SaHil TS Finding a Destination *sequel to Searching for Answers* Pt 3

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

amazing...

loved it...

thnxxx for pm...

cont soon...

do pm me

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mahwash22
ESHA 👏
You are way too awesome 👍🏼
I loved it!! So glad that you came up with thisl I actually loved reading this. It had humor, passion and love.

"Well I guess we cant refuse "His Grace", now can we?" Sanam mocked in good humor and Seher rolled her eyes. Rehan just chuckled and went to start the car.

Oh God! You had me rolling as I read about Sanam. I love it!! I love how she's so sarcastic and knows how her husband is going to react.

They were two lovers trying to fight for their love. But still she rather not face his royal ghussa, for this time she was afraid she would start laughing. He looked absolutely adorable trying to put up an act of anger! It was too cute! Sanam chuckled.

Can I just tell you, that I thought the same exact thought? God, I could totally see the cute expression Aahil would have.

For once he had reached out like a gentleman and had been rejected. But it definitely made him notice Miss. Dhabewaali even more than before! He wanted to make her understand!

I thought it was great that you brought back the flashback where they shared their first "night" together at his office. You did a fantastic job as describing the whole thing.

I'm a fan of the way you describe and the way you use your words. Wow!

He was ARI! But this time the girl with him was not just any girl! She was his Begum Jaan... Sanam Aahil Raza Ibrahim!

Yes! He is ARI! He can do anything! He wants his Sanam back. He wants his Begum Jaan to be with him.

Esha... You've left me wanting more. I need move. I crave for more. Now, you do know what your job is, right? 😆

Update soon, darling. I cannot wait to read what's going to happen next. Wonder where Aahil is taking her knowing the kind of smirk appeared on his face. ❤️

*Way too excited!*

Aww thanks for your wonderful words and such a long comment 🤗 It feels so nice to get such appreciation and feedback! 😳 I like that u pointed out your favorite parts as well! 😉 I loved writing Sanam here as much as Aahil. Now that she has taken the resolve to fight against Tanveer I wanted Miss Dhabewaali to make a comeback. I didn't want her to cry anymore, I want her to fight for her love and also fight with him 😆 She cant just let him get away with anything his wants 😉 So thats why I added the sarcasm and humor lol Glad u liked it 😆 Also only Sanam has the ability to make Aahil nervous, shocked and adorably angry. His pouty "I am angry" face is only for her 😆 I love whenever she catches him off guard lol he becomes one adorable Nawab That Mast Magan scene was on my mind for a while so I rewatched it along with many of their old scenes. Those were the best! So I decided to bring back the memories here too! Thank you so much once again 😳 I always look forward to urs n Pragya 's comments! You guys really encourage me alot 🤗 I have the next update ready and it should be up soon! It will be a little heated ☺️ Now you can interpret it how you want 😉 ARI def wants his Begum Jaan back but its tough! Lets see what he does next 😆 You will see where he takes her lol I am actually excited as well! Hope u like it and plz do keep the feedback coming! It means a lot to me! ❤️❤️

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canoodle

@canoodle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I adored this part, and I love how you added the office scene from the past into this. You did an amazing job describing Aahil's emotions too! I wonder where he is taking her? Update soon and thanks for the PM.

-Meera

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
can't wait to see what Aahil has planned. hopefully, sanam will tell him the truth?

You will see in the next part! I will update very soon! Keep reading and thanks for commenting!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: fanraya
Wow this is incredible, so lovely, great job, please do write soon, I cannot wait😳

Hey thank you so much 😳 I will try and update real soon! Keep reading and commenting as it means a lot to me 😊

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Esha beautiful update

Hey Suku! Thank you so much! I am glad u liked it! I will update soon so read it n tell me what you think of it!!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ashiii333
amazing...
loved it...
thnxxx for pm...
cont soon...
do pm me

Thanks! I am glad u liked it! I will def pm you the next part! Keep reading n commenting! Thanks again!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: canoodle
I adored this part, and I love how you added the office scene from the past into this. You did an amazing job describing Aahil's emotions too! I wonder where he is taking her? Update soon and thanks for the PM.
-Meera

Hey Meera,

Thanks! I am glad that you liked it! The office scene will remain one of my most favorite! One of their first "nights" together lol it was really beautiful during the song and funny in the morning! Those days were the best for SaHil! Their chemistry was on fire! I really like writing Aahil's perspective and emotions and I am glad that came across. It was fun writing about his inner turmoil and his feelings! As for where he is taking her, you will see that in the next part! I will try to update real soon and your welcome anytime. I will pm you the next part too! Thanks again!

-Esha

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Ah that was absolutely hot 😛😉 but really just let sanam tell him 😡😆 Stop being idiot cvs 🥱😆 ok I read both the parts and it was brilliant

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

I feel so sorry for Aahil! He needs to do some of his own investigation and stop relying on Sanam. In this age of the internet, I don't know why it doesn't exist for these characters. :(

Loved the chapter and their closeness. Now for a little honesty.

Edited by darkice7_12 - 10 years ago