AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: Asshi...

nhy re pr pehle mjhe time to mile

😆 Ye bohat gehri samasya he iska samadhaan dhundna hoga humey 🤣

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm.

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

hugs Ashi🤗

where u go gayab

achanak jati hai phir aa jaati hai

tune toh regular short updt promise kiye the

par yeh toh cheating hai😆

but khair I understand that u'll b busy

nothing much in it

Billi ki antar atma bhi hai lol that cracked me😆

but Billi d real ko kon samjhaye so atma pyari chali gayi

she played her game well alearting Dillu taki Asad inkaar na kar paye

Was it Najma joh Billi ko dance main push kar rahi thi?

Khair soon as precap says she'll b exposed😃

btw I missed Asya in d part

Ashi plz updt soonish this time😳

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#724

I realised maine last part bhi nahi pda tha lol😆

so Asya had a sweet scene there

Zoya taking care of his wounds 😳

there pillow fight & mobile as gift jo Zoe ko mila was enjoyable 2 read😃

udhar Najma almost got 2 know about Billi & Razo but Rehan ruined it idiot

ab aage ka toh hamne pad hi liya 😆

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice update dear
Tanveer played her cards of fear in front of dilshad. She assured her that nothing happens this time. Liked najma acts. Precap feels like blastic.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

thanks dear
update in some days completed writing

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: asyafreva
So finally tanveer is going to be exposed?
Good update...

yes she is and unfortunately that will be the end

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Hey..
The update was really nice..
Short but good..
Keep up your good work...
Loved the update very much.
Excited to know what will happen next..

thanks dear
glad you like it

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
It was a nice update though I agree it was short..
It was all about Tanveer...
No Asya
Liked Najma here...
N waiting for the precap to come now.

hehe next one big and last
asya will be in next one
it will come now

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Short update!
Bt thumbs up on writing part!
Nazma was potrayd well
give it a happy ending smhw yar
and then jb tym ho start a sequel

thanks suey
glad yoy liked it
it will have happy ending don't worry