FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 80

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Back then Dilshad was too harsh on the poor girl n now she wants her back

no, she just wants to meet her...not want her back as she thinks she has moved on

Am really proud of Zoya,she gave her own bone marrow to Dilshad...i didnt expect the story to take a leap of 5years bt it all good,Zoya n her kid Farhaan.

no no...she didn't give her bone marrow. She just paid for the procedure. I didn't want to make it that cliched

So all the while Asad was being imprison bt he wanted to complete his mission first
I guess we will have loads of flashback...right? let's see😃
Awesome update

Originally posted by: sjain

LOL I had this faint idea and leap will happen :) so YAY my thought was in right direction

most of my ffs have that😆

It was another heart wrenching chapter :( I have to mention you have justified the title "FAASLE" so well with the chapters gradually *claps* the circumstances due to which ASYA got away from each other are so apt :) Fabulous ..Songs always add that little extra bit to the writing and in this situation as well you chose beautiful song and used it so nice <3..their hope their pain love everything just pierced my heart :'( the surprising part for me was that Zoya knows about Rashid and Asad's relationship ship I wasn't expecting this truth to come out that soon ..what about Rashid does he know that Zoya is Sidique's daughter ?

yes, he does because Zoya mentioned that he accepted her despite her abbu while dilshaad rejected her

and another thing which was confusing was Humeira O.o how come she is Zoya's half sister ?

u will find later but essentially, Humeira and Zeenat are real sisters with Zoya sandwiched in between

:S :O Asad Farhaan's bodyguard EEKKSS I am expecting ASYA meeting in next chapter so excited when you will update next ? probably thur/fri

Originally posted by: Enchantress

God, what was that. That was just unexpected.. You know this story is so powerful. Lemme tell you if it is actually made into a serial people out their would be mad for it... You know I so want it to be on television with the same characters as in QH. May be season two.. No one , I say no one can ever point a single mistake in your story ever. Its just "perfect".. "Dhamakedar".. "chumeshwari.." "Stupedo fantabulosly factastical".. You are amazing...

thanks enchantress...would love to see QH part 2 with faasle...just need a director, producer, actors, finances etc😆 but i wll take that as a compliment...thanks

5 years leap and so much happened. You know the best part it never did the story ever drag. Never.. The characters, oh they all have grown so well. I officially declare "Faasle" to be favorite story of mine.. aww thanks. I only drag romantic parts...rest are fast paced😉

Just amazing...

No one more words to describe how I feel. Would just say keep it up.. And do continue soon.

Dee😃

Originally posted by: Annu..

I thought Asad's family is kinda conservative.. if they are, then keeping in mind the fact that hindu-muslim marriage is forbidden in Islam, how come Dilshad can react so normal on Karan being a hindu.. very strange!! 🤔

Asad's family is religious and righteous but are open minded. In India, hindu muslim alliances are not looked down upon as much as they are in other countries. Even Gul has a Hindu hubby

so Anwar had come to Mumbai to meet Zoya.. what abt Dilshad?? did he meet her too.. how was their meeting like?? flashback please!!

Dilshaad doesn't meet any of her relatives...but let me see if I can incorporate a scene between them. Not a bad idea

did Dilshad forgive Zoya and all her lies in her heart? why? bcoz Asad is missing so there is no point in still holding grudges against her?

Dilshaad is a tender hearted lady. She was of course upset about the lies and siddiqui relation but when Zoya came back after asad's news, she did find comfort with her and must have realized that Zoya is a different person than her abby. When she woke up from her nap, she shunned Zoya for Zoya's sake

doesn't navy inform itself abt the missing officers to their families at their concerned addresses the moment they get some confirmed info regarding their whereabouts?😕 especially abt someone who was missing for over 5 yrs..

wait and see...this was a secret and risky release and once he came back, he didn't want to inform his family.

Zeenat is already Ghafoor's illegitimate daughter.. and now Humaira too.. means Z-H are real sisters.. how come Zoya didn't know abt Humaira before.. even Zeenat kept longing for her father all those years but never for her real little sister Humaira.. how weird!! 😵

wait and see Annu...you like to jump the gun yaar. I can't write everything in one part. Thoda rehem karo bhai

why didn't Razia marry Ghafoor.. matlab do do na-jaayaz auladein ho gaeen, per aisi bhi kiya majburi ke shaadi ka khayaal na aaya..

Razia ko jab milogi tab pataa chal jaayega😆

seems like Razia forced Rashid to make Humaira his DIL.. Razia knew that if Humaira gets married to someone else, she might get divorced after revealing of her secret of illness to her susraal.. in Ayaan's case, she will ultimately get sympathy..

Ghafoor-Zoya relationship is beyond my understanding.. Baap-Beti dono hi niraale hein..👎🏼

wait and see again...yes life mein aise baap beti hote hain Annu...both stubborn and with different ideologies. If he had been a more loving and affectionate dad while growing up, things would be different

Rashid is a cheater, doing illegal business, dumped his first wife and kids, but still we should take him as a man who had been betrayed by others and by fate.. really??

every person has good and bad

Zoya ka ye yaqeen ke Asad musibat mein mujhe dhoondh lenge, thoda kamzor pad gaya.. Asad aaye zaroor hein lekin musibatein talne ke baad, aur halchal machaane ke liye..

if Ayaan is Prithvi of Faasle AK version, then there is a high possibility of him turning into a bad guy.. wont be surprised if he attempts to kill Asad out of jealousy after knowing he is Zoya's Asad.

let's see...

part 27 = jalebi

'mujhe fakhr hai tum par'.. there is H after k..will correct that😃

I guess ur QH forum readers didn't read ur old ffs.. they don't know taking 5 years leap in the story achanak se, is one permanent feature of all ur stories.. so here it was due actually.. 😆

yes, that's what i said. If i don't have leaps, my stories will last 100 parts😆 and I don't have that much patience

Originally posted by: urvisaini

5 yes leap
Sound good
I really wanna see farhan recognizing Asad as mr khan cause the bond he's sharing with zoya is so strong and zoya's open book for him. Moreover since zoya's portrait is still incomplete he'll should somehow recognize Asad That's what I want to show here. An autistic kid communicating more than normal people😃
Ayaan would be hell lotta shocked if that happens.
His son taking his brothers name instead of his fathers.

But let's see what you have planned.

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Speechlesss...yarrr...sangeeta dee...u r d bst writer i've found in IF... How can u write so amazingly... Are u refering sum book for dis FF?? Or else..how could any1 thnk of such ideas...5 YEARS LEAP...who cud hav imagined dis twist in d story... When i read d first line i was like..hey did i miss the prev part... I rechecked n found no..it has taken 5 years leap... D first paragraph gave me shock...dn slowly slowly i fell more in lov wid mah zoya..c's still waitin 4 Asad...awww... Ab toh dying to read nxt part...plzzz update soon...luv u...

Originally posted by: bheegi

Originally posted by: sjain