SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 42

Originally posted by: Linsie

thanks Linsie..😃

Originally posted by: sasir

update soon

will try to update by tomorrow.. sorry for the delay.😊

Originally posted by: suganti

pls update soon

will try to update by tomorrow.😊

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 14...

Asad caught zoya and najma antics... yes all three having good time...
when asad came... little bit frustrated gone
mention about naina's birthday..
he supposed to do this for but zoya is doing it..
Asad feel bit out...

Zoya behavior .. made asad smile .. inwardly nice..
he also learn to be around zoya...
knowing her worries ... for Naina...
somewhere inside i think zoya is seeing herself...

Thank you Linsie... yea Asad is comfortable around Zoya and he started to listen to Zoya as well.
Yea Zoya sees herself in Naina and thats why she understands Naina well.😃

Originally posted by: Linsie

Asad watching zoya in trance.. sign of getting closer...

something happening to him...

he is trying to get zoya attention...

so he did.. by helping zoya prepare for the party...

najma was shock..to see asad changes...she is happy for him

see him relax from his sadness

party asad was ...and the end he felt emotional...

zoya is watching asad closely just like he is doing...

yea Asad is drawn towards Zoya, but he didn't realize it yet.. and even Zoya has feelings towards him.. she keeps looking out for him and wondering about his feelings but even she does not realize why she is doing it... lets see how things goes..
thanks for the comment Linsie... really appreciate it that you read and give comments and reviews for each chapter this way.😃

Originally posted by: Linsie

awesome update .. on 4 of them najma, zoya , naina and asad...

thanks Linsie.😃.. glad you loved the update..
PS.. i see that you are going to be inactive from today.. very sad.. are you having exams or something?

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Sorry for late comments!!
Was inactive bcoz of studies!!
Just back now

hey thats OK.. glad you have started reading my story once again.. its been so long even i forgot whether you were following it or not.

Welcome back to the Forum and hope your exams went well.😃

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

part 8.
Asad said harsh things in anger!!
Zoya hurt!!
Dilshad is also hurt!!
Dilshad and asad recollecting past!!
And here enters kaali billi !! Tanveer!!

Yea Asad, Dilshad and Zoya everyone got hurt... but that emotional outburst was needed to change things.

hehe yea everyone s pissed off by Billi's entry here as well.😆

thanks for the comment Dear.😊

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Most needed character sketch!!
Yep we are young and we want a Prince charming who is meant only for us!!
But it happens only in fairytales!!

Thank you Dear.😃.. glad you liked the character sketch and understand that such Prince charming exists in fairy tales only.. our own PC may not be so perfect but we can still make them a PC and we can make our life a Fairy tale as well... thats what matters.😃

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

part 9. Tanveer being Ms.Salwaar Kameez & Tameez tehzeeb!! Caring for asad!! I m sry if tanveer was a ive character den also i can't say good things abt dat billi!!! Dilshad pushed asad in marrying tanveer!! Rehaan doubtful behavior!!

Yea she was MS. tehzeeb and Tameez as usual and showed fake concern for Asad... but Asad didn't fall for that... if not for Dilshad he would have never thought of marrying her.😊