SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 45

I was waiting for this part!!
When dey will share their past!!
Asad trusts Zoya enough
he shared bitter truth which
he had been hiding from everyone!!
Zoya tried to comfort him!
!Hope he finds out truth!
!Their is equation is changing nww!!!

Originally posted by: marcoe

Beautiful update

The equation between asya is changing

Zoya is so mature unlike d actual 1

I loved the update

Continue soon

Now that they shared their sorrows m sure it's not too far when they will start liking each other or they already do

Hopefully asad will join them in d park

It wud be fun to read

Thank you Dear.😃

hehe yea Zoya is mature in this one.. Asad is so complicated that he needs someone who is fun loving as well as mature.. and in the serial even i missed seeing mature sides of Zoya. She was mature as well but they did not highlight that aspect except on rare occasions.
They already like each other and is drawn to each other but they haven't realized it yet.
thanks for the comment and glad you are liking the story.😊

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Beautiful, really amazing update 👏

thank u ❤️

thank you Dear... glad you loved the update.😃

Originally posted by: 1ksk

Very touching update, Asad torn between his past and future has been unable to live in the present. Hope he can sort things out and enjoy the present.

please update soon, curious to read the next update.

Great writing , enjoyed every but of it

yea.. Asad is not able to live in the present and unable to embrace life... but things will fall in place slowly.

Glad you enjoyed it. thank you for commenting Dear.😃

Originally posted by: Linsie

love the update... will comment soon

Thanks Linsie... waiting.😃

Originally posted by: Linsie

we always get zoya Pov

went do we get to here asad Pov

specially about zoya

yea i guess its mostly Zoya's point of view... but thats because of the way story is unfolding and because of character differences... Asad is reserved and living with a lot of emotional baggage which he did not want to share with anyone till now... so Asad is not very proactive in the story so far where as Zoya is and it is Zoya who is bringing out Asad from where he is hiding... thats the reason why its mostly through Zoya you are seeing things.. but whenever appropriate i have brought out Asad's feelings as well... like in last chapter, in the moonlight scene and what followed it was mostly Asad's feelings and his point of view regarding Zoya..

And later after Asad really falls for Zoya and becomes more proactive, Asad's point of view will be there more... hope you understand what i mean.😊

Originally posted by: sabrinsz91

Beautiful...very touching 👏

thank you Dear... glad you liked the update.😃

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

Wow!!! super duper awesome chappy!!!
written very well!!! loved the entire chapter!!
now eagerly waiting for next!!
do continue soonish!!

thank you Dear... glad you loved the update... how have you been?

will try to update soon but can't promise.😃

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

thanks..😃.. so sweet of you.