AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 76

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Loved this story so muh
Finally love wins
Amazing ending
I love ur writing
U should write more on asya

Thanks san
Aww thank you I'll surely write more

Originally posted by: ayat20

Nice part

Liked it

Finally truth won

Thanks glad you liked it

Originally posted by: jas91

fantastic ending Ashi

totally entertaining

Ayra part was nice

but I guess 4 wrapping d story u made Humi forgive Ayaan quickly😆

when Niakh part started I got scared ki how Asad nodded his head

but than got 2 know it was just dream

D revelation part was very well written👏Billi got slap pe slap😆

& in d end Asad proposed her & Zoe accepted😃

d ending wid light convo was also sweet

btw what was d reason that Billi was blackmailing Naj wid or did I missed it?

Overall I really enjoyed this story Ashi

I m just sad that u ended it so soon I wish u would have wrote it as planned Khair

Wish u a very happy New year dear🤗

Hope u have a great yr ahead

Thanks sweety
Hehe not really yar actually I had planned a talk between them when I had wrote the story but with the time I totally forgot about them and didn't wrote their parts when I had completed tthis ending I realised they are remaining so I just wrote in short but humi was planned to forgive ayaan soon

Ha yeah I made it that way to have sum fun 😆

Tanveer deserved those
slaps
Oh yes you missed that baby I have wrote in that very update that tanveer was planning to threaten and blackmail najma about her bro like she will harm him
I too wished to do it so the hints of many more tracks were in chapters like zoya father truth that nightmare rehan naj but I am helpless hmm I should think of sequel as soon I get time that shall start from this ending only

A big wala hug and happy new year 🤗

Originally posted by: jas91

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chal aa gayi na main ab suna mat😳

<div>aur aake konsa teer maara tune story khatam kardi bas

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apni hi story miss nahi karegi & what about us hame bhi nahi😕

<em>Billi ka track kon panda chahega 🤣

Acha baba nhy sunati 😆
Hehe pr sbka update ka wait to khtm kr diya na
Krungi jb free hongy abhi to free hy nhy hun sochne k liye... tum sbko esp tmhe bhut miss krungy pr koi bt nhy ab mai tery story pr a kr tjh se milungy free hongy na khud ki stories se 😉
Han shayd is liye sb ne ending mangy 😉 kidding billi ka track to nhy pr kuch r zroor tha

Originally posted by: heemasomani

It was fantastic end

loved it

will miss this story

Thanks dear
Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: ksen

nice ending

loved it

thanks for the pm

Thanks dear
Glad you like it

Beautiful ending for an amazing story..

Lovely update
Tanveer truth out. Liked dilshad scene With her. Confession was nice. Dilshad got to know abt their plan & was shocked. A beautiful story comes to an end. Thanks for PM. All the best for your future

Awesome Update Dear👏😊