AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Welcome back Rivs..
A much anticipated updated, however you haven't revealed much..
I still stick to my notion that this is a plan by Asad and Zoya to be together..

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Nice update
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Awesom update...👏

Just love it...😊

Update nxt part soon...😃

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Ami34

@Ami34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Thanks!!!😃

Wow!!!👏

Amazing!!!⭐️

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Update soon!!!😊

Please pm me!!!😳

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nautanki_anu

@nautanki_anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Apologies for the late reply.

Lovvvely update Rivs jaan. Mazaa aa gaya padhke 👏.

I loved the way AsYa's relationship progressed, their convos, the silence between the convos which said so many things, the hugs, the kiss, everything was beautifully thought and written 😳. This update was all about AsYa and no one else coming in between as a third character so lovvved it.

Asad's dilemma of whether to stay back for Zoya or go, Zoya's state of mind of whether to stop him or let him go, both having fathers and each other yet lonely was all well written.

Enjoyed reading. Eagerly waiting for the next update as usual 😃.

Edited by nautanki_anu - 11 years ago

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Yuks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

I'm not typically one to rave when commenting on a fic but I just had to here. This is brilliant work. I just love the mystery aspect of it. Not only is the storyline interesting but its wonderfully written as well.
Here's my prediction; this is all Asad's ploy. Zoya is just a bystander in this and Asad is playing Rashid and Gaffur like pawns.

If you have a PM list, kindly ass me to it

Yuks