AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14

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Tanvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

This sounds super interesting! I'm in :D

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Lovely concept dear. Loved the note u added in the beginning.

Waiting to read further on please update soon n please pm me.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: rajnid68
Son at loggerheads with father...
Missing his ammi...
Father sold his soul for riches...
1st encounter with zoya...left
Asad with a bad taste..
What about the other flashbacks. ????
Looking forward to the next update...
Thanks for the pm..

Ps:your Note was impressive. : )

Yes. When I started writing this, it was around the time Asad and Rashid were fighting over Dilshad. So I wanted to keep that theme. Yes...Rashid was money hungry just like in the show.

Yes...they met the first time, a long time ago. Let's see how their journey shapes us.

There will be lots of flashbacks.

Thanks. I had to put that note.😉

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Ani-asya
Great start di 👍🏼👍🏼
looking forward to know the past
Plz update ur destiny coming calling also..

Thanks Ani . Story will unfold slowly...with each update some flashback. And the revealation of the games.

I will start working on Destiny this week. Let me get atleast 4-5 chapters written before I update it.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: love.asad.zoya
It was awesome ... 👏 love it ... Plss continue soon 😃

thanks

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie
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Wow di this is intresting !
I love the stories which are not going along with QH.It is always refreshing and good to read these stories 😃
So Father and son do not like each other
I loved their argument.
As for Asad and Zoya
It feels like "Meri saamane wali khidki Mein ..." 😆
I am sure u know the rest !
Quite excited to read the next update
Continue soon
Loved it :)

Thanks dear. I prefer to write stand alone stories since they let me tweak some of the characteristics.

Nope father son duo do not like each other.

Hmm...saamne wali khidki..interesting idea...lets see how that goes.

I am glad u are enjoying and thanks for the comments.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: pinks2911
I just love the title.. ❤️
And the plot too is interesting..👍🏼
Thanks for the pm and update soon..😳
Excited..😎

thanks. And I am excited too

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aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Looking forward to the next
update...
Thanks for the pm..

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Awesome...! Seems interesting... a slightly different stories from the ones i have come across...! Please continue soon..!

thanks dear. I hope u continue to enjoy it