SaHil TS Finding a Destination *sequel to Searching for Answers* Pt 3

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: navk
awesome update

Hey thanks! Keep reading!!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: najma123
Wow. Great! Part 2 with ALMOST SEX! Haye... Brilliant/ Update soon. Can you PM?

Thanks! Yes they almost had sex lol But I feel the truth needs to be out and they need to trust one another before taking their relationship to the next step. It means a lot to both! But after that... They can get as passionate as they want lol I will update soon n pm u as well lol Thanks again!!

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

My heart aches for Aahil and I wish Sanam would just tell him about Seher! Sanam doesn't have to let him know about Tanveer but just about Razia kidnapping her and Seher acting as her! Please make Aahil learn the truth soon (as in, the next update). Please update soon!

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Esha🤗 The kiss, magical and so romantic *sighs* it would be a treat to see sahil speninding some quality time with each other alone away from everyone. You write so incredible well. I just cant tell you how much I love this story. IT IS THE BEST my dear

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Woah that was really good

Love the way you describe the scenes and characters

Ahil sanam I couldnkmahinevthe whole thing, so much passion!

Great job

Please pm your other work I would love to read it and if you're pm-ing updates to this story

Thanks

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

So romantic, Including had tears in my eyes, part 2 is amazing, absolutely beautiful, so wish something like this happen in the show too, seems like we will never get to see Sahil again.. You are an amazing writer, great job.. Loved it so much, touched my heart. please do update soon, can not wait for part 3 , I really hope she tells him the truth...he deserves to know...

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Part 2 - Review

Esha! You're totally on the roll! 😆

I loved this following line. Especially that she got through his faade where else most didn't.

He was truly a genuine person. Latif had managed to see through his tough facade while most had failed.

Of course if the man next to her wasn't in such a foul mood, it would have been perfect!

I was smirking all the while they were seated inside the car. Oh, Sanam.. You have no idea what your dear shouhar has planned for you.

Oh the excitement. 😳

Wait... Excited mein adda, excited mein edda, excited mein edda... 😆

Right. Focus.. I have a thing where I get easily distracted.

I loved how you described the cottage and the fact that you remembered the flowers which reminded him of his mother. It was a nice touch.

OH MY GOD. What did I just read? My God, this was so passionate and lovely to read. I almost had tears in my eyes how beautiful the part was written. ☺️

I don't know why but this line made me smile. I thought it was a nice romantic touch to it.

Aahil pulled back but made no move to pull himself away from her body. Instead he moved his face to the side and lightly brushed his stubbled jaw across her soft cheeks as she innocently clutched his back, rubbing her fingers over it, making his breath hitch. Miss Dhabewaali knew exactly how to handle him.

And he wants her! He needs her! He needs to feel her and show her just how much he truly loves her.

He carried her into the small bedroom which needed no lighting. The moonlight spilling from the window was enough and gave it the appearance of a painting. But what made it even more ethereal was the woman before him.

Esha, my darling. Have I ever told you how much I love the way you have with your words. I've got to learn this. ❤️

The moonlight spilling from the window was enough and gave it the appearance of a painting. But what made it even more ethereal was the woman before him.

I really loved the ending of the update. I loved how compassioned he was toward Sanam. All he ever wants to feel her in his arms for the night.

Just the two of them! Awww...

I absolutely loved this, Esha. You did a damn good job. I'm becoming a bigger fan of your work each day. ❤️🤗

Now, I can go back to the excitement.. Excited mein edda, excited mein edda for the next update. 😆

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
My heart aches for Aahil and I wish Sanam would just tell him about Seher! Sanam doesn't have to let him know about Tanveer but just about Razia kidnapping her and Seher acting as her! Please make Aahil learn the truth soon (as in, the next update). Please update soon!

Def you will see that in the next two parts! I will update today! Hope u like it!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Esha🤗 The kiss, magical and so romantic *sighs* it would be a treat to see sahil speninding some quality time with each other alone away from everyone. You write so incredible well. I just cant tell you how much I love this story. IT IS THE BEST my dear

Thanks Suku 🤗 I would love to see any SaHil moments on the show 😆 I am glad u liked it! SaHil always bring out a different side of me! They define passion and junoon! I will update today! Hope u enjoy reading n def leave feedback! Would love to know what u thought of it!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Woah that was really good

Love the way you describe the scenes and characters

Ahil sanam I couldnkmahinevthe whole thing, so much passion!

Great job

Please pm your other work I would love to read it and if you're pm-ing updates to this story

Thanks

Thank u so much! I am glad u liked it! I will def pm! Thanks again!!