ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Dotted Line


Scene 1:


"Mr. Khan is there anything eatable in the fridge?"

"How do I know? Is this my department to know?" He said sarcastically. His fingers were creating storm on the laptop keys.

"Please have mercy on the laptop keys Mr. Khan" She said suppressing the laugh that was escaping from her throat.

Asad looked at her amused. How dare of her? Incredibly foolish. He thought. He did not say anything but increased the pace of typing if that was possible.

Zoya cooed "Mr. Khan"

"Yes" he answered in monosyllables.

"I..." She could not finish the line as the electricity had been cut. It was monsoon time and there was raining all day long for few days and for this reason load shedding was going frequently.

"Ugggh!!" Asad cursed under his breath and threw his laptop on the couch. He had forgotten to charge his gazette. Zoya found a candle and lit it up.

"This is the only candle Mr. Khan. I forgot to buy some." Zoya reasoned sitting another side of the table where Asad was sitting. Asad only nodded and concentrated on his lost love, the novel grabbing the only candle near his side of the table.

Zoya looked at him helplessly. She tried to adjust with the faint light of the candle. She had an exam next day but she could not tell him that because...Suddenly the brightness fell on the page of her paper. She looked at him with surprise. He did not spare a glance to her just continued to read.

"Thank you" she whispered the light from the thunder revealed the other side of Mr. Khan. The caring Mr. Khan.

Asad just adjusted his reading glass and said nothing.

"Strange man" Zoya muttered and started to read. Her exam was more important than him.


Scene 2:


"Awww...this rain" Zoya cooed playing her fingers with the rain. Another song had started on the radio...

Azeeb dastaan hain yeh...Kaha shuru kaha khatam...!

"Please close the window. The seat will be wet." Asad said while concentrating on the highly risked road.

"How people live in this country? Eww this road" He muttered under his breath. Zoya did not listen to him.

"Mr. Khan you know I love to wet in the rain" She said dreamily.

"Incredibly foolish. Please stop acting like a teenager. You are older enough than this" He said sternly.

I am not an oldie like you" She whispered but Asad had already heard it.

"What did you say? I am a buddha" He stopped the car by the side of the road.

"I...I just only said you look older than your age. You..." She could not finish her line as Asad had already unlocked her side door of the car automatically.

"Mr. Khan there is no exact age to enjoy your life. You can enjoy if you want to. Any time, trust me" Zoya made him understand.

"Out" He said.

"Mr. Khan"

"Why, you wanted to enjoy the rain right? Then go. Why you are wetting seat of my car."

"Mr. Khan I mean to say..." Zoya again tried.

"Go and enjoy your life in your own way" Asad started the engine.

Zoya stepped outside by raising the side bag of hers. Asad zoomed of his car and went ahead without saying anything.

Zoya stood there dumbfounded trying to gauge the situation. She could not even complete to ponder upon that Asad backed off his car and handed an umbrella to her hand. He had again zoomed off without saying anything. Zoya just shrugged off her shoulder.

"Strange man! Akdu Ahmed Khan." She stomped her foot. The water on the road splashed making her dress dirty.

"Uggh! Stupid man" Zoya opened the umbrella and walked away.

There is nothing like love...but there is something between them which defined them.


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So after a long time I was having some relax time and last night I was flipping through the TV channels. Suddenly the promo of a new show starring Sonali Bendre and Apurva Agnihotri caught my attention. What happened next was the helpless mind of me started to think about AsYa with this concept. So to remove it from my head I had to write and post it.

One more thing it will be kind of unusual than my other stories. The scenes are inspired by the show but story will be definitely like our AsYa. So do you think I should continue? Let me know.

I know I have to update "Remember Me" and I am working on that. I will continue this story (if you want) only after completing "Remember Me."

Thank you and let me know about your views. Till then Allah Hafiz.


Lots of Love 🤗

Swapno

P.S want Pm for an update? Then buddy me. 😊


Chapter 1 - Page 27

Chapter 2 - Page 40

Chapter 3 - Page 54

Chapter 4 - Page 61

Chapter 5 - Page 66

Chapter 6 - Page 73

Chapter 7 - Page 83

Chapter 8 - Page 96

Chapter 9 - Page 101

Chapter 10 - Page 114

Chapter 11 - Page 126

Chapter 12 - Page 143



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marcoe thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice concept
Continue soon
Cant wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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R

Wao sadia..its beautiful..

Yup..I saw the promo of ajeeb dastan hai ye..

Bt m.in love wid dis asya version

Update soon

Love
Shreya
Edited by shreya11mehra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres

I saw d promo 2 but i don't know what u will do wid Asya & that concept😕
cuz u know i m die herat Asya fan so will decide after reading 1 chapter
btw this intro was damn good😃
in 1st scene Asad looked caring in d end but in 2nd he is total sadu😆
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
nice
loved it
update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Swapno, look forward to this story pm me whenever you update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey swapno..this is interesting ...
hes caring ..hes akdu ...😳😆
loved d two scenes..
continue soon pm me 😳
Edited by Amulya9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yipppeee..new story...
ye wala scenes chahiye mujhe 😉
Edited by Amulya9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue soon!
Like real soon!

Oh and update Remember me! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww...Sadiaaa🤗
I saw the promo too and it looks interestinggg😳
And the ASYA version of this is just lovelyy 😳
Definately continuee ...and are they married??

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