SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

marcoe

@marcoe

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Beautiful update

The equation between asya is changing

Zoya is so mature unlike d actual 1

I loved the update

Continue soon

Now that they shared their sorrows m sure it's not too far when they will start liking each other or they already do

Hopefully asad will join them in d park

It wud be fun to read

Quote

radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Beautiful, really amazing update 👏

thank u ❤️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

1ksk

@1ksk

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Very touching update, Asad torn between his past and future has been unable to live in the present. Hope he can sort things out and enjoy the present.

please update soon, curious to read the next update.

Great writing , enjoyed every but of it

Quote

Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

love the update... will comment soon

Quote

Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

we always get zoya Pov

went do we get to here asad Pov

specially about zoya

Quote

sabrinsz91

@sabrinsz91

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Beautiful...very touching 👏

Quote

Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#437

Wow!!! super duper awesome chappy!!!
written very well!!! loved the entire chapter!!
now eagerly waiting for next!!
do continue soonish!!

Quote

Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Quote

sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#439

awesome.

loved it.

amazingly written

u portrayed their emotions very well that i felt like watching the whole scene infront of me.

glad asad shared his insecurities with zoya.

poor asad he is torn btw his fear n love regarding to naina.

glad to see the equation btw asya changing.

now the are opening to each other.

thanx for mentioning me

plz update soon

Quote

jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#440

awe lovely chapter dear👏

so equation btw Asya is changing🥳

loved how u showed mature side of Zoya 😃

Asad shared his deepest & most painful secret wid her👍🏼

& she understood him well & gave a very wise advice😛

loved d dialogue u used where she says i know what Naina feels cuz i was once in her place👏

remember i even asked u 2 put it in some part😆😉

so they were going 2 water park

now i guess nxt updt will b happy wala wid WP 😉

Ok so one thing i want is Naina not 2 b Asad's daughter👎🏼 no no i have nothing against that sweet girl😳 i just want Asad 2 have babies wid Zoya only.😉 I already cringe when anybody make Asad or Zoya intimate wid some1 else.🤢 & i don't want 2 know about Asad married life wid Tanveer😡🤪 just want Asya 2 have their 1st child wid each other. & as Zoya said Asad should accept Naina no matter if she's his daughter or not.😃 they can give her place of their 1st child after mrg😉 but not biological parents😳

I don't know if u write story regularly or completed it already & posting in small small installments but still rqst karne main kya jata hai😆😎😉

& yes thanku so much 4 d dedication dear u made my day🤗

Loved Dillu & Zoya's convo in dis part😛

"Oh Phuppi... nothing much... it's just that I have completed my assignment at work and I feel so relaxed today... I didn't realize how energy consuming it was till I finished it today... today I am having the same feeling I used to get in school and college after exams get over." Zoya laughed.

🤣She's so cute

no one wants to entertain me. Dilshad imitated Zoya's sad pout

🤣Dillu is also getting spoiled in her company