FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 79

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was absolutely amazing 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

oh this was AAAmazing.. I went through the previous pages thinking I missed a chapter but no. this was indeed a leap. oh boy, I just couldn't digest the fact that Farhaan & Zoe had a blood relation but now it's ok, but still I didn't get it how?


Humeira and Zoya are half sisters. Farhan is Humeira and Ayaan's son
tears kept running down till the end of this part. the Dilshad Najma convo was so emotional.
I really appreciate Rashid's help to Zoe in letting her settle down here. his story is really heart wrenching though it was his mistakes that caused it.
Asad was held hostage. I knew of course Asda was alive. I know he must be dying to see Zoe after his indirect proposal. he'll be so proud of his love, the day when he sees her living only with his memories.
Zoe's Taj mahal really had me crying and instilled a hope in me too that someday your deepest wish would come true. I ust hope to see them together soon. is Asad going to be in disguise?
now the extremely interesting part is gonna come up when Asad meets Zoe as Farhaan's bodyguard and sees him calling her ammmi. U bet😃
plz update soon.


Thanks rare pearl
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prash_FF

What an update!!! Every bit of it worth the wait of 3 days. I have no words to express how awesome you and you story are. Continue to take us for a ride as always!!!

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Thanks Prash. I have added parts of your PM on this post

I will come down to the story and some of my suggestions for each point as well.
- Zoya has evolved and matured so well. But still want to see her back in her bubbly, messy, silly and cranky avatar. Hope she hadn't lost it in her miseries.

yes, of course, even if Zoya has changed her basic personality will remain same😃
Suggestion:
Is it possible that Asad will reconcile and rekindle this in her?

Asad will be happy to have her back- messy or not messy😆
- The way dilshad thought of her and sent her away for her own good was out of the blue. I knew that she was good but I thought the wounds ran deep to cause this fury in her. But gosh I was wrong but am happy that I was wrong. This makes her character even stronger, caring and gentle at the same time.

yeah, Dilshaad didn't want her to ruin her life (this change happened after Zoya came back after Asad's news)
Suggestion :
So will dilshad ask her to return back to her home after she knows that she is still waiting on asad? But I am not sure that can happen. Bcos with Farhan now in Zoya's care and AK being their bodyguard I dont think he can afford to come near his family and so there does the hope of zoya coming back to her house. May be dilshad will take care of farhan when zoya is busy going forward and AK can linger in the background taking care of his ammi as well as farhan but still seems far-fetched I know. But just a thought.

Dilshad just wants to meet her...she hasn't said she wants her back because she hopes Zoya has settled in her life somewhere but of course this will change when she meets her and asad
- Farhan is new and unexpected. Like the innocent child who has kept zoya alive and in sanity when she could have been lost even more.
Suggestion:
So as per the track, farhan is going to be the reason to bring them back together. But is there gonna be more rough times. Obviously rough times macke the future sweet moments even sweeter.

let's see...we have to sort out all the tangled relations
- AK is back. Well this was expected. I am still wondering if he will misunderstand zoya first. But eventually he will have to look beyond the facade. Will he give her a tough time bcos she went along with the wrong guys(read rashid and ayan)? Only you can tell.
Suggestion:
I would not like him to go all romatic and mushy at once. Maybe he should get some of his stern behaviour back (read akdu) that will make zoya go back to her own self.

asad is asad...his duty always comes first😉 but will he be able to resist her when he finds all the truth??😉

Moreover can you please reply to this PM as usual but with a small change. Would love it if you reply like you do in the comments section. You know reply to lof of points here and there as to what is going on.


Thanks again Prash
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fee-fee

I knew you wouldn't let us down Bheegi! Our Asad is back! Please have him and Zoya reunite soon, even if their reunion is secretly done please just unite then because ur writing is so good that I can feel their longing for each other.


not to worry...of course there will be angst but all will be good eventually😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: delena90

So he's back! Poor Zoya, he's going to think that Farhan is her bio kid and that she's married to Ayaan isn't he? Ouch!


twist pe twist😆

What happened to Humeira? Is she sick again or dead? Lots of questions.wait and see
Dilshaad is upset about what she has done and Najma has a boyfriend - I like the development there. And of course Asad is now going to meet his Zoya again. Brilliant set up Sangeeta, can't wait to read more. Thanks Pri. Yes, i couldn't make Dilshaad that heartless for too long...i love her too much

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hsvs

Brilliant, Sangeeta! 😊


So Asad is now back - he was a POW! Can think of a hundred different ways of how you will have him meet Zoya! Will you for a MU route with Asad thinking that Zoya is now married to Ayaan?

let's see how it plays out😃

Is Humeira dead in this one? or does she have MPD and hence sick at the moment? Whose daughter is she? Razia's or is she Zainab's daughter from a different father?

bold parts are accurate😃

Look, not fair, you cant keep stopping at all these critical junctures and leave us with so many questions! Please please update soon! 😃 u know my constraints now😉 Thanks harