SaHil TS Finding a Destination *sequel to Searching for Answers* Pt 3

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JShukla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Nice part...although I don't understand why sanam is not telling him about the swap

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

This is so beautiful..!!
Loved it..
miss saahil a lot..!!
Pls update soon.:)

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Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Wow. Great! Part 2 with ALMOST SEX! Haye... Brilliant/ Update soon. Can you PM?

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Pragya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Eshaaa!!!! I don't know why I feel like screaming after reading this 2nd part 😆 My feelings are all over the place and I feel like bursting out any moment... 😭😆

This was GORGEOUSLY HOT!!! ☺️ I Mean it was just a kiss, but it felt like A LOT MORE THAN THAT! No seriously like A LOT MOREEE!!! 😆 It was more sexier than the sex actually! Gahh! Just reading these both give you such chills!

The intensity just killed me! And the way he HOLDS her does something to me, The way he looks at her does something more... 😆 I can quote almost ALL the para in this part. It actually was their first kiss and they so wanted to take it to the next base.. 😆

Why isn't she telling him man?!! I feel bad for Aahil. He so wants to talk it out not even fighting just to talk it out! The emotions and the turmoil he is in was just brilliant to read Esha! You were excellent!! How he wants her to be in his arms forever, how he wants her to feel the same, how he is still confused does she really loves him still or not, brilliant, just plain brilliant!! ⭐️

The ambience was just perfect. And I just loved how they ended their night in each other'a arms :')) SERENE!!

Can't wait for the next part, the last one! She has to tell him now! And please make both of them cry a lot like A LOT while hugging and kissing and...you may add other things 😆

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: flora212
Ah that was absolutely hot 😛😉 but really just let sanam tell him 😡😆 Stop being idiot cvs 🥱😆 ok I read both the parts and it was brilliant

Thank you 😉 You will in the next part why I didn't make her tell him the truth in this part. If this TS was set in a AU, def I would make Sanam tell him but since I left it in the QH world, I wanted to go a little in tandem with the storyline. I realized that Sanam has so many opportunities but doesn't tell him. It frustrates me. But why doesnt she? I feel like she needs a final nail in the coffin, n it has nothing to do with S2 cuz she knows Aahil loves only her but it has to do with Aahil himself. The next part should clear it up. She will def tell him the truth in my story, but how n why you have to keep reading to find out! I also wanted to show that without the truth, they can have passion but their relationship wont go anywhere. I for one don't want them to consummate at this point on the show either. Thats why I showed that Aahil stops himself from going any further, cuz this is not just physical intimacy for him, but much more. There has to be a breaking point for him and it will come. On the show, they are hiding everything from him lol god knows how he will take in all that info together! The cvs use dragging as an excuse, saying its a daily soap, they need to extend things, but here I did the same. I prolonged her telling the truth and yet was able to provide SaHil scenes 😆 I am not saying that I am better than the cvs but seriously idk why they cant show Sahil in the same frame, other than eye locks and catch fall lol miss SaHil so much! Thank you so much n keep reading! Hope u like the next part! 😉😊

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Hey guys 😳 before I reply to the other comments, I see a legit question being asked a few times so let me clear that for u guys. I am glad u asked and I was kinda hoping someone would lol So why doesnt Sanam tell him the truth? I realized that Sanam has so many opportunities but doesn't tell him. It frustrates me too! Why doesnt she? I feel like she needs a final nail in the coffin, n it has nothing to do with S2 cuz she knows Aahil loves only her but it has to do with Aahil himself. He needs to reach his breaking point and she needs to see that. She knows that he is hurt but she needs to see the extent. It will force her to tell the truth.

If you read Sanam's inner thoughts, you can see that she is conflicted as well, she wants to tell him the truth now! But she also feels that its not the right time. Sanam hurting too and wants things to be perfect! But is unable to decide. Plus in that exact moment, she just wants to be with her husband. She is human. For once she is a little selfish and is letting her emotions rule. 😆 There is really no excuse for her not telling the truth, but maybe she needs that extra push. But she will tell him the truth for sure! She has to! Also knowing Aahil, at this point yes he is saying that he is all ears, but if she just blurts out that she has a twin, he might have trouble believing her. There is still a lack of trust between them. He needs to see Seher and thats why Sanam was angry that he tricked her. She wants to tell him the truth, but in a way where he has no option but to believe it. The next part should clear it up. She will def tell him the truth in my story, but how n why you have to keep reading to find out! 😉

If this TS was set in a AU, def I would make Sanam tell him but since I left it in the QH world, I wanted to go a little in tandem with the storyline. 😆 I also wanted to show that without the truth, they can have passion but their relationship wont go anywhere. I for one dont want them to consummate at this point on the show either. Thats why I showed that Aahil stops himself from going any further, cuz this is not just physical intimacy for him, but much more. There has to be a breaking point for him and it will come. On the show, they are hiding everything from him lol god knows how he will take in all that info together! 😭

I have to say this... I am so glad that instead of just reading n saying its good, you guys are questioning and giving real feedback! 🤗 I really appreciate that! I love when you ask a question or point out a specific part you liked! I ask for it all the time! 😆 And it means a lot. This was one question I had while writing too! I am glad u guys asked! I hope this clears things up a bit in regards to my story. We all want the truth to be told to Aahil! But lets see what they do on the show lol The list of hidden things get longer n longer lol Anyway if you guys have any more questions, plz ask me! I write for u and your opinion really matters! 😳 I hope that despite the slight frustration over Sanam not telling the truth, you guys have enjoyed the update! The next part should hopefully make things a lot clearer. Thanks for all these wonderful comments and keep them coming! It feels awesome to read n reply to each one! Hope u guys like the next part! Lots of love, Esha ❤️❤️

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
Eshaaa!!!! I don't know why I feel like screaming after reading this 2nd part 😆 My feelings are all over the place and I feel like bursting out any moment... 😭😆
This was GORGEOUSLY HOT!!! ☺️ I Mean it was just a kiss, but it felt like A LOT MORE THAN THAT! No seriously like A LOT MOREEE!!! 😆 It was more sexier than the sex actually! Gahh! Just reading these both give you such chills!

The intensity just killed me! And the way he HOLDS her does something to me, The way he looks at her does something more... 😆 I can quote almost ALL the para in this part. It actually was their first kiss and they so wanted to take it to the next base.. 😆

Why isn't she telling him man?!! I feel bad for Aahil. He so wants to talk it out not even fighting just to talk it out! The emotions and the turmoil he is in was just brilliant to read Esha! You were excellent!! How he wants her to be in his arms forever, how he wants her to feel the same, how he is still confused does she really loves him still or not, brilliant, just plain brilliant!! ⭐️

The ambience was just perfect. And I just loved how they ended their night in each other'a arms :')) SERENE!!

Can't wait for the next part, the last one! She has to tell him now! And please make both of them cry a lot like A LOT while hugging and kissing and...you may add other things 😆

Pragya 🤗 I swear I love ur comments!!! They are so funny and sweet at the same time 😆 You know how we both feel about Jallad Jin ☺️ Lmao I really enjoyed writing this part cuz IMO, the kiss and stuff that comes before sex is hotter 😉 Thats when the passion builds up. Please don't burst or cry, there is more to come 😉😆 I am glad that this had the intended effect lol I swear my feels were all of the place writing it 😆 I wanted their first kiss to be special! I wanted it to have the right amount of emotions and passion and I am glad it came across like that! From your reaction I can tell it did 😉 I swear these two bring out a very different side of me ☺️ Espcially Aahil 😉 It would have been so hot to actually see them do this lol But its Indian tv lol I let my imagination run a bit wild with this one😉 They def wanted to take it further but ugh why wont she tell him 😆 But don't worry she will tell him lol I didnt want them to consummate at this point (same on the show) but when they do it will be super intense and super sexy ☺️ I feel bad for Aahil too! He is trying so hard but nothing is working out for him! He def wanted to talk but things took a different turn lol I want to see him bring out his frustration on the show as well! I decided to leave the end on a peaceful note there. I would love to see them just lay in each others arms. They have been apart too long 😭 Thank you once again for this awesome comment!!! 🤗I am glad that I was able to show Aahil's emotions and turmoil cuz it was hard as he is going through a lot! I swear I felt for him while writing! Do u see how involved I get with his feelings 😆 Your words are making me do a happy dance lol I promise to add those things after she tells him the truth 😉 Till then you have go wait 😆 I will try n update soon n someone else I know has some updating to do herself 😉😆

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
I feel so sorry for Aahil! He needs to do some of his own investigation and stop relying on Sanam. In this age of the internet, I don't know why it doesn't exist for these characters. :(

Loved the chapter and their closeness. Now for a little honesty.

Well as for the internet only Sanam, Seher and Rehan can make use of it. Maybe find old newspaper clippings or other info. Maybe track down Imran? But Aahil doesn't have much he can do from the internet. He would not even think about looking up his father. What can he possibly get from online? The swap is only known by Razia and Dilshad and now Rehan. There is no info online lol But thank you so much! I am glad u liked it! I promise she will be honest to him soon, at least in my story, idk about the show lol thanks again!