asya ss:kahani pyar ki( last part on page 138))

My take on asya,hope u ppl will like it .I am goin to update from phone so pm's r not possible.if u want to follow the story bookmark the thread.
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Intro:asad Ahmed khan is a self made,handsome and the richest businessman of bhopal.after facing his abbu's betrayal he had shielded his heart from love.he deeply cares and loves his ammi and sister najma and even his step siblings and lives only for dem.having lost his faith in marriage he is about to get married to mariam siddique just for his ammi's happiness.but fate intervenes and he gets married to mariam's younger sister zoya siddique a 19 year old orphan who lives with her nana,mama and mami's.
Wat happens when an extremely innocent,pure,who doesn't know any negativity of the world gets married to an deeply scarred and emotionally challenged person asad.
Will zoya bring back the lost life in asad or will asad's insecurity and judgemental nature snatches away zoya's innocence.
To know how dis love story shapes up do read kahani pyar ki.
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Index
Part 1 and 2:page 2 😊
Part 3:page 3
Part 4:page 4
Part 5:page 5
Part 6:page 6
Part 7:page 7
Part 8:page 10
Part 9:page 21
Part 10:page 24
Part 11:page 26
Part 12:page 29
Part 13:page 33
Part 14:page 37
Part 15:page 41
Part 16:page 45
Part 17:page 47
Part 18:page 51
Part 19:page 53
Part 20:page 57
Part 21:page 60
Part 22:page 63
Part 23:page 66
Part 24:page 70
Part 25:page 73
Part 26:page 75
Part 27:page 79
Part 28:page 81
Part 29:page 83
Part 30:page 86
Part 31:page 89
Part 32:page 91
Part 33:page 93
Part 34:page 96
Part 35:page 99
Part 36:page 101
Part 37:page 104
Chapter 38:page 108
Part 39:page 110
Part 40:page 114
Part 41:page 117
Part 42:page 119
Part 43:page 120
Part 44:page 122
Part 45:page 125
Part 46,page 128

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Chapter 1
Location:siddique mansion,Lucknow
A lavish mansion is decorated like a bride,ppl r movin here and Der.there is lot of hustle bustle in the mansion.girls are giggling,lot of delicious delicacies r being cooked.women r singing wedding songs.all in all the whole mansion is bustling in activity after all its the marriage of siddique saab's ie Omar siddiques grand daughter,everything has to be perfect.Omar siddique is the most respected person in Lucknow.he is known for his richness,grandeur,discipline and his ever helping nature.being the richest hotelier of Lucknow he is never shown any arrogance or attitude but is very simple and down to earth.but when he gets angry Allah save tat person.he has 3 sons and a daughter whom he adored the most but she ran away with her lover crumbling away his respect under her feet.he broke all his ties with his daughter and became aloof from the world.he made strict rules in his home to make sure no one repeats the mistake which his daughter zeenat committed.he stopped pampering and showing any kind of love to his grand daughters and sons.but only Allah knew how much he loved dem.aftr 6 years when zeenat called her abbu saying her life was in danger as her husband wanted to kill her,he immediately came to Bhopal but it was tooo late he had lost his daughter .her daughter's neighbour gave him her daughter's last letter in wich she had asked his forgiveness and accepted her husband's treachery as her punishment for hurting her beloved abbu.its den he learnt tat his zeenat was suffering right from her marriage but don't even complain thinking she lost her right to share her sorrows to her abbu.she had written the letter just to request her abbu to take care of her jaan,her life zoya for whom she lived.Omar siddique bought a 6 yr sweet and naive zoya home much to the displeasure of his daughter in laws.zoya never got true love from her elder mama and mami's except her third mami who loved her vwry much.though Omar siddique dint show but zoya was his favriote grand kid.he always kept zoya protected by sending her to girls school and colg.he dint want zoya to commit the same mistake as zeenat.as a result zoya was very naive and innocent for her own good.she saw only positivity around her,never understood her mami's taunts,and never knew tat she was exceptionally beautiful who can make heads turn.her cousin mariam always used zoya's innocence whether it was to make her do her homework,or set her cupboard,or take her pocket money,borrow her new dresses never to return,and like today she tricked zoya and sneaked out of parlour to run away with her boyfriend aamir.like always even today zoya had to face the brunt of her mami's .
Hamida(Mariams mother,eldest mami of zoya):aaj sirf tumari wajah se meri mariam ki zindagi tabah huwi hain zoya,Allah tume kabhi maaf nahi karenge yaad rakhna.
Shameem(2nd mami of zoya):chodiye bhabhi ise kuch bhi kehlo apne harkaton se baaz nahi ane wali,Dheet(stubborn)hain apni bhagodi(runaway bride)maa ki tarah.
Omar siddique:SHAMEEEM,zuban sambhalke baat karo,mariam ki galti ka dosh zoya ke sar dalne ki koshish naa Kari.tum aur,mai dono Achi tarah se jaantay hain galti kiski hain.
Shameem lowers her head and gets scared of her FIL tone.
Before umar siddique can say some more he hears a soft whimpering sound of his pyaari zoya.
Zoya(with puffy eyes and uneven tone):nanabba maine kuch nahi kiya,sacchi aapi mujhe bathroom mein band karke chali gayi.Maine unhe jaan bujhke nahi bhagaya each nanabba says zoya whimpering.
Omar siddique's eyes gets moist hearing her voice,he curses himself tat he could never give zoya the love she deserved bcoz he always knew tat behind his back his DIL's and grand kids don't treat her well,his sons also keep mum due to their wife's terror but not anymore he decided today he has taken a decision for zoya wich might not seem correct but he was definately sure tat dis decision would fill zoya's life with colors and happiness.his decision of getting zoya married to asad Ahmed khan,mariam's fiance.now it was time to implement his decision.
Will Omar siddique's belief in asad-zoya prove correct?well only time can answer.
PHEWW tat was long so I want nice comments,criticisms allowed plzz give ur valuable response.dis introduction was necessary I know it was kind of boring but next chapter will have more to characters and not backstory.
Will introduce asad in next chapter.

