SaHil TS Finding a Destination *sequel to Searching for Answers* Pt 3 - Page 5

Originally posted by: flora212

Are you gonna update now esha? 😛

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Part 2 - Review

Esha! You're totally on the roll! 😆

I loved this following line. Especially that she got through his faade where else most didn't.

He was truly a genuine person. Latif had managed to see through his tough facade while most had failed.

Of course if the man next to her wasn't in such a foul mood, it would have been perfect!

I was smirking all the while they were seated inside the car. Oh, Sanam.. You have no idea what your dear shouhar has planned for you.

Oh the excitement. 😳

Wait... Excited mein adda, excited mein edda, excited mein edda... 😆

Right. Focus.. I have a thing where I get easily distracted.

I loved how you described the cottage and the fact that you remembered the flowers which reminded him of his mother. It was a nice touch.

OH MY GOD. What did I just read? My God, this was so passionate and lovely to read. I almost had tears in my eyes how beautiful the part was written. ☺️

I don't know why but this line made me smile. I thought it was a nice romantic touch to it.

Aahil pulled back but made no move to pull himself away from her body. Instead he moved his face to the side and lightly brushed his stubbled jaw across her soft cheeks as she innocently clutched his back, rubbing her fingers over it, making his breath hitch. Miss Dhabewaali knew exactly how to handle him.

And he wants her! He needs her! He needs to feel her and show her just how much he truly loves her.

He carried her into the small bedroom which needed no lighting. The moonlight spilling from the window was enough and gave it the appearance of a painting. But what made it even more ethereal was the woman before him.

Esha, my darling. Have I ever told you how much I love the way you have with your words. I've got to learn this. ❤️

The moonlight spilling from the window was enough and gave it the appearance of a painting. But what made it even more ethereal was the woman before him.

I really loved the ending of the update. I loved how compassioned he was toward Sanam. All he ever wants to feel her in his arms for the night.

HJust the two of them! Awww...

I absolutely loved this, Esha. You did a damn good job. I'm becoming a bigger fan of your work each day. ❤️🤗

Now, I can go back to the excitement.. Excited mein edda, excited mein edda for the next update. 😆

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Very Nice..👏

Originally posted by: zyaa

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Originally posted by: fanraya

So romantic, Including had tears in my eyes, part 2 is amazing, absolutely beautiful, so wish something like this happen in the show too, seems like we will never get to see Sahil again.. You are an amazing writer, great job.. Loved it so much, touched my heart. please do update soon, can not wait for part 3 , I really hope she tells him the truth...he deserves to know...

😆😆it was amusing as well as passionate.

Review of Part 3:

Here we go for another beautiful and anticipating read. ❤️

I love the way you have described the morning! Ah, the bliss <3 Hearing Sanam's words really touched me. It gives an idea of how difficult it must be for her as well knowing the truth.

"It would hurt him a lot, but she would be prepared to hold him and make him strong! She would not let him crumble!"

Bravo! That line made me shiver - by what Aahil might do once finding out the truth and by Sanam being there for him on every step.

I will continue to say this no matter how many times I've said it already - I love your way of writing. I love the way you have with words. Yet again, I need to learn this! 👍🏼

This update was an emotional yet romantic! You had me crying. It was so beautiful, Esha!

You my darling! You are so wonderful and I'm so excited to go and read the other update.😳

*Quickly goes on to read..*