AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: manognasai
Interesting start...AsYa are neighbours!Love to see their encounters...Asad doesnt like his father!Waiting for Ayan's intro😃

Thanks dear...glad u enjoyed it..heres hoping that u enjoy it more.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
This sounds super interesting! I'm in :D

Hey Tanvi...good to know u enjoyed it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Lovely concept dear. Loved the note u added in the beginning.

Waiting to read further on please update soon n please pm me.

Have sent u a buddy request please accept.

Haha..u liked the note. I am glad u did😉

Will PM you and buddy request accepted.

Thanks for the comments

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: juggaad
Yay! New story!🥳

Yay...I have not lost you yet🥳

Edited by QueenOfMyCastle - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Hey Loved the ur this SS... This very good 😊

Here also both father son duo are at loggerheads...😆

Porr Asad his childhodd got bad coz of that Rashid 😡

I hate Rashid drinking alcohol in Ramajan...🤢

Now their r very rich good...😃😆

Loved the Fb and their fight wali banter ...😳

Update soon and thanks for the pm...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: nautanki_anu
Very good one Rivs, as usual 😃. Simple and well thought out and written.

Tere mann ki dabi huyi ichha poori ho gayi. Tune Rashid ka kachra kar diya. Mazaa aaya 😆 👏.

It was good to see a different dimension to the Asya relationship, that they were acquaintances from childhood. 😊

Aww...I am so glad u are reading. I know u make an exception for me..but everytime u read I feel good...inside..in the little thing called my heart🤗

Rashid ko lekar aage aage dekho hota hai kya...uski to mein poori ki poori band bajane wali hoon. *insert evil laugh*

Yes they were childhood acquaintances. I hope u enjoy what I plan to do next.😈

love u so so much...

Rivs

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Waiting eagerly di

thanks dear - whats ur name?

I will see if I can do a weekend update.

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NainaAlex

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Superb start Rivs... very interesting
Asad and Rashid at loggerheads
how is the relation between gaffur and Zoya...

do pm pls 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Hey Loved the ur this SS... This very good 😊
Here also both father son duo are at loggerheads...😆
Porr Asad his childhodd got bad coz of that Rashid 😡
I hate Rashid drinking alcohol in Ramajan...🤢
Now their r very rich good...😃😆
Loved the Fb and their fight wali banter ...😳
Update soon and thanks for the pm...😉

Thanks. Yes. I cannot have Asad love Rashid. That is my weakness. Exactly...Rashid is jerk of the first order.😆

Will update next week.

Rivs