SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 55

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

such an endearing update!!
loved asya's bits...
n the change in asad...good going!!

especially feeling happy for naina...

continue soon

thanks Dear😃.. glad you liked the update... yea Asad is slowly changing... but right now he doesn't even realize it.😉

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...

beautifully written...

luv the way hw asad n zoya are bonding between with each other...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

thanks Jaz.. happy to know that you really loved this update and how Asad and Zoya's relationship is progressing.😃

Originally posted by: jas91

Are don't cry dear even i m very emotional wid this decision but i still stick 2 it. I have been following this story since d 1st part & this & every Asya story is special 2 me. I still have my points & u have ur points but i don't want us 2 justify each other cuz i respect u as a writer & frnd & want 2 maintain our frndship like that. At d end its ur story & i think i shouldn't have interfered at d 1st place itself but u know na once u love something u can't help but put ur inputs so just shared my thoughts wid u. My intentions were never 2 influence ur story.

& Honestly i would not want 2 continue this if Asad is Naina's father cuz it will only hurt & make me sad & if i won't b happy after reading it how will i give u my honest replies saying its fantastic & i loved it while i won't b. Honestly this story is very close 2 my heart & u don't how sad i feel leaving it like this but i can't help. Don't blame me blame my heart.😳😆

Jas sorry for my late reply... as you know i was away from this thread.

As for Tanveer, Jas i didn't mean that she deserves forgiveness.. certainly Asad should never forgive her... but she herself will realize her mistakes once she looses everything including Naina for whom she will come back.. and then she herself will turn a new leaf... thats what i meant.

And Jas yea if it would make you sad you should certainly not read it.. i am sorry i couldn't make you happy and i wish i could have done.. but after thinking a lot about future story i feel its best to follow it that way.😭

Originally posted by: jas91

More than u i m sad cuz if i quit this story u r writing Broken wings only which will b completed b4 this what will i do after this.😭 This was ur 1st story i read & fell in love wid.😃 I m gonna miss u so bad.😭🤗

even i'm gonna miss you very much Jas.. and i'm feeling sad even now.😭

anyway for the time being there's Broken Wings so lets be happy there.😃

And let's see after that.

yaha kya discussion chaling???
whoz gonna quit???
is someone planning to give me a heart attack here??
😡 😲

Originally posted by: kaussar

Jas sorry for my late reply... as you know i was away from this thread.

As for Tanveer, Jas i didn't mean that she deserves forgiveness.. certainly Asad should never forgive her... but she herself will realize her mistakes once she looses everything including Naina for whom she will come back.. and then she herself will turn a new leaf... thats what i meant.

And Jas yea if it would make you sad you should certainly not read it.. i am sorry i couldn't make you happy and i wish i could have done.. but after thinking a lot about future story i feel its best to follow it that way.😭

Originally posted by: kaussar

even i'm gonna miss you very much Jas.. and i'm feeling sad even now.😭

anyway for the time being there's Broken Wings so lets be happy there.😃

And let's see after that.

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

yaha kya discussion chaling???
whoz gonna quit???
is someone planning to give me a heart attack here??
😡 😲

If there is any update plz tell me i like this story