AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ash_ed
This is really nice. Didn't know you write, Rivs. Ok - I'm gonna bookmark your other works and read it too!...
Should I comment on Rashid? 🐷

Thank you for the english translation for certain parts - I appreciated it! :))

I am glad u came across this. I write on and off..not one of the regulars.

Please do comment on Rashid. Rashid is the main character here and I will make sure all my hatred for him translates here,,,😆

No worries. I started doing that with my FF and found that a lot of readers prefer the translation. I don't want u to lose the train of conversation.😉

Thanks for reading.

Rivs

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Interesting

thanks😃

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Superb story!!!! Interesting story!!! Asad & Rashid dnt share a good bond!!! Rashid did everything just to earn money than giving his family his tym! !!!! Asad & Zoya's First meeting was lyk Asya's style started with fight!!!! thanks 4 pm Update soon

Thanks dear. Yes Asad does not like Rashid. He is too hungry for money, power and status.

I am glad u enjoyed their first meeting. there is more to come...

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nautanki_anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Very good one Rivs, as usual 😃. Simple and well thought out and written.

Tere mann ki dabi huyi ichha poori ho gayi. Tune Rashid ka kachra kar diya. Mazaa aaya 😆 👏.

It was good to see a different dimension to the Asya relationship, that they were acquaintances from childhood. 😊

Edited by nautanki_anu - 11 years ago

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: akaswan
Hey this SS sounds very nice 😃

I really like the first part

And i'm already waiting for the next udapte 🤗

thanks dear. Next part next week.😃

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
where is ZO ??

Give her sometime. Let me finish the first scene atleast.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: anopama
wow this is gonna be good
so asad cam back to india
hate his dad for keeping him
away from his ammi
known zoya since childhood but dont
seem as if they were friends hope they did
become friends.
cant wait to read more
continue soon thanks for pm

Asad just came from Mumbai to Bhopal. Yes there are some people who go to any extent to show their power and reputation and if rich kids go to foreign schools, so does Asad.😆

Yes they knew each other as kids.

thanks for the comments.

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A.S.K

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Thanks dear. Yes Asad does not like Rashid. He is too hungry for money, power and status.

I am glad u enjoyed their first meeting. there is more to come...

Waiting eagerly di

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

loved it

n tnx for pm

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ashrina
Wow lovely update...poor asad
Missing his ammi...and hating his father its just a torture for him I guess
Zoya is cute and innocent...poor thing doesn't know she hurt him with her words even though she is unaware of the words
They both are just lovely
Superb update!!!
Want to read more cont soon

Yes Asad hasn't had it easy despite the fact that he never had to work hard.

Yes Zoya is cute, innocent, rude, snob all in one.

Thanks dear.