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Guys I am back, I know it's too late, but then I know u guys didn't miss my boring updates at all, so sorry but I am back with them again.
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Credit: starry-Phoenix

Zoya is sitting lost in her makeup room when a person comes and informs her that shot is ready. She asks him to go and that she is coming. Although she was out of mood but chose to give the shot.
She is still lost and is unable to bring correct expressions or no expressions, but was trying her best to get through this. She was giving her best even after so much but her co-star seemed a freak and was giving retakes.

Director: rolling and Action!!

Co-star: mein tumhary baghair nahi rah sakta mein khud se tu jooth Bol... Agay kon si line hai...
(I can't live without u, I can lie to myself...what is next line...)

Zoya: aap ye koi 12th take de rahay hain aur abhi tak aap ko line yaad nahi hoi.
( u are delivering it the 12th time but u still don't remember lines)

Co-star: excuse me...

Zoya: u excuse me... Ab iss set per tab aana jab line yaad ho... Pack up!!
( u excuse me... Now come to this set when u remember the lines... Pack up!!)

And zoya walked to her makeup room.

Director: iss ko kya hoa, aaj tak itna popular honay k bawajood zoya ne aisa nahi kiya,
but any way Pack up.
( what happend to her, till today even being so popular she never acted like this
But any way pack up)

Zoya went in her room and threw all the accessories she was wearing and sat on the chair.
She thinks to her self that " why is she so effected by his lie, why she is feeling betrayed, why is she so angry with him, why suddenly he is something to her? Why?" She recalls their fights and asad saving her.
Zoya came out in a hurry and was about to go whn director stopped her and asked if there's any problem.

Director: zoya! Sab theek hai na, tum jaanti ho k tum mujh se share ker sakti ho.
(Zoya! If everythings alright, u know u can share with me)

Zoya: D... aisi koi baat nahi hai
(D ... There is nothing like it)

Director: tum share nahi kerna chati, tu it's ok... But mujhay lagta hai k u shuld take off for
1-2 days.
(If u don't wanna share.. It's ok but I think u should take off for 1-2 days)

Zoya: D... But

Director: zoya... Bus keh diya na tu bus keh diya.

Zoya smiled at his dialogue delivery and he smiled back.

Zoya: allah hafiz

Director: allah hafiz.

Zoya went to her room and called her jiju.

Jiju: Asalamualikum! Aaj soraj dekhna pardhay ga k kahan se nikla hai...
( I have to check, from where the sun rose today)

Zoya(shocked): kyoon... NASA be phir koi prediction ki hai?
( why? Did NASA predicted something again?)

Jiju: nahi... Actually zoya ka name aya tha phone caller ki name ki jagha... Iss liye.
( no ...actually my phone is showing zoya as called id)

Zoya:jiju... Plzzz...

Jiju: ok baba... Batao kya hoa?
(Ok what happen?)

Zoya: jiju... I miss u!

Jiju: zoya! Meri jaan I miss u too.

Zoya: jiju, mein ne pehlay kabhi aisa feel nahi kiya. I... Just dont know.
( I never felt like this before... I just don't know.)

Jiju: zoya r u ok?

Zoya: I don't know jiju, ek pal mujhay lagta hai k Sab theek hai, aur aglay hi pal sab
dhondala ho Jata hai.
( I don't know. One moment I think everything is fine and the very next moment I
Feel blurred)

Jiju: zoya, zindagi boht zalim hoti hai, u know life is not easy, tu Jo pal dill mein utar jata
hai uss Ko dil mein kaheen chupa laina chahiyay, warna ye dunya aap ko chain se
nahi renay dey gi.
( zoya, life is very ruthless, u know life is not easy, so when u feel a moment worthy
Then don't let it go because this world will not let u live in peace)

Zoya: aur humay kaisay pata chalay ga k yahi wo pal hai.
(How will we know that which is that moment)

Jiju: jab dunya uss ek pal k baghair adhori lagnay lagey aur uss k ilawa kuch acha na lagay
Tu samajh laina k wahi pal tumhari zindagi hai.
(When world seems incomplete without that moment, and u don't feel any thing good else
Than that, so that will be the moment which is truly ur life)

Zoya: jiju, ek baat bhi aap ki mujhay samajh nahi aai.
( I didn't get any of ur point)

Jiju: u will understand whn u will experience it.

Zoya: oookkk.

Jiju: anyway, meray kuch jananey waley wahan hain, tum wahan un k paas reh lo, u will feel
Home.
( anyway, I have some contacts there, u can stay with them, u will feel home)

Zoya: jiju... Iss ki koi zarorat nahi.
( jiju... There is no need for this)

Jiju: zoya I know what is better for u.

Zoya: ok. As u say so...

Jiju: ok kudha hafiz ... Take care... Love u.

Zoya: khuda hafiz ... Love u too.

Zoya hung up the call and felt better after talking to him.

On the other hand asad is came back home and went straight in the room despite dilshad greeted him but he didn't replied. Dilshad noticed his mood and decided to talk to him.
Asad in his room loosened his tie and sat on his bed. Asad thinks to himself that " what truth she was talking about then and what ayaan was sayin... It's so confusing btw why do I care ms. Farooqui left and I don't think that she will return, so when I won't be meeting her then what's the point of taking tension. " after sometime in distress he thought again " no I should meet her and clarify everything... "

Asad: why do I care?

Asad threw his shoes away and dilshad came in and for the first time she saw him throwing things here and there despite being a clean freak, now she understood well that there is some serious problem.

Asad: aa...ami... Wo actually I didn't saw u.

Dildshad: asad ... Kya hoa.
( asad what happened)

Asad: kuch nahi, bus work load boht tha aaj.
(Nothing, just because of work load)

Dilshad: ye company jab se start hoi hai tum me har point ko itminaan se solve kiya hai,
tum apni Ami se jhoot nahi Bol saktay.
(U have been calm in everything related to this company since it started,
U can't lie to ur ammi)

Asad: wo ... Actually...

Dilshad: kya hoa, apni ami ko nahi batao gay?
(What happened, won't u tell ur ammi)

Asad: ami agar aap kisi se jhoot bolo, kisi ka bharoosa todo tu Sab kuch theek kaisay
kiya na sakta Hai?
(Ami when u lie to someone, break ones trust, then how can we solve it.)

Dilshad: asad baroosa boht nazook dor hoti hai ek pal mein toot jata hai aur uss ko dobara
hasil Kernay k liye bht arsa lag jaata hai.
(Asad trust is something which is very delicate, only a moment is required to break
It, but regain it, a long time utilized)

Asad: aur agar wo jaan booj ker na kiya ho?
(And if all this is unintentional?)

Dilshad: tu pair ek mouqa har kisi ka haq hai, uss muqay ko istamaal Karo aur Phil uss ko
hath se Janay na do.
(Then one chance is everyone's right, utilize that chance and then never let it go.)
Asad smiled at her and took her hand in his and then kissed them.

Asad: shukriya! Kaisay aap ke paas har sawal ka jawab hota hai?
(Thank u! How can u have answers to all Qs)

Dilshad: maa hoon... Aur ek maa sab jaanti hai.
(I am a mother... And mother knows everything.)

Dilshad(naughtily): waisay kon hai?
(By the way, who is ?)

Asad: kon... Kon hai?
(Who... Who is?)

Dilshad: wahi jiss ka baroosa torda hai.
(Whoms trust is broken ..)

Asad(blushed): koi nahi, wo hai ek client tha uss k baray mein pooch raha tha.
(No body, I was asking about a client)

Dilshad: ooo acha...
(Ooo okk ...)

Asad: jee... Aap chalain mein dinner pe join kerta hon.
(Yes... U go I will join u on dinner)

Dilshaad smiled and left while asad felt relaxed after talking to her.

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This is part 1 of this chapter I will upload next part later.
Thank u hope u liked.

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Previous = CHAPTER-8

Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago
nilusoni thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
asya both are confused and upset with revelations
but both got help and advice
excited for asya meet
plz pm me for updates
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey super update yaar zoya bohot hi pareshaan hai aur asad bhi awww n he is blushing continue soon 😛
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok pehli baat to ofcourse i missed ths story so much
nd i missed u too nd i did leave a scrap 4 u
aur tumne reply bhi ni kiya *pout*
anyways update mere dil me utar gayi
seriously jiju's words affected me a lot
i loved the talk between jiju nd zoya...specially vo pal ke baare me
thumbs up girl
neatly penned nd asad blushing awe! 😕
loved how dilshaad adviced him
waiting 4 part 2
bring it on
aur fir gayab mat hona
u have lots to catch up on my stories :)
I WANT UR COMMENTS ND LIKES
MISSED U YAr
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey i am just stared to read this story😊 and thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey super update yaar zoya bohot hi pareshaan hai aur asad bhi awww n he is blushing continue soon 😛

Thank u so much...
NnonaA thumbnail
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Ok pehli baat to ofcourse i missed ths story so much
nd i missed u too nd i did leave a scrap 4 u
aur tumne reply bhi ni kiya *pout*
anyways update mere dil me utar gayi
seriously jiju's words affected me a lot
i loved the talk between jiju nd zoya...specially vo pal ke baare me
thumbs up girl
neatly penned nd asad blushing awe! 😕
loved how dilshaad adviced him
waiting 4 part 2
bring it on
aur fir gayab mat hona
u have lots to catch up on my stories :)
I WANT UR COMMENTS ND LIKES
MISSED U YAr

Sue my update was not that heart touching
but ur comment was more heart warming ... Love u yaar
Sorry for not replying and commenting, yar I was gone on my college camp...
And guess what I completed my high school, now I am looking for a university.
And will read ur stories after dinner because if I started now them mama will call me
Aur phir maza nahi aata.
One again love u "hug"
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA


Sue my update was not that heart touching
but ur comment was more heart warming ... Love u yaar
Sorry for not replying and commenting, yar I was gone on my college camp...
And guess what I completed my high school, now I am looking for a university.
And will read ur stories after dinner because if I started now them mama will call me
Aur phir maza nahi aata.
One again love u "hug"


nahi yar it was heart touching..maybe the words were :)
wow! Yar! Mera to ek sal aur baki he
best of luck 4 future nd m waiting 4 ur comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Confusion hi confusion hai
Dilshad & anwer told asad & Zoya what to do. She guessed it & asked him who she is. Looking forward for their meeting
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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