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Posted: 11 years ago
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Burning the hand which heals


folks I have written os and ss on ASYA. QH is my first every Hindi TV serial which I never missed and I have watched each epi like 2-3 times before the Zoyaan fiasco.

Anyways...

This is my attempt at a ss on Sahil . However if this is story has started already pls let me know that I discontinue immediately.

Also this will have parts for mature audiences, with violence so readers discretion

I only have 10 buddies so sending pms can be a problem. Pls let me know how I can send alerts without irritating anyone.


Many thanks to all the wonderful writers for their inspirational stories

Raksa.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index

Part 1

Page 1


Part 2 ...
Page 2


Part 3
Page 2

Part 4
Page 3


Part 5

Page 3


Part 6

Page 4


Part 7
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Part 8

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Part 9 page 10
Part 10 page 11


Part 11 p 12
Part 12 p 13
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1


Wakil saheb(lawyer) paid another visit one month after nikah of Sahil.

This visit was getting on tanveer's nerves


" what is it this time" she asked in a sweet annoyed voice


" it is a bit complicated" the lawyer continued,

A clause in the will clearly states that within three months choti begum must be pregnant with an heir, only that will the final transfer including international bonds, investments be transferred, so in the last week of the 3rd month, Sanam will have a pregnancy test.."

" it will be arranged duly" said Tanveer without batting an eyelid, she had come too far and too close, she could just smell the huge victory...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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This looks very interesting, i'm definitely looking forward to it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2


Read At your own risk




"Sanam beta" Tanveer meows.
"Ji Ami?"


"Listen we have come so close to the three months that the wait is finally over but there is a little favour I need from you," implored tanu


Very cautiously, Sanam says, "ji?"


" it seems you are not keen, so forget about it, forget about me forget about the love I gave you " blackmails Tanu.

" no, sorry Ami, pls tell me what it is," quipped Zoya


" well you basically have to give me an heir and you better do it straightaway" and Tanu fills the reason why.


Sanam felt like a pile of bricks had hit her head, she was numb, but she managed a feeble " yes" and thinking she has sold her soul to the devil... Jalaad Jin


tanu was happy with joy

" and beta you can have an abortion soon after, as soon as all the property is under my, sorry Ahil's name, " she added

This was too much, Sanam ran to her room, flung herself on the bed and started to cry bitterly.

Tanveer then called Khala and gives her a tablet which she specifically instructs to mix in Ahil' drink before bed time.

It is similar to Viagra but very potent creating sexual drive.

" Ahil beta, " tanu calls Ahil and explains to him the need to consummate their marriage.

With a heavy and painful voice, " ji Ami"

Ahil did not see Sanam at dinner, he reckoned she was upset and let her be. After dinner, Khala gave him a glass of juice with the tablets mixed in. Afterwards Ahil moved towards the bar and opened up a bottle of the strongest alcohol content available.


Meanwhile Sanam felt extremely uncomfortable in a night gown which Lateef had brought in from Tanveer.

She was sobbing remembering Ahil's rendezvous with the woman in Punjab and was cursing her fate that she was associated with a person of such low character, she recalled him kiss another woman in a restaurant, and smiled sadly.

" I have reduced myself to nothing but a prostitute who has sold her self for money, my parents will be so proud of me," she added sarcastically.


Then a fear crept, Haye Allah! She exclaimed out loud, I might end up with HIV, oh that dirty man...

And another realization, " am I supposed to kill the baby inside of me? And this time a very sad cry escaped Sanam's lips., how could any woman or mother want this, only for some inheritance... How can a woman give life and mercilessly take it, at this point a doubt arose against Tanveer, is she really what she looks like or is there a dark secret...


Consumed with such thoughts, she did not feel like eating anything, used up nearly a box of tissues and lay on the bed waiting for her fate to unfold.

Waiting to be burnt waiting to be used, abused and discarded as refuse.

Underneath the black gown was a nude colored nightie, which reached the thighs, it felt like it wasn't there, and it certainly looked that way too. She dimmed the lights in the room, as she was too ashamed to see her own self in such a shameless condition.


Suddenly the door flew open and in swayed Ahil, not able to walk straight, but determined to reach the bed, the stench of alcohol was unbearable for Sanam and she turned her face away,

somehow, Ahil reached the bed, crawled towards Sanam, smiled wickedly and forced Sanam to face him.

" love u.." Ahil muttered

Sanam looked up into his eyes in shock and a little flicker of hope.

" love you so much, missed you Monica" said Ahil as he cupped Sanams face.


Sanam was distraught, Ahil was about to make love to Monica and this made her feel so sick...

This was the most important moment in her life and her so called husband will have absolutely no recollection of it.


The next part is absolutely rated and may upset readers so please read at discretion










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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey your fiction is unique , please do continue soon and with longer updates too.
Pls continue soon waiting for the story to unfold

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

Graphic violence warning, and I forgot to mention that I like suspense writing

Sanam freezes as Ahil approaches her, she uses all her might to push him, and in a stuporous state he wobbles to the side, Sanam jumps out of the bed and runs for the door, but the door is locked

Ahil takes the remote of the door and crushes it. He stalks towards Sanam who is still struggling at the door.

He catches her by the waist, throws her over the shoulder and pushes her onto the bed,

Sanam is now begging, " pls don't touch me, I don't love you!

"So who do you love, that servant Rehaan?" Yells Ahil and pounces upon her, this time more determined and more valor.

Sanam lies helplessly, just like a lamb being attacked by a ruthless tiger.

Ahil slapped her, bit her and kicked her into submission

Then repeatedly violated her weak body, and thus avenged all the humiliation he has to face because of her.

In a weak voice, Sanam calls out, " Rehaan!"

This infuriates Ahil and he repeats his cycle of torture again and again, till Sanam falls unconscious ...



Remember dear readers... Suspense writing

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smmm

hey your fiction is unique , please do continue soon and with longer updates too.

Pls continue soon waiting for the story to unfold


I will try longer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Concept ! Do Continue Soon !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Lovely Concept ! Do Continue Soon !


thanks

I am feeling very low that mahabharat is ending and so I ended up writing this

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