ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

unres
well Awesome 1st Chapter
So, AsYa r like poles apart
Asad: OCD,Short tempered,likes black&better coffee
Zoya: Messy,Bubbly,likes milk&sugar coffee

But still both of them have something in common like:
both never got tired of fighting with eachother
both cannot bear eachother
both have a past(where U've disclose some of Asad)

the highlight of 1st Chapter is AsYa backfireing

about precap: Zoya to face warth of Angry Ahmed Khan

anyways
I'm loveing it❤️
CONTINUE SOON
also what about Najma? Izn't she in this story?

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Wonderful part loved it

Asya were amazing

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Heyy Swapno... 😊
Thanx alot for the P.M... 😛
I am so happy you started writing this story again...😃
It was a well written and good part...👏
ASYA 's as strict professionals...no sparks , no emotions first up...interesting...
I think Asad would really freak out...now because of the broken cup...but can i dream for a little more of past for Zoya to know about Asad during this...
Interesting start...
Continue soon..

Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago