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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
I really look forward to this ff despite its errors it has a unique story but i would appreciate it more if u could try to give longer updates that can reveal more story
Like u couldve added the last three parts into one. I dont mind waiting longer for long updates. Do think about it. Im waiting for what happens on the wedding night. Do not disappoint me i would like to read zoya coming to terms with this whole physical relationship issue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww.
loved it
awesome.
will be waiting eagerly for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note:thanks a lot guys for ur beautiful comments dey r really very encouraging .and coming to ur requests for longer updates den inshaAllah il surely try bcoz I update from phone and its very tiring and time consuming even to type a small update but il surely try giving longer updates.coming to the story u will see asya's relationship progress gradually bcoz no relationship becomes strong in a day same way asya will also develop slowly so be patient.
Thanks you. 😊
Chapter 6
Location:asad's car
It's almost half an hour since zoya has left he her home but even now she was sobbing silently her hiccups had died down and she was sobbing silently.asad was feeling helpless he was a man of few words and he din't know how to console zoya,so he thought to let her cry she might feel better but even after half an hour zoya hadn't stopped crying completely so he thought of giving a try at consoling her .
Asad:mmhhh...mmhhh...zo..ya.. dis was how asad started his speech but unfortunately he couldn't say even her name properly.
Zoya(self thought):ya Allahji yeh haklatey hain isiliye mariam baji bhaag gayi hogi*making baby face*kya badi badi baatein kar rahe the mere idiot friends Salman khan hmph mere Salman khan aur inka koi comparison nahi kaha Salman khan bhaari bhaari dialogue Marta hain aur kahan yeh meta naam bhi nahi bolsake.
Asad saw.zoya not responding to his calls he thought of trying one last time in a louder tone
Asad(coming near her):zoya..
Zoya got startled hearing such a manly voice for first time she got scared and hugged asad tightly thinking it to be some ghost.
Asad:sorry zoya I think Maine apko dara diya woh actually ap respond nahi kar rahi thi toh isiliye mujhe paas aake bulana pada dariye mat .
Zoya slowly lifted her eyes to see him but his face was not clear bcoz of her veil covering her face.but she could feel a manly and rough body and being in such close proximity with a man for the first time sent some alien sensations in her body.asad was also trying to see her face clearly but her veil was obstructing his view as his hands moved towards her veil the driver informed him tat dey have reached airport and thus it broke asad's trance and he straightened himself and came out of the car he went towards zoya 's door and opened it Like a gentleman and gave zoya his hand which she took reluctantly finally dey moved towards ticket counter where his ammi and sister were already waiting.they boarded the flight and reached Bhopal around 3 AM.zoya was awed seeing her home she always lived in a haveli but seeing a villa soo modern,elegant and new she was mesmerized.dilshad den took zoya towards her room and made her sit on bed in a.bridal style.
Dilshad:zoya aaj se yeh ghar,yeh karma,hum sab aapke hain kisi bhi cheez mangne mein sharmana mat kyunki aajse hum aapke ammi hain aur betiyan toh apni ammi ke best friend hoti hain isiliye kuch bhi kehna ho,asad ki shikayat karjo ho toh be jhijhak humse kahiyega.Thom hain dilshad smiled and kissed her forehead.while leaving zoya caught her hand and kissed it amidst tears showing her gratitude and love and in happiness tat first time she would feel a mother's love,a mother's warmth,a mortherly care which was deprived to her from childhood.
Dilshad:aww mera baccha ab rote nahi .tum Intezaar karo mai asad ko bhejti hoon smiled dilshad lovingly and went out leaving a smiling zoya behind.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
loved it ...😊...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Loved it.
Excited about next part.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Wen will the wedding night arrive. Im waitinggg. :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
hi im new hear
this was awsm😊
waitng for next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part⭐️
excited 4 nxt part😉
continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww.
loved it.
eager for next update.
plz update soon
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Chapter 7
Location:asad's room
Zoya is smiling remembering dilshad's sweet words.she was on the top of the world tat she will also have someone to call ammi.how much has she craved for a mother's love.
Zoya:thank you soo much Allah miyan aaj apne meri barso ki khwahish puri kardi.ab meri paas bhi ammi kehne ke liye koi hain.bahut bahut shukriya aapka says zoya tearfully.
Here asad was taking 1hr in covering one step towards his room.he was confused,frustrated,nervous.if it had been normal arranged marriage it would have been quite okay but now this sudden marriage with a teenager was making him anxious.
Asad:kya kahoon ga use jakar.najane woh kya sochti hongi ISS shadi ke baare mein.Ya Allah kahan phasa diya ammi ne mujhe ab kya karu?is liye nahi karni thi mujhe shadi .uff kya musibat hain.
Dilshad say asad cribbing she knew tat her son is quite nervous as he is the shy kind of a guy who has never interacted with girls properly .either girls are his clients with whom he has to work unwillinglyly or they are his clients wife's and girlfriends.except najma and dilshad he had never cared to look at any other girl even for 2 seconds.
