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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4

"Sanam!" Rehaan yells, drenched in sweat , he realized that he was dreaming.

Just the previous night, Tanveer called him and told him that Sanam was bewafaa,Sanam was cheating on Rehaan, and that she loves Ahil for his money but Rehaan was not convinced. Tanveer said that she wanted Sanam to marry Rehaan but that's not possible now as Sanam will never divorce Ahil.


What Rehaan did not know was that Tanveer has realized that Sanam is Asad and Zoya's daughter and wants to create difference with Rehaan.


Rehaan got up and walked towards Ahil's bedroom.

It was 6 am, he listened at the door for any sobbing, and his dream compelled him to find out if it was true or not. If Ahil had forced himself unto Sanam he would not be spared.


Rehaan knocked at the door, no answer, he knocked again, this time loudly as he was worried and Sanam opened the door, but the innocent Sanam who he knew and loved was not standing before him.

He clenched his fists as he saw her. She was looking seductive in a black gown, and he could see that it was Loose and revealed a good part of her cleavage. Her hair was ruffled, lips swollen.


On her neck was a reddish mark and so on her chest. There were no signs of a struggle.

" Rehaan , can I help you?' Asked
Sanam, who looked exhausted and irked as she had been rudely woken up by the banging on her door.


" are you alright, did Ahil force you to have .." He was interrupted by Sanam.

" Rehaan just because we are friends I will tell you that Ahil never forced me, in fact he is very gentle and I want to clear to you to please mind your own business." Rehaans was staring at Sanam from top to bottom and this caused her to be irritated.


" what's happening? " Ahil stood behind Sanam and he was shirtless. He Also had bruise marks on his neck.


Sanam answered that Rehaan wanted to know if she was raped by Ahil but she replied she was loved very passionately by her husband.

Ahil's mouth dropped open, he was blushing and also was guilty as Rehaan was glaring at him, as if his property was stolen.


Sanam was getting super upset now, she linked her arm with Ahil and looked at Rehaan in the eye, we are husband and wife and we have consummated our wedding, there is no sin.

" I am sorry" apologized Ahil, Rehaan started " I did not expect this from you Ahil Bhai."


" hey wait a second, can someone tell me what's happening, " asked Sanam


Ahil looked at her questioningly.
" I thought you and Rehaan loved each other and wanted to marry.."

He was cut off by Sanam, " what?! we were good friends, but I never thought I would marry him, "clarified Sanam.
Ahil realized that Rehaans infatuation was one sided and this relieved him of a guilty burden.

But Rehaan was angry, " yes Sanam why would you marry a poor person like me, everyone is correct when they say you love money, and one day I will make you both realize that I can be more powerful than you and I will have you thrown out into the streets!"


Before either could react, Rehaan went off to his Ami's room to make sure that he will make Sanam and Ahil's life hellish.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

After Rehaan left,
Ahil said, "gosh you are overacting, we are supposed to have sophisticated drama but you are into cheap acting, where did you learn to act like that, from cheap tv serials?"


Sanam was not in a mood to argue, after last night she really did not want any more acting but this Rehaan was too much, checking her out in the night gown.

She was overacting she had to agree especially since they had not consummated yet, and to convince Rehaan she was OTT

Flashback,
The night before


Suddenly the door flew open and in swayed Ahil, not able to walk straight, but determined to reach the bed, the stench of alcohol was unbearable for Sanam and she turned her face away,

somehow, Ahil reached the bed, crawled towards Sanam, smiled wickedly and forced Sanam to face him.

" love u.." Ahil muttered

Sanam looked up into his eyes in shock and a little flicker of hope.

" love you so much, missed you Monica" said Ahil as he cupped Sanams face.


Sanam was distraught, Ahil was about to make love to Monica and this made her feel so sick...

This was the most important moment in her life and her so called husband will have absolutely no recollection of it.


What happened next was classic...




As Ahil tried to kiss Sanam, calling her Monica, he got a tight slap on the cheek, "Monica you want to get dirty" this time another slap and this time it caused Ahil to fall off the bed.

Sanam came around sat ontop of him and grabbed his collar, " how dare you remember some other woman in our bed!"

Ahil leaned forward and kissed Sanams nose.


" I know you are Sanam I just wanted to get you in the mood, " just then Sanam realized her position and got off Ahil embarrassedly.

"So shall we? " Ahil took Sanam by the elbow, placed her on the bed and removed her gown, Marvelling at the beautiful slip which did little to hide her assets.

As he caressed her, she closed her eyes, and her body stiffened.

She started to remember all his previous liaisons with women, and thoughts of contracting HIV resurfaced.


Ahil could sense that his beautiful wife was not ready to take the next step, so he reverted back to Jalaad Jin mode.


" so have you been with a man before, he asked as he caressed her cheeks.


Shaking head in a no, Sanam had her eyes shut as if wanting to get things over.

Ahil sat up, Sanam opened her eyes and sat with him.

" no can do, madam because I only sleep with experienced woman, you are not my type"


"I have never made love to a virgin, cause they are stiff and get long to get wet, very tight and full of demands, I have hears" he smirked seeing her dejected face.

" and let me tell you I use safe sex, so my lovers do not get sexually transmitted disease or pregnant, he took out a condom packet and Sanam looked away disgustingly.

In truth, he wanted Sanam to celebrate the most beautiful night of her life with a man who loves her, a man who can give her all the happiness she deserves and that man is not Ahil Raza Ibrahim.

"I am a disgusting lowlife, nothing more than a sewer rat, Sanam does not deserve me..". He thought, I do not want to contaminate her with my touch.

Truth is he never took the Viagra tablets Khala mixed as he overheard Tanveer saying to Khala to mix the tablet is drink.

And he was not drunk, he splashed the alcohol on his face and clothes, and he called out Monica, he did all this to irritate Sanam, so she does not come close to him as he can give her nothing but hurt.


" so I am not going to give you sex classes so go to sleep" said Ahil rudely to a wide eyed Sanam who looked liked she was about to cry.


The tables had turned for Sanam, here she was cringing and thinking of all the worst about Ahil, and he completely rejected her as if she was trash.


She was in no mood to argue so she said soberly" so what about the heir?"

Ahil smiled smugly, we can do drama to make it look like it happend, Sanam looked at him as if he was crazy,

What he did next confirmed her thoughts, he messed up her hair, squeezed her soft lips with his fingers to make them swollen,and the last bit,

" give me your neck,
" why
" I want to bite it
" no
" I want to mark it so people will believe our drama

""
""

"Sanam? What happend"

"Ok"

She bent her neck and he gently made love to her neck with his lips, resulting in a beautiful red bruise, which can last for a week. He went Lower and repeated this on her exposed cleavage, letting out a moan from his incredibly sexy wife. Using great self restraint, he stopped himself

" now your turn"

" no way"

" do you want to do it or do I have to go to Monica?"

Zoya leaned foward and bit his neck so hard that his eye balls nearly popped out.

" gee you are a man eating woman!" Exclaimed Ahil.

Sanam smiled smugly.

They both covered themselves with their separate duvets and slept facing the opposite direction' unaware of their bleak future.

End of flashback







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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Will try! But not sure if people interested
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Oh I am loving this even more after every chapter , thank god he did not rape her
Pls continue soon I want know what's in store for them !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahil is good hearted, he does not feel himself worthy of Sanam, let alone force her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6

Ahil was being a jerk, and did not leave any stone unturned to irritate Sanam.

While he was relieved of guilt that he snatched Sanam away from Rehaan, he still felt bad as Rehaan was like his small brother.

He was dressing up and admired the bruise on his neck.

Good, he was ready to face Ami, the deed done, hang on, she cannot see the bruise but Khala can, but she is so dense! All she can think of is stuffing herself with food, Lateef is a better choice if she is not busy admiring herself...

While seated for breakfast, he waited for Sanam, and she looked gorgeous

Dressed in a grey lehenga with pink embroidery and matching jewelry she put even film actresses to shame.


There on her neck was a beautiful mark of his love.

He spontaneously pulled the chair for a surprised Sanam and sat besides her.

" why are you doing drama,? There is no one here, " quizzed zoya.

Caught, Ahil mumbled with a forced looking smile, we have to do rehearsal as this is our biggest act to date, get your voice right, Ami can sense a lie," said a worried Ahil not wanting to lie to his beloved Ami.


" if you have such a problem lying then why did you have to stop what you were doing last night, " muttered Sanam still sore after the rejection.

Ahil's ears perked up, " are you serious, you mean you wanted us to, but you became stiff so I was not sure..." He stammered.

Sanam quickly retreated her words, " oh please, it was a sarcastic comment, and I would rather make love to a brick wall than to you, both are heartless!"


" yeah you are the last woman on earth I would make love to, even if you are the last woman left on this planet, never!" And they bickered to and fro, suddenly Ahil embraced a startled Sanam and whispered, " shut up! Lateef alert!

Lateef came in waddling, playing with her braid, silently trying to eavesdrop.


" jaan, last night was the best night, you were so sexy and you took me to heaven twice! Said Ahil

" huh? Asked Sanam dumbly, as all she remembered was giving him two slaps.

" you are a naughty girl, I never knew you could love me so hard,( feeling for her bite on his neck) and your moan aroused me.. And Ahil continued with poor Sanam clueless.

He put aside her hair and lovingly caressed her bruise and tilting so Lateef could see.

Lateef was blushing, and Ahil sweetly complained,

" Jaan you gave me 30 love bites last night for my 30 years on this planet but please make sure you keep everything below the belt next time as I have to go to office and the gym," complained Ahil to Sanam who gave a disgusted smile.

Lateef could not control herself anymore and ran up to Begum sahibas room to update her.

" what was that all about? Asked Sanam while elbowing Ahil away.

" Pure drama, now I don't have to lie to Ami," Ahil picked his laptop and walked out briskly looking back once to Sanam who happened to glance at same Time. " dramebaaz !" Concluded Sanam, with a shy smile.

Meanwhile Tanveer was updated by Lateef and she called her breakfast up, she really was tired of being sweet to Ahil and couldn't stand a moment with Sanam, Zoya's daughter.

after breakfast, she opened her cupboard and pulled out a knife, the same one she used for the infamous massacre.

And touched the sharp edge lovingly," Sanam, you can live for another two months, your Abu and Ami are waiting for you!" and then the room filled with her wicked laughter.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Great update , each one is better than the previous part pls pls continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
plz try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Thanks, story is getting more difficult to write now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Saffi-Surbhi-

awesome update

loved it
plz try to update soon



Thanks

But I have to do some research to continue as I do not know the intricacies of Muslim culture 😊

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