SS. The Nawab's son. Important page 15 last comment - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

82

Views

31.4k

Users

22

Likes

320

Frequent Posters

rakshaanra thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#31


Thanks 😊


But the next ones may not be so intense
SaNav143 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#32
very nice update
thank u so much for the pm
SaNav143 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: rakshaanra



Thanks

Pls do correct me, are women allowed to go to mosque to pray?
Where do they go


women pray at home they r not allowed to go to mosque to pray.
Sofna thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Just caught up... very interesting ss... waiting fr more
rakshaanra thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#35
My dear sweet readers a longer update
Sometimes one has talents and they forget it,

Just like in Ramayana, lord Ramas faithful monkey servant Hanuman knew how to fly but had forgotten it
But when the time was right he remembered.

In this story somewhat the same thing had happend, her prayers answered Sanam will be empowered with extraordinary intelligence and bodily strength, which have been returned to her...
A bit stray from reality but unlike tv shows in these fictions we can make the protagonist more powerful than antagonist

rakshaanra thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Part 8

The Nawab's official title was vacant.


Ahil's father was the last Nawab and today a group of headmen came from the 12 villages of Bhopal to speak to Ahil to officially assume the Nawabs title.

Since Tanveer had been convicted of the Nawab's murder they wanted nothing to do with her. Previously Ahil had been approached, but his notorious activities had repulsed them.

But now there was news that Ahil was changing and rumors were that he was going to be a father soon. So the elderly headmen with hopes in their eyes approached his office complex.

Sanam was going back home and decided to go to Ahil's office and see him, part of her heart told her that he was an innocent victim who wants to look bad but is actually good.

Another part of her wanted to hurt him and give him so pain because his mother had ruined her happiness. With mixed feelings she stepped out of the car. the driver held open the car door, when suddenly she heard the phone, since it was an executive SUV, the phone was answered by the driver in the car speaker, and she could hear Tanveer's voice. The driver returned to his seat and Sanam crouched outside, besides the door, ears strained.

Tanveer asked the driver her whereabouts. Then she asked whether the village head men had gone to see Ahil. Driver replied that he didn't see them yet.

" under no circumstances should Ahil be the next Nawab, " Tanveer declared absentmindedly

Yes, said the driver, otherwise it will be difficult for you to get his inheritance."


"Shut up! You are a lowly driver and I am paying you to keep an eye on things not to use your brain, " Tanveer screeched and the call was disconnected.

Sanam knew what she had to do. Ahil will have to be the next Nawab of Bhopal, ruining tanveer's plans of usurping Ahil's wealth.


As she entered, she saw twelve men leaving sadly. They looked hurt that Sanam stopped them.
One of them said "Zoya beta?"




salaam walekum, she greeted all the men,

I am not Zoya but her daughter Sanam, I am choti begum, wife of Nawaab saheb( smiling to herself as she getting used to this title which will bring about tanveer's downfall)"


" mashallah! They exclaimed in unison.

They all looked up and thanked the heaven as their duas were qubool

All of them gave her blessing, and the head Janab Rashid Khan gave her his phone contact," beta, whenever he is ready please tell us, we don't know why he doesn't want to take responsibility


" don't worry, leave it to me, said Sanam confidently.


As she entered the office, Ahil's photo greeted her.

He was looking sexy, and Sanam scoffed, this is where the girls must be drooling over him, well not anymore.

She went to the main office, and an elderly man, Mr Sharma greeted her.

Tanveer had called earlier to inform them of her coming as it was her first visit. Ordinarily she would have been touched but hearing Tanveer's name made her seethe with rage, but she stayed composed.

Mr Sharma, can you enlarge this and have it framed in the office replacing Ahil's , " Sanam handed their wedding photo. " this order is from Begum sahiba"

" not to worry, even if you had sad it we would have done it"

Then a tour of the complex, 21 stories, with a lovely garden on the top floor with a gym and a pool.

Another photo of Ahil, shirtless,
" mr Sharma this one too." Pointed out Sanam.

"My father could have designed a much better building then this , "thought Zoya proudly.

Her conversation with Dilshaad had completely changed her outlook.

"Madam, please take seat, "

Mr Sharma gave her a seat, and it had a desk top computer. She had some experience with a computer in a cafe once, but now she owned this. Previously she was so scared with computers, but today her fingers moved freely as if she was remembering what she had forgotten, if she needed help, she asked irfan a good looking IT graduate who was by her side and helping her out.


After creating Facebook accounts and a mail, she wanted to see her shohar, her hubby. Outside his office were persons waiting to see him and all gave way to her.

She entered his office without knocking to see him playing computer games, this enraged her. Spoilt brat!

On the screen it flashed, 2 more kills till the next level, as soon as Ahil was about to kill the screen was dead.

" what the $@):!"

He looked back to see Sanam with the remote in angry mood.

" don't forget your position, you are a servant, how dare you, he rushed to her pointing his finger at her.

She grabbed his finger, twisted in and pulled him close, so close that their noses met.

"You have called me a servant for the last time, if you call me that again I will," she threatened menacingly.


you will what, ?"

Her smell intoxicated Ahil and he took advantage of their closeness, arms encircling her hips and made way for her lips



rakshaanra thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -Saffi-Surbhi-


women pray at home they r not allowed to go to mosque to pray.





Thanks, what about Mazhaar where they tie strings?
Marybarton thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Your SS was recommended to me. I am glad I came as you wrote some nice parts. The rape dream really got me scared but I enjoyed how you turned things around. Also liked that you made Sanam wonder about HIV, that was cute. She distrust of Aahil shows in that sentence. Also I like how Aahil thought of himself as not good enough for her. By the way, I have a couple of OSs and SSs on Sahil if you are interested in reading.
rakshaanra thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Marybarton

Your SS was recommended to me. I am glad I came as you wrote some nice parts. The rape dream really got me scared but I enjoyed how you turned things around. Also liked that you made Sanam wonder about HIV, that was cute. She distrust of Aahil shows in that sentence. Also I like how Aahil thought of himself as not good enough for her. By the way, I have a couple of OSs and SSs on Sahil if you are interested in reading.


Thanks I have read some of your posts, will love to read others


Not a good writer,

Loved writing in high school but stopped
Never knew writing can be so interesting...
rakshaanra thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Great story
I got scared that ahil did rape her
And I hate those rape turns to love stories
But so glad you made sanam strong
Excited for the next part!



Rehaan is after all tanveer's son so these malicious thoughts are easy for him to think of 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".