AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14 - Page 6

Originally posted by: neenabinu

Superb start Rivs... very interesting
Asad and Rashid at loggerheads
how is the relation between gaffur and Zoya...

do pm pls 😊

Originally posted by: rockstar_16

awesome !!!!! 👏

loved it

please continue soon

Originally posted by: ria1891

nice start...

i like it...😊

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Thanks Neena -

Are you on my buddy list. Can u add me?

You will get a glimpse of Gaffur Zoya in the next update. It will be interesting.😉

Originally posted by: metoyou

OMG, first spot! This is breaking news, call the newspapers!

Okay chalo, shuru karte hain. One warning: I am gonna be very strict 😛

Bring it on.

Chapter 1

While Ammi lived, he tolerated the man, but with Ammi gone, their relationship had all but ended

He could never forgive the man for giving him an isolated life, away from his beloved Ammi. The man who was the sole reason for Ammi's tears and heartache (This sounds very familiar...)

His pride was hurt on hearing her words

A short comment this time. You know the reason for that (I already had read the dialogues)

But those three lines kinda stood out for me. So Asad's relationship with his Abbu is not the best and unfortunately his Ammi is not there anymore. Lekin phir bhi, Asad cannot hear a bad thing about his Abbu. Perhaps he does love him, but can't show that love for to and for the man he is today.

I know and no worries.

The 10 year old Asad did not hate his father. He did not even know the reality. He only knew that father worked hard and moved them into such a palatial house. Hence he was proud. Let me make one thing clear. Any Asad I write will never love Rashid.🤢

I wonder what Rashid has done in the past that his own son hates him/does not like him. Ek baat toh saaf hain; the Siddiqui's and the Khan's are not best friends...

Let's just keep it at he used wrong means to amass wealth. he is inconstruction so substandard materials, shabby work, cost cutting, u know the likes.

Another thing Rivi: In the flashback Zoya is only 7-8 years matlab both are now teenagers? She 12-13 years and he a few years older? Because, the current date is in 2013 and the flashback was in 2008...

Dhyaan se padho...its 1998. Which makes Zoya 22-23 and Asad 25.

See you on the other side Rivi.

Keep it

Thanks darling

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Originally posted by: metoyou

Wooww...It's better for me not to say anything more. I could not even count those years!

Will you forgive me for it if I say I just woke up and my eyes were still sleepy..? 😛 Sorry!

Yeah, Asad loving his father is something quite unusual...