AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 75

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part
Liked it
Finally truth won
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic ending Ashi
totally entertaining
Ayra part was nice
but I guess 4 wrapping d story u made Humi forgive Ayaan quickly😆
when Niakh part started I got scared ki how Asad nodded his head
but than got 2 know it was just dream
D revelation part was very well written👏 Billi got slap pe slap😆
& in d end Asad proposed her & Zoe accepted😃
d ending wid light convo was also sweet
btw what was d reason that Billi was blackmailing Naj wid or did I missed it?
Overall I really enjoyed this story Ashi
I m just sad that u ended it so soon I wish u would have wrote it as planned Khair
Wish u a very happy New year dear🤗
Hope u have a great yr ahead
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Asshi...



le mai agye pr sometime se koi r gayab tha
bs na poch cheating krne ka hy kam reh gya h mjhe likhne ka dil hy nhy krta upar se tests...
uff it was base for new track but now think it as rubbish 😉
yes she will be exposed and story ended I will miss it sometime if got time ;)
update by tomorrow

chal aa gayi na main ab suna matEmbarrassed

aur aake konsa teer maara tune story khatam kardi basOuch
apni hi story miss nahi karegi & what about us hame bhi nahi😕
Billi ka track kon panda chahega 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was fantastic end
loved it
will miss this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice ending
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow beautiful update and ending loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Tbh

Im gonna miss this story
I totally loved it
It was so beautiful
🤗


Thanks dear
Am glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

A beautiful end to a beautiful journey

Loved the update
Finally everything falls back into place in the lives of ayra and asya
Thanks for such an amazing story dear
And wish u a very happy new year😊


Thanks muskan
Am glad you liked the story and ending
Thanks same to you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

A lovely update and a beautiful story..

A fitting end to evil.

I will miss this story..n miss u too.

Have a great year ahead ..happy new year.😊


Thanks dear am glad you liked it whole
Aww I will too miss you all but don't miss me sweets am planning a comeback soon with new asya story once I got freed 😛
Thanks same to you sweety
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Awesome..
Loved it..
Plz give us epilogue...
Happy New year


Thanks dear
Am glad you liked it
Sorry but can't give epilogue as I never planned any also maybe i give the sequel of story

Thanks and same to you

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