SaHil TS Finding a Destination *sequel to Searching for Answers* Pt 3

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

OK. So I just read all three parts and it was just fab! I especially loved the kiss and the passion and the confusion! That was just superb! Loved it, and cant wait to get to the next part. I have a lot going on right now, but will promise to read it at my earliest convenience. It was really good!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: minnie2308
😆😆it was amusing as well as passionate.

I had so much fun reading this.

👏⭐️

Thank you 😆 I am glad u enjoyed reading it! I had fun writing it lol

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
really well written..👍🏼

Thanks 😳 I am glad u liked it 😊

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Ramlath
Very nice

Thanks! I am glad u liked it!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: mahwash22
Review of Part 3:

Here we go for another beautiful and anticipating read. ❤️

I love the way you have described the morning! Ah, the bliss <3 Hearing Sanam's words really touched me. It gives an idea of how difficult it must be for her as well knowing the truth.

"It would hurt him a lot, but she would be prepared to hold him and make him strong! She would not let him crumble!"

Bravo! That line made me shiver - by what Aahil might do once finding out the truth and by Sanam being there for him on every step.

I will continue to say this no matter how many times I've said it already - I love your way of writing. I love the way you have with words. Yet again, I need to learn this! 👍🏼

This update was an emotional yet romantic! You had me crying. It was so beautiful, Esha!

You my darling! You are so wonderful and I'm so excited to go and read the other update.😳

*Quickly goes on to read..*

Thanks love! ❤️ I wanted to show how much Sanam wants to tell him the truth! How much its hurting her as well! I love the morning after (even tho they didn't do it the night before 😆) Its usually beautiful! I wanted Sanam to reflect alone and convey her feelings cuz I usually tend to write Aahil's POV more 😆 I am glad that came across 😳 I myself am scared to know what will happen! Rage? Pain? Devastation? Or a mix of it all? 😭 But it will be really heartbreaking! Aahil doesnt deserve the pain! But like Sanam says... Its inevitable! No matter what, Sanam will def be there to support him! As usual your review brought a smile on my face!! Thank you so much for your kind words 🤗 I am really glad that u enjoy reading my work! Thats why I write and share my work! Yes go read the other one lol and hope u like it!! 😳

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: najma123
Brilliant! Is this some kind of trilogy? Coz, I am loving it a lot...

Thanks! Yes, its a trilogy of three shots lol I am glad u liked it! Thanks again!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
Loved the last part! Will go over to the next thread to see the fallout from Sanam's revelation.

Thanks! Yes do read the next part and lmk what you thought of it! Thanks again!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
OK. So I just read all three parts and it was just fab! I especially loved the kiss and the passion and the confusion! That was just superb! Loved it, and cant wait to get to the next part. I have a lot going on right now, but will promise to read it at my earliest convenience. It was really good!

Thanks Mandy!!! Its a real compliment coming from an awesome writer like you! Yes do read the next part when you get the time! Hope u like it! Thanks again for taking the time to read and commenting! It really means a lot! Hope u update ABA soon! Cant wait!!