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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note:first of all thank you sooo much guys for ur beautiful response it really means a lot.I was goin to update on Sunday but ur comments have made me soo happy tat I will update tonight inshaAllah.
Secondly I'm repeating this again tat I update from cell and pm's is not possible so plzz bookmark the thread as I would update once a week surely.
Thirdly the story will be slow paced but il try to keep u guys hook up to it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: farru786

Note:first of all thank you sooo much guys for ur beautiful response it really means a lot.I was goin to update on Sunday but ur comments have made me soo happy tat I will update tonight inshaAllah.
Secondly I'm repeating this again tat I update from cell and pm's is not possible so plzz bookmark the thread as I would update once a week surely.
Thirdly the story will be slow paced but il try to keep u guys hook up to it.


take ur time dear😊
we r waiting😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Nice story
Read last 5 parts in a go
Asad .& zoya married
She is too innocent. Doesn't know anything abt married life
What a sincerity, she told to asad.
Hope he will understand .
Continue soon
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 8
Location:asad's room
Asad was stunned hearing zoya speak like shatabdi express he took sometime to understand wat she is speaking den finally aftr sometime he registered her words.he never had any complaints against zoya for mariam's run away act.when mariam's mother had continuously asked forgiveness from him along with blamed zoya at that time also he never held.zoya responsible bcoz mariam was not a kid to be instigated by others she was a mature individual who had ran away with her own will.but now hearing zoya soo cutely explaining her side of story and the way her mami's blamed her he felt sad for her.he saw zoya's expectant face waiting for his answer as though his answer meant the world to her but his.stupid heart was soo lost in her soft delicate features tat he couldnt form a reply.den he felt zoya poking him and demanding answers wich finally bought him out of his reverie.
Asad:nahi zoya hum aapko mariam ke bhag Jane ka zimmedar nahi mantey .woh apni marzi se bhagi hain kisine unke saath zabardasti nahi ki toh usme aapka ya kisi aur ka kya dosh.AAP fikar naa kare yahan koi aapko mariam ko bhagane ya is shadi ko todne ka ilzaam nahi lagayenge.
Zoya was waiting with bated breath to hear asad's answer.he being her husband his opinion mattered her the most.but when he dint say anything and kept staring at her ,her mind suddenly came up with the reason tat may be he was deaf and she was hell scared .oly if she could understand tat asad was admiring her alas when asad started speaking she was again lost in her manly voice.his answer tat he dint hold her responsible for anything somehow gave her immense peace.wich again bought a huge smile on her face and she happily hugged asad feeling showing her gratitude.
Asad was stupefied when zoya's soft body came in contact with his hard one.never in his life did he hug any girl .hugging is far away he kept girls at 10feet distance.ayaan always teased him saying mayb he is gay as how can a man resist such beautiful and hot girls who hit on him.but he ignored all his comments bcoz for him his only aim was to take care of his business and his family he never wasted time elsewhere.but today unknowingly zoya innocent gestures did strange things to his body and he tried to control it.
Zoya(breaking the hug):thank you sooo much .AAP jantey hain aapke bharosa ne mujhe bahut khushi Di hain thank you.zoya thanked him whole heartedly.muttering a quite hmm asad moved towards wAshroom to change .
Zoya sat on bed admiring the decorations ofcourse not knowing why was the bed decorated soo beautifully.
Zoya:Allahji asad ji bhi mithe ache hain ,ammi bhi kitni Achi hain thank you soo much itni pyaare pyaare log milwane ke liye.Allahji asad ji ke gale lagtay huwe hame gudgudi kyun huwi .hmm asadji se poochna padega nahi asiya ne strict warning de thi asadji se koi uth patang sawal naa karne ke liye.mai asiya se pochungey kal waise bhi.use sab pata hota hain.satisfied zoya looked towards wAshroom waiting for asad to emerge she was tired but not sleepy as this was new place and she would take sometime to adjust sleeping here.
Asad came out of washroom wearing his white cotton Kurta pyjama.he went towards his cupboard and very neat kept his sherwani in the hanger .zoya's mouth was hanging open seein such a neat cupboard for.first time .her haider bhaijaan's cupboard was soo dirty den how come asad being a man had such a clean cupboard.
Asad turned to see zoya looking at him in shock he was worried as to what happened to her now.he went near her and asked.
Asad:kya huwa zoya AAP kuch pareshaan lag rahi hain.neend nahi aarahi hain kya.
Zoya:woh aapka cupboard itna neat I mean AAP ladke hona toh aapka cupboard bikhra hona chahiye na phirr...
Asad:sab log ek jaise nahi hotey zoya aur mujhe sab cheeze saaf chahiye.phir woh cupboard ho,dining table ho,ghar ho,kamra ho ya aur kuch.
Zoya looked at him with a sad puppy face.
Zoya:sab neat neat pasand hain aapko
Asad again moved by her puppy looks
Asad:don't worry AAP jaisa chahe waisa reh sakti hain bas thodi saaf-safayi maintain kariyega k.
Zoya again smiles her bright smile showing her dimples wich again clean bowled asad.
Asar:zoya mai jaanta hoon ki sab kuch bahut jaldbazi mein huwa hai lekin kisi bhi shadi ko successful banane ke liye vishwas bahut zarori hain.isiliye mai chahta hoon ki hum apna rishta dosti se shuru kare .koi bhi kadam aage badane se pehle hame pehle ek dusre ko ache se jaan Lena chahiye.toh banegi AAP meri dost asked asad somewhat shyly and apprehensively.
Our zoya ofcourse dint understand half of what asad said except he wanted to be her friend wich made zoya full on happy .who doesn't need a friend tat too a man similar to Salman khan.
Zoya:ofcourse friends
Dey both shake hands.
Asad settling himself on bed:toh zoya AAP apne baare mein mujhe bataiye ki aapko kya pasand hain,AAP kya padti hain,aapke hobbies kya kya hain.
Asad dint knew tat he had done the biggest mistake of his life by asking zoya to talk and hence he got his punishment when zoya started speaking and took almost 2hours to describe herself.poor asad though tired couldn't do anything becoz he dint wanted to stop zoya and make her feel bad but unknowingly he dosed off along with zoya who was also help tired aftr talking soo much.

Precap:zoya's first day at her sasural.najma teasing zoya about first night.socho what will zoya do now. ⭐️ ⭐️
Edited by farru786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh it was lovely n cute n sweet update...
zoya is such a darling...
she is just being her own self...
so innocent n naive...
asad ko galey lagane se gudgudi kyu hui... asiya se poochegi...lol
and asad miyan...he is blown off totally...
bechara...
zoya ko sb kuch neat n clean dekh k tension hogayi... but asad took care of it...
oh he is so nice...
he asked zoya to talk and the plane took off neva to land...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
So cute.
Loved it sooo much.👍🏼
Pls continue.
Waiting for it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
hahahhahaha...
sooo cutee that was..
zoya is such a cutie pie..
she didnt understand half of the words that asad said abt the relationship.. haha
and the best part asad ko gale lagane se gudgudi kyun hui asiya se poochon gi usko pata hoga... 😆
this was epic...

anyway continue ASAP!!
loved the updatee..



-fuii-
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
awesome.
loved it.
amazing
really zoya is so cute so innocent simply ma.
asad is clean bowled by zoya.
awww.
cuteness overloded.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very sweet update
plz pm me for next part
excited for zoya reaction on najma teasing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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