Dilshad:asad mai jaanti hu yeh sab naya hain,mushkil hain Magar har ek insan isse gujarta hain.shadi ka rishta ek gaadi ki tarah hain Jo ek paiyye(wheel)par nahi chal sakti,shadi ko kamiyab karne ki zimmedari dono shauhar aur biwi ki hoti hai.kuch adjustment tum karo kuch zoya karegi phir dekhna yeh rishta tumari sabse badi takat,tumhaara sab kuch banjayega.ab jao zoya Intezaar kar rahi hogi tumara.kissing asad's forehead dilshad left leaving a relatively confident asad behind.
Here our zoya madam was lost in her own world.she never thought about marriage.for her marriage was two people getting together with blessings of elders in a grand ceremony producing kids and leaving happily ever after.but unfortunately she never paid heed as to how r kids born,why does a newly wedded bride shy.she had her own world where her life revolved around going to college study,enjoy with friends.cme back home help her mami's in kitchen work,attend madrasa(Arabic school where Quran is thought),complete her assignments,talk to asiya till late night ,offer her namaz,massage nanabba's feet every night and go to sleep.she never had a chance to explore what a life really means due to siddique Saab's strict nature of keeping zoya away from notion called LOVE .when zoya joined colg siddique Saab had warned asiya to keep zoya away from all this rubbish called love .and obeying his.command asiya never talked or let her other friends talk about anything related to love,marriage etc to zoya resulting in a completely unaware zoya tied in a sacred bond of marriage.it was like a new birth of zoya where she will learn actual meaning of life.sometimes it may be bitter sometimes sweet but surely zoya had a long way ahead to transform into a women.
Zoya:Allahji yeh ammi ne mujhe bed pe aise kyun bithaya.mere to pau(legs)dard kar rahe hain.aur yeh bhari jewelry or lehenga uff mujhe change karna chahiye with tat zoya sprinted towards bathroom with her night clothes.
Asad entered his room oly to find it surprisingly empty .he searched for his newly wedded bride when he heard the bathroom door click and saw a beautiful yet tired zoya emerge in her black pajama and white top looking soo cute with a baby frown on her face due to heavy lehenga and jewelry she was carrying in her hand wich she angrily dumped on the bed wich some how bought asad out of his drooling session seeing his neat bed covered with zoya's clothes,and her jewelry scattered on the bed here and their along with rose petals wich somehow irritated our cleanliness freak asad.
Asad:aap apne kapde cupboard mein arrange karlijiye aur jewelry mere locker mein rakh dijiye ISS tarah bed mein bekheriye mat plzz.
Zoya jumped hearing a manly voice and turn around to see a Salman khan type man well built body,handsome face hai zoya started drooling openly.her friends wer right after all he was really soo similar to her Salman khan.and he was her husband means full life she can have her personnel Salman khan with tat thought she smiled widely with twinkling eyes.
Asad wad confused and embarrassed with zoya's open display of admiration.he knew he was handsome and attractive but he had never seen any girl drooling him.seeing zoya's full fledged smile highlighting her dimple he was again lost in her beauty.
Asad(self thought):she is soo cutee.
Zoya came out of her reverie and understood wat asad told her to do and remembered asiya and shazia's words tat a wife should always listen to het husband and obey him with tat she again carried her heavy lehenga moving towards the cupboard but how should she open it as her hands were full she called asad.
Zoya(in low voice):suniye..
Asad(self thought):wat a sweet voice.
But coming out of his la la land he saw zoya looking at him with expectant eyes and struggling with her lehenga and cupboard.he came forward and opened the cupboard for her and zoya just dumped her wedding dress finally happy to get rid of tat heavy thing but ofcourse our asad miyan dint like it clothes should be arranged neatly isn't it .he was about to reprimand her but seeing her satisfied smile and remembering his ammi's words about adjusting with each other he kept quite.
Zoya(smilingly):thank you.
Asad(in low voice):your welcome.
Suddenly zoya remembered something
Zoya:dikhiye mai Sach main nahi jaanti Thi mariam babaji bhag jayengi.hum parlour Gaye the phir unhone mujhe zabardasti facial lag waya ya Allah kitna ganda tha woh *making yuck face*phir woh nikalne mai undar bathroom mein gayi.AAP jantey hain kitna time laga woh pack nikalne mein chi mai zindagi mein kabhi nahi lagaungi wo facial.phir Maine dekha bathroom lock ho chuka hain phir mai cheeki(shouted)ek attendant ne akar darwaja khola.phir mai nechi aayi to mariam baji nahi thi.Maine unhe dhunda unka phone try kiya but woh switched off tha.phir Maine ghar phone kiya puchne ke kahi baji wahan to nahi Magar woh wahan bhi nahi thi.phir Maine nanabba ko phone kiya unhone mujhe ghar aane ko kaha.ghar pe aane ke baad dono mamiyon ne mujhe bahut daata ki meri wajah se baji bhagi hain.lekin mujhe toh kuch pata bhi nahi tha sacchi AAP mera yakeen kartey haina *asked zoya with a expectant face and moist eyes waiting for asad'd answer who was staring at her unblinkingly and tryin to absorb her words*

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