AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111

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Hopeless end



Prologue



Mene o sanam tujhe pyar kiya...tune o sanam mujhe dhoka diya



Clouds scattered all over the sky with thunderstorm whining loudly, amidst them stood moon, shining dimly and sadly just like the way she was, looking at moon sadly yet shining dimly under the dim moonlight mostly covered by black clouds which actually spread in her life.



Sky cry at her pain and drops of rain fall from sky as tears fall from her eyes



She looked at sky and smiled sadly



You also understand my pain but then why didn't he? Didn't he ever think about my pain before doing all this?



And then she drowned back to today incident


She keep on looking at entrance hoping to see Asad arrival but there was none when 20 minutes more passed she become worried for him. She start to pace to and fro



Guests start to leave and she looked on, dejected



It had been hour and he didn't arrived when he has to come atleast 40 minutes before



Suddenly her phone rang she quickly reached to it and looked at the number, it was Asad she sigh in relief 'atleast he is fine'. She quickly pressed the recieve button and putting her phone on her ears, she speaked anxiously



"where are you Mr Khan? why didn't you reached till now? Do you know guest went away?..."she stopped as she hear Tanveer voice from other side



"Stop! stop Zoya! don't you think you talk too much?"



"you? What are you doing with Mr Khan phone?"she asked while everyone looked at her for any information on Asad



"ah! am not doing anything with his phone actually am doing something with him, am spending your wedding night with him"came her wicked reply



Her mouth opened in shocked, she felt heart broken but controlling herself and her tears she spoke



"do.n't! don't l..ie t.o m..e i know my A.sad okay"she choked while all looked confused seeing her condition



Tanveer laughed on other side and replied



"am not lying Zoya if you don't believe me then come yourself and see"



"where"she could't help but ask



"burned doll factory"



' Doll factory ' rang in her ears as if it contain many things for her, but she brushed off the thought. She cut the call and ran away in her red lehnga while Dilshad keep on calling her



It was cloudy outside, cold wind was blowing but she didn't bother she was more worried about the storm that was brewing in her heart and life as she walked inside the burned factory



She looked around to find Asad or Tanveer but didn't find anyone. As she walked around she walked on something, she stopped and took a step backward, for a look. It was an injection. She bend and took it in her hands. She threw it away as she felt it like poison for her, it didn't gave her positive vibes. She then looked around the burned factory which make her feel familiar.



She walked more and find a room. She opened the door and the scene that welcomed her shocked her to no extent



Her Asad on bed with that witch!



She felt heart broken as tears make their way


Just then Asad woke up and touched his head.



"Tanveer"Asad said



Tanveer froze for a moment and then looked at her, Asad followed Tanveer gaze and was shocked seeing Zoya while she ran away. Asad also ran behind her wearing his kurta while Tanveer smiled evily after all her plan was working



"Zoya"he shouted and stopped



She stopped and stood crying as she heared his shout



Asad walked infront of her slowly, her face showing pain



"am sorry Zoya but i ..."before he completed she shouted



"sorry for what Mr Khan? you what? That you could not stop your desires? Or you was forced to marry me so you took such step? If you was forced to marry me then you should have simply denied then destroying my life or you was so much weak that you could not even stop the marriage so you have to took such a drastic step?"



"Zo..."Asad tried to talk and touched her shoulder but was stopped by her as she showed him her palm, taking a step backward



"enough! Enough is enough MR Khan! you don't have the right to touch or talk with me and i don't want to even talk with a person like you"saying so she run away as her fake brave facade was breaking her already broken heart


Zoya walked in hall like a statue with no emotions just continuosely falling tears



Dilshad quickly ran towards her



"what hapened Zoya? are you okay? Where did you went? Did you find Asad?" Dilshad asked concernly touching her disheveled face with affection



She looked at her and break down at Asad name, she quickly hugged Dilshad breaking in her arms



"he decieved me...he decieved me phupi. He decieved me!"she cried in her arms while Dilshad looked shocked



"you are misunderstanding beta he must have been caught in some work he can't decieved you he lo..."Dilshad stopped as she broke the hug and speak



"no phupi he decieved me he...he..."she looked away in disgust while Dilshad gulped thinking what might had hapened



Zeenat came infront and touching her shoulder asked



"What hapened Zoya? Tell me what hapened?"she asked afraid to hear worst



She looked at them and replied



"what hapened? He ruined everything, he destroyed my dreams, he destroyed everything"



She saw Asad coming, she looked at him everyone followed her gaze and were shocked to see Asad dishevelled condition



Ayan went and asked Asad



"Bhai jan what hapened? Why is Zoya crying? And what hapened to you?"he asked worriedly



Just then Tanveer also walked in with messy hair and torn dress, draped in her dupatta



All looked on thinking what actually had hapened?



"Asad what is hapening here will some one tell me something?"Dilshad demanded answers



She stepped forward wiping her tears she can't be weak, atleast not infront of him she can't let him know how much damage he make in her heart, she can't let him laugh on her. He always hurt her make fun of her but not anymore atleast this time she will not let him know that he actually broke her and her heart and that she loved him to core, she just can't



"what is the need of any answers when you are seeing it yourself Ayan *pointing at Asad and Tanveer* they both ruined my life. Do you know what they did phupi? Do you know what your lovely Tanveer and Asad did?*sadly* How should I tell you? They did such a disgusting sin that i myself can't even think or tell. They are here after spenting there wedding night with each other, before our, no their wedding because they always liked each other so they must wanted to marry each other but on phupi insistence he got ready to marry me"her voice was loud and cleared and many gasps were heared on her each sentence



How much she tried how much she behave to be brave she couldn't stop her tears from falling. Zeenat quickly ran towards her side after recovering from the shock



"am fine appi am fine infact am happy that i didn't marry a person like him"she said trying to smile



She walked infront of Asad



"am happy that i didn't marry a person like you. A person who is double faced one side, he behaves to respect the traditions and other side he himself break all those links traditions and respect. Am happy that i didn't married such person but one thing Mr Khan, I will be never able to forgive you, don't think because I loved you and was ready to marry you or something, but because how much I seemed modern and am from New York I love my respect, my family respect, unlike you am feeling insulted and embarrased. Today everyone left the marriage hall without attending marriage but still they will talk about me, my appi and my phuppi whom i cared most unlike you"she said fighting with herself and him



Asad remained silent his red and teary eyes gazing floor beneath him



Dilshad came forward and faced Asad while Asad just gave a quick glance at her but then looked down



"how could you even think of doing this Asad today am disgusted of you when your father left, you and nazma were my pride everyone taunt me but i didn't budge because you guys were my world but today you crush my pride, you crush my world. Today, you proved it that you are your father son, upbringing might be best but it can't change the colour of blood"



everyone looked at her shocked while Asad is hurt



Dilshad then moved to Tanveer who behaved to be embarrased and ashamed. Tanveer was going to speak when Dilshad stopped her by showing her, her palm



"whatever, hapened you both are equally responsible for it. It's not only Asad fault but your's too after all a girl can easily stop a boy but what can I say to you. You was relative, far relative or should I say a stranger, I don't expect much from you"she smiled sadly on her own fate



Dilshad looked at heartbroken Zoya and inhaling deeply said



"let's go Zoya nothing is left here"



Dilshad grasps her hand and giving Asad and Tanveer one angry glare she walked away


****



INDEX



Chapter 1 - Painful night



Clearification



Chapter 2 - Denial



Chapter 3 - Please



Chapter 4 - Shocked



Chapter 5 - Left



Chapter 6 - Hope



Chapter 7 - Change of equations



Chapter 8 - Miserable life in words



Chapter 9 - Past hurts



Chapter 10 - Change of time (a)



Note



Chapter 11 - Change of time (b)



Chapter 12 - Messed up situations



Chapter 13 - One Step Close



Chapter 14 - The Fire of Conspiracies



Chapter 15(a) - Safe Under Your Wings



Promo - Who will be burnt in fire?


Chapter 15 (b) - Safe Under Your Wings


Chapter 16 - Reflection


Chapter 17 - When Happiness Surround! last part

Edited by Asshi... - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start👏😊

Glad dat Zoya showed Asad his aukaat on how hypocrite he is. He never believed her wen she said abt Tanveer brushing it off as her childish behavior. He even believed dat she exchanged Tanveer's blood wid chicken's blood or brought fake burning skins to frame Tanveer. I wanted Zoya to slap n leave Asad wen he degraded her by teln her to apologize to Tanveer. Can't he think for even once dat Zoya cud not unnecessarily doubt someone. I bet if Ayaan was in place of Asad then he wud have believed Zoya a long before n wud have successfully exposed Tanveer. But Asad treated Zoya like a brainless child. Bloody jerk😡.


I hope Zoya gives him hard time m never forgives him for d way he treated her horribly 4m day 1 claiming himself as gentleman n never trusting hef even a bit😡
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superb part and wonderful start
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nce prologue
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Nice start dear
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome start👏😊


Glad dat Zoya showed Asad his aukaat on how hypocrite he is. He never believed her wen she said abt Tanveer brushing it off as her childish behavior. He even believed dat she exchanged Tanveer's blood wid chicken's blood or brought fake burning skins to frame Tanveer. I wanted Zoya to slap n leave Asad wen he degraded her by teln her to apologize to Tanveer. Can't he think for even once dat Zoya cud not unnecessarily doubt someone. I bet if Ayaan was in place of Asad then he wud have believed Zoya a long before n wud have successfully exposed Tanveer. But Asad treated Zoya like a brainless child. Bloody jerk😡.


I hope Zoya gives him hard time m never forgives him for d way he treated her horribly 4m day 1 claiming himself as gentleman n never trusting hef even a bit😡

yeah right! But we can't go through misery so much because he is not at fault other than believing Tanveer! However he will be punished this much that he wil believe Zoya completely 😉
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Nice start... Plz pm me next update 😊

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superb part and wonderful start

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