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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start dear
Asad came there to bring back Ayaan. She arrived & reporters did their work. She misunderstood Ayaan as famous architect. She was annoyed by press. Waiting for an update soon. Thanks for pm

Thank u sooo much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome start

asya didnt meet
excited for asya meet
plz pm me for updates
continue soon

thanks..
Yup they didn't meet.
They will in next part...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept...thanks for sharing
Edited by SanKsgian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

interesting concept...thanks for sharing


Thanks for appreciation...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

continue soon and do pm me

Sure.. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36


CHAPTER-2
PART-1

Next morning asad was shocked to hear the news of scandal. This was everywhere on the front page, on every news channel and today's most trending topic. Asad was furious, he saw zoya's interview in which she denies to even know him. Asad feels guilty that due to his presence zoya is suffering, he thoughts to call her and apologize her.

On the other hand zoya is furious that why AAK had to come on the very same day I arrived can't he could come later. Moreover she think he would be rather happy to have a scandal with hot actress like me. Zoya phone rings, she in anger picks it up.

Zoya: allah miyaan how many times do I have to tell u that I
don't know him...
Asad: I am sorry...
Zoya: excuse me...
Asad: wo,,,, woo... Actually... Mein AAK baat ker raha hoon.
Zoya: so aap hain wo Jin k saath meray kuch relations na
hoonay ki waja se mujhay tang kiya ja raha hai, bematlab
Scandal banaya ja raha hai.
Asad: ji...
Zoya: what??
Asad: I mean no... It's just a misunderstanding... Mein jald
hi is mamlay ko rafa dafa ker doon ga.
Zoya: good for u..
Asad: allah hafiz ...
Zoya: allah hafiz...

Zoya threw her phone on bed and self thought that he wasn't that bad I mean he apologized.
On the other hand asad self thought bechari due to me she has to suffer.


Ayaan comes to asad's office angrily. And sits without greeting him.
Asad looked at him and greeted him

Asad: Asalamualikum.

Ayaan didn't reply.

Asad: kya hoa... Ajj phir koi aap ki so called mehboobaon
mein se kisi ko le gya.
Ayaan: haan, aur iss baar mery mohabbat ko choranai wala
Aur koi nahi mera apna bhai hai.
Asad shocked: what???
Ayaan: Han ab tu aap asaiy expressions dain gai hi akhir
Mein nai aap ki chori pakdi hai, bal k chori nahi yeh
To meray dil per sedha daka tha.
Asad: what nonsense??
Ayaan: haan ab tu nonsense hi lagay ga na.
Asad: kya hoa sedhay sedhay kyon nahi bata rahey.
Ayaan: haan aisey behave ker rahey ho jaisey kuch pata hi nahi.
Mujhay sab pata chal gya hai, aap zoya se muhabbat
Kartey hain aur aap kal mujhay lainay nahi bal k uss
Se milnay aye thy.
Asad listened to his rubbish with annoying expressions.
Asad: u go now, mujhay boht Sara kaam hai.
Ayaan: haan haan janta hon kitna kaam hai aur konsa kaam
Hai.
Asad: ayaan ye sirf ek misunderstanding hai, aur kuch nahi.
Ayaan: jhoot...
Asad: u don't believe me.
Ayaan: nahi... Matlab haan... Matlab nahi...haan.
Asad: just stop and go.
Ayaan starts moving towards the door and then turns toward asad .
Ayaan: bhaijaan, aap such keh rahey hai na.
Asad: get out...
Ayaan ran from the door and collides with zoya and catches her in his arms. Ayaan was again lost in her and can't believe that Zoya is infront of him. While zoya had her eyes closed, opened her eyes and looked at him. Zoya gets on her support and walks a step behind.
Unintentionally ayaan said: mashallah!
Zoya didn't heard him.
Ayaan: i am so sorry...
Zoya: allah miyan what wrong with u, aap har baat per sorry
Kyon kehtay hain?
Ayaan: har baat????
Zoya: arey aaj morning mein hi tu sorry kaha tha phone per,
Remember.
Ayaan looked confused and then invited here in asad's office while asad is searching for files in the cupboard. Ayaan goes and slides the seat out and makes her sit on chair and he himself sits on asad's chair. Asad turns around and find both.
Asad: tum abhi tak gaye nahi?
Zoya turned around and asad looked at her for the first time in real and was mesmerized by her beauty.
Zoya: excuse me, koi apne boss se aisey baat kerta hai ?
Ayaan: zoya actually... Yeh...
Zoya: no... Let me handle I know them very well, koi tameez
Hi nahi hai.
Asad: u excuse me I am ...
Zoya: who r u ... Pata hai mein kon hoon.
Asad: aap miss zoya farouqi hain, forget it aap yahan Kya ker
Rahi hain.
Zoya: aap se matlab and mein yahan AAK se milnay aye hon.
Ayaan: zoya... Yeh hi...
Zoya: plz AAK... Don't stop me ek taraf aap hain aur aap apney
P.A ko tu dekho...
Asad: P.A???
Ayaan looked naughty now he understood everything, but he was not in the mood of revealing anything.
Ayaan: haan bhaijaan jaye aur 2 coffee le ker ayain.
Asad: what...???
Zoya: bhaijaan????
Ayaan: wo... Actually yeh mujh se umer mein boht bardy hain is
Liye mein inn ko bhaijaan kehta hoon.
By saying this he gave asad a requesting look, telling him not to tell anything.
Zoya: how sweet...
Ayaan looked at asad: plzzz...
Zoya: ab jaye bhi mr...
Asad: khan... Mr.khan...
Zoya: haan mr. Khan jaye aur do coffee lai ker ayain.

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Previous= CHAPTER-1
Next = CHAPTER-3

Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Amazing part
Asya convo and ayaan's antics
Excited for next part
Plz pm me for updates
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Nice...but too short update...

N agree about surbhi...she really needs to gain some weight...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: shailu123

Nice update continue soon

Thank u and I have updated the part... Check again

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Amazing part

Asya convo and ayaan's antics
Excited for next part
Plz pm me for updates
Continue soon

Thanks
I have edited the chapter and added the remaining part, check out.

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