Chapter 2
Location:guest room of siddique mansion
An intense discussion is taking place between dilshad and asad.dilshad was shocked knowing mariam,her would be DIL ran away.she was feeling terrible for asad as in first of all she had to make sky earth together to make asad ready for dis nikah now knowing tat his would be bride ran away asad would again retire into his shell.his belief otat marriage is nothing but a compromise between two mature people will strengthen and now he would never agree for nikah ever.dilshad was lost in her thoughs wen siddique Saab suggested her tat dey can still go on wid dis nikah wid his younger granddaughter zoya.he patiently explained dilshad the kind of atrocities zoya faced from her mami's.he was scared tat if something happens to him dey wouldnt mind zoya getting married to even a 70 year old.dilshad felt for poor zoya but the fact tat she was oly 19 made her think.but siddique Saab requested dilshad soo much tat she couldn't deny.thinking this to be Allah's will she relented.
Back to guest room
Asad:ammi,aap is rishtey ke liye haan kaise bol sakti hain.woh sirf 19 years ki hain ammi.najma ke umar ki hain.bacchi hain wo mujhse poore 8 daso badi.
Dilshad:bacchi nahi hain wo asad,mera khud ka nikah mehaz 17 saal mein huwa tha.kya Maine nahi sambhala tume najma ko.apne sasural ko.main sirf 18 ki thi jab tum paida huwe the kya kabhi koi kami chodi hain tumhaari parwarish mein?.
Asad:lekin ammi...
Dilshad:hum koi bahana nahi sunna chahtey asad.tumne Wada kiya tha ki tum nikah karoge.bhool Gaye kaise razia ne hamara sab ke saamne mazak udaya tha yeh kehke ki main tume is darr se shadi nahi karney de rahe taki tum hamari mutthi mein raho.ki main ek khugarz maa hoon.bhool Gaye tum.
Asad looks helplessly towards his ammi.he knew he couldn't deny his ammi.
Asad:theek hain ammi main nikah karunga zoya se.
Dilshad becomes extremely happy.she thanks Allah and prays for her son's happy married life.
Dilshad(cupping asad's face):tum nahi jantey asad aaj tumne hame kitni khushi Di hain.Allah ne kuch sochke hi tumhaara aur zoya ka rishta Tay kiya hoga,chalo tayyar hojao hum siddique Saab ku tumhara faisla sunake aatey hain.

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Hi,

Its interesting ...😊

I just loved it ,

Continue soon ...

nice plot please update soon

Nice plot
A 19 yr old zoya & 27 yr old Asad is going to get married
Zoya is too innocent
Poor girl never got any love from any one except her nanu