AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#741

Nice part

Liked it

Finally truth won

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#742

fantastic ending Ashi

totally entertaining

Ayra part was nice

but I guess 4 wrapping d story u made Humi forgive Ayaan quickly😆

when Niakh part started I got scared ki how Asad nodded his head

but than got 2 know it was just dream

D revelation part was very well written👏 Billi got slap pe slap😆

& in d end Asad proposed her & Zoe accepted😃

d ending wid light convo was also sweet

btw what was d reason that Billi was blackmailing Naj wid or did I missed it?

Overall I really enjoyed this story Ashi

I m just sad that u ended it so soon I wish u would have wrote it as planned Khair

Wish u a very happy New year dear🤗

Hope u have a great yr ahead

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: Asshi...

le mai agye pr sometime se koi r gayab tha
bs na poch cheating krne ka hy kam reh gya h mjhe likhne ka dil hy nhy krta upar se tests...
uff it was base for new track but now think it as rubbish 😉
yes she will be exposed and story ended I will miss it sometime if got time ;)
update by tomorrow

chal aa gayi na main ab suna mat

aur aake konsa teer maara tune story khatam kardi bas

apni hi story miss nahi karegi & what about us hame bhi nahi😕

Billi ka track kon panda chahega 🤣

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Heema Somani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#744

It was fantastic end

loved it

will miss this story

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ksen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#745

nice ending

loved it

thanks for the pm

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ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

#746

wow beautiful update and ending loved it thank you for pm.

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Asshi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
Tbh
Im gonna miss this story
I totally loved it
It was so beautiful
🤗

Thanks dear
Am glad you liked it

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Asshi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
A beautiful end to a beautiful journey
Loved the update
Finally everything falls back into place in the lives of ayra and asya
Thanks for such an amazing story dear
And wish u a very happy new year😊

Thanks muskan
Am glad you liked the story and ending
Thanks same to you dear

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Asshi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
A lovely update and a beautiful story..
A fitting end to evil.

I will miss this story..n miss u too.

Have a great year ahead ..happy new year.😊

Thanks dear am glad you liked it whole
Aww I will too miss you all but don't miss me sweets am planning a comeback soon with new asya story once I got freed 😛
Thanks same to you sweety