ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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soumya.g

@soumya.g

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Nice. Chapter
asya hate eachother
but I will miss dilshaad in this story
what about nazma?
Anyway it is interesting ...looking forward to it... continue soon...
thanks for the pm

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

1st chapter is a very good..bang on...waiting for more.. .Asad and Zoya are like chalk and cheese...and I love them that way

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

finaly u updatd Dee🤗
so zoe is asads P.A...intrstng
asya bckrng asusual njyd it😃
so bth hav past...
precap nw zoe to gayi😕

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

OMG

Totally rocking

Usually I fell in love with kabi asya stories which r more like qh asya but ur asya sounds as crazy as qh asya

Totally fell in love with it

Can't wait to read next part

Thank u so much for the pm love

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Heyyy swapno...
U hv updtd !!!!!!!!!?

WOW..

It was nc start... Loved it...
Awesome updt...

Asya were in their ''fighting'' mode as always...
Miss them...
Ooohhh no... Muggg.., damn...
Now she has to face wd angry aak :-( :-(

Continue soon

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Thanks for PM.

It was Awesome Part.😊

Asad(KSG) and Zoya characters were so nicely explained.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Fighting Part was so cute.😳

Dilshad was dead here,so,Asad(KSG) hates his father that he forget his mother and started life with another,it was so sad.

Asad(KSG) OCD nature and Zoya messy nature was so nicely explained.😊

Zoya broke Asad(KSG) favorite Mug which his mother gifted him,I think Asad(KSG) will scolded Zoya very hardly,so sad for Zoya.😭

Please Update Next part soon and PM TO ME,I am waiting here.

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

a terrific writer plus a lazy reader! (sigh)

i shouldn't have read this as i have still to read remember me (but the sad ending is prohibiting me) :-(

okay...back to this one!

i love zoya...her antics!!!

asad ka gussa ...oye hoye...

thanks god that inspite of his hatred he's back for his father and second family...

ayaan...anurag! so many mysteries to unfold...( eager to know)

waiting for more...

continue soon

p.s- hope this will be a happy ending...

p.p.s- my exams are coming...i.maybe late in commenting...please don't mind <3