ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1031

Amazing...
Finally confession n nikkah happened..
Yayyy...
But last chappy ...noo..
But I can understand... U r busy...will miss it...

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#1032

End...plzzz no...dony end this story so soon

Plzzz do write more.

Their married life plzzz

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aman

@aman93

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1033

read all chptrs in a go.. its a lovely story. hope u update soon

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1034

OMG like really

Swapno u r ending it just like that😲

Yeh toh ekdum rash abrupt ending hai

Gul ke jaise but u r no Gul phair aaisa kaise

Upar se quitting writing ur passion bhi that's a little too much but can b understandable knowing life is getting busy but is story ko toh ache se finish kar na plz

I think it deserves atleast an epilogue🤔

But coming back 2 updt it was Super fantastic👏👏

Both realised their Love 😃

Asad finally let his past go & accepted Shireen

I m happy 4 a fact they postponed their wedding cuz now they married wid love 😳

I just loved d confession it was so unique 1 of a kind😛

Just like Asya were in d story proposal was same absolutely serene❤️

They finally got married signing on dotted lines😊

btw didn't u PMd this time😕

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1035

Hey Sadia 🤗

I so so so sorry for late comment...was stuck with so many things...

finally you updated😊 but...you ended this story with this update😭...you made me feel happy & sad at the same time...

well let my emotions aside...

update was just superb...beautifully written...👏

Their convo through messages...that was so cute...such a cute way to know each other...I loved it so much in this story...

Dilshad-Asad part...thankew so much for it...I also always loved their relationship...

The confession...that was so magical...

Zoya's state was so beautifully written...how much she missed him...her aching loneliness...her cravings to see him...to be in his arms...how she demanded answer from him...& confessed...

Asad...he don't want to force her to accept his love...he want to wait till she realized...& I am so happy she realized & confessed...before they get married...

The two beautiful moments for me in this story...when they met after six years...& now this confession...so magical it was...

Loved this journey of AsYa...they finally joined this Dotted Lines...

But you know...I just wish you change your mind & give us...an epilogue...please...whenever you get time...

I will miss this story...& you too...

Love you...🤗

Edited by -Prinky- - 9 years ago

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1036

Sadia what ur really gone? And ths is over?
I didn't even get the pm for ths update untill i came here to demand an update
and the last chapter was so touching
dotted lines and the concept, ur way of writing,those songs with each update
i'll miss u
pls write na
kya hua? Y u left?
Ths was one of my fav. Story
aaj raat me firse padhungi

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1037

Awesome update
Beautifully written
Amazing story :)

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Mvinfff

@Mvinfff

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1038

You are awesome writer!! Thanks for the PM!

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#1039

Awesome & Cutest Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Going To Miss This Story...😔

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1040

Hey, hope you're well.

I reserved a comment for chapter 10, but it's been three months, and I won't do justice to it, so I thought I'd rather let you know how much of an amazing writer you are and how much I appreciate your unique narratives. Hope you would return with something beautiful as your previous fictions.

Keep Well!