SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 46

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome.

loved it.

amazingly written

u portrayed their emotions very well that i felt like watching the whole scene infront of me.

glad asad shared his insecurities with zoya.

poor asad he is torn btw his fear n love regarding to naina.

glad to see the equation btw asya changing.

now the are opening to each other.

thanx for mentioning me

plz update soon

Originally posted by: jas91

awe lovely chapter dear👏

so equation btw Asya is changing🥳
thank you Jas..😃
yea equation has changed and now they will become more close.

loved how u showed mature side of Zoya 😃

Asad shared his deepest & most painful secret wid her👍🏼

& she understood him well & gave a very wise advice😛

loved d dialogue u used where she says i know what Naina feels cuz i was once in her place👏

remember i even asked u 2 put it in some part😆😉..

yea i remember you asked.. and i told you i have actually planned it for a future chapter.. and now it came.😊

so they were going 2 water park

now i guess nxt updt will b happy wala wid WP 😉
Yea it will be a relaxed wala chapter after an emotional one.

Ok so one thing i want is Naina not 2 b Asad's daughter👎🏼 no no i have nothing against that sweet girl😳 i just want Asad 2 have babies wid Zoya only.😉 I already cringe when anybody make Asad or Zoya intimate wid some1 else.🤢 & i don't want 2 know about Asad married life wid Tanveer😡🤪 just want Asya 2 have their 1st child wid each other. & as Zoya said Asad should accept Naina no matter if she's his daughter or not.😃 they can give her place of their 1st child after mrg😉 but not biological parents😳

I don't know if u write story regularly or completed it already & posting in small small installments but still rqst karne main kya jata hai😆😎😉

hehe... i know many feels the way you do.. i have actually not written down the story.. i write chapter by chapter and upload it everytime i finish a chapter... but i have the plot planned in my head... and i have two plots in my mind because i myself is not yet sure whether its best if Naina is made as Asad's daughter or not... lets see.. i have to think of how future story should unfold as well and have to think of Naina as a character as well because she is equally an important part of my story as AsYa... so lets see.

& yes thanku so much 4 d dedication dear u made my day🤗

you are welcome Dear.

Loved Dillu & Zoya's convo in dis part😛

"Oh Phuppi... nothing much... it's just that I have completed my assignment at work and I feel so relaxed today... I didn't realize how energy consuming it was till I finished it today... today I am having the same feeling I used to get in school and college after exams get over." Zoya laughed.

🤣She's so cute

no one wants to entertain me. Dilshad imitated Zoya's sad pout

🤣Dillu is also getting spoiled in her company
hehe.. yea Dillu also gets carried away in Zoe's company.
Thanks for the comment and your feedback Jas.😊

Originally posted by: jas91

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad shared his fear to zoya finally. He wanted to know abt naina but scared to lose her. Zoya told him to find out the truth so u will be able to accept the truth & naina as well.
Asad knew zoya was right & now it's time to finish this topic once at all
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm