu yahan honay se bohat farq pardta hai.

Ayaan as usual played through his hair and said.

Ayaan: wo tuuu... Alag baat hai.

Asad: ahaan... Mujay pata hai k kitni alag baat hai, let's go.

Ayaan: bhaijaan...

Before Ayaan could complete his protest asad grabbed his hand and turned around while ayaan keep looking at the arrival of airport. Just the arrival of popular actress who came back india was announced. And all the reporters got alert.

Reporter: aur ab intazzar khatam hoa, wo pal agya jiss ka Sab

Ko Intazaar tha.

Sab k diloon pe raj kernay wali zoya farouqi ajj India

wapis aa gai hain.

Ayaan looked at her arrival while asad was turned away from her. A beautiful yet innocent face came out with the goggles on. Another actor perhaps the co-actor of her recent film came with her holding hand. She looked tired but was carrying her smile with grace and confident. Ayaan was mesmerized by her beauty while asad didn't bother to turn and look at her.

As usual the reporters shot question on her.

Reporter: app ko india wapis aa ker kaisa lag raha hai.

App ne itni jaldi itni fame hasil ki hai, iss k baray

mein kuch batain.

Kya app janti hain famous architect AAK bhi yahan

mojod hain.

She was really annoyed with all that Qs but she chose to and them.

Zoya: i feel very good returning to india, har kisi ko apni

motherland pe wapis aa ker kushi hoti hai. So is me.

Fame allah ki di hoi hai, I believe if allah can give u

something he can take too.

I don't know k AAK bhi yahan hain, he must have come

due to some other reason.

Reporter: aisa kaisey ho skta hai k do famous log ek place pe

ek hi waqt. Is there something else u don't want to tell

us.

Zoya was shocked at there Qs and as she is straight forward she replied.

Zoya: excuse me... First of all, aap ko koi haq nahi hai mujh

se aisey sawal kernay ka, beside I don't even know him

I have never seen him, and where is he, if he is here

too, Tu aap log unn k paas kyon nahi hain.

One reporter pointed toward asad. Zoya looked at him going while ayaan was watching her. She mistook ayaan as AAK.

Just then the co-actor came to rescue zoya from the rubbish Qs. The both sat in the car and drove away.

Meanwhile asad and ayaan too sat in their car

Ayaan: bhaijan aap ne meray saath acha nahi kiya.

Asad turned his face away and looked out of the window.

Ayaan: bhaijaan... Aap sun rahay hai na?

Asad: kehtay jao sun raha hoon.

Ayaan: bhaijaan, qasam se itni khubsorat lag rahi thi.

Aap bhi dekhtay tu baas dekhtay hi reh jatay.

Asad: ayaan miyaan meray pas aur bhi kafi chezain hain

dekhnay k Liye.

Ayaan: bhaijaan aap ko kya maloom mein no tu bas uss ek

pal mein pori zindagi ji li.

Asad said under his breath: incredibly foolish.

On the other hand Zoya came to her hotel room annoyed and angry. His co-actor tried to calm her.

Zoya: allah miyaan what's wrong with this country? Itnay sawal

koi pochta hai kya. Itnay ans tu mein ne kabhi exam

mein nahi kiye.

Co-actor: chill... Ye sab normal hai.

Zoya: nai but seriously, pehli baat I don't know that AAK

aur suppose mein janti bhi hoon tu inn ko itni problem

kyon hai.

Co-actor: yaar Inko bas new spice every day, u just chill and relax.

With this he left the room. And Zola still angry.

Zoya: kuch bhi...

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Sorry guys a bit disturbed update it is but I don't have time to correct it, so sorry again.

Next chapter = CHAPTER-2

Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Awesome update but asya didn't see each other continue soon 😃

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shailu123
Awesome update but asya didn't see each other continue soon 😃

Thank u so much... 😊

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ayat

@ayat20

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Nice

so asad n zoya r strangers..

She mistook ayaan s asad will b interesting to read..

Update soon..

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ayat20
Nice
so asad n zoya r strangers..
She mistook ayaan s asad will b interesting to read..
Update soon..

Thanks

Yup they r stranger but not for long. 😉

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Nice start dear
Asad came there to bring back Ayaan. She arrived & reporters did their work. She misunderstood Ayaan as famous architect. She was annoyed by press. Waiting for an update soon. Thanks for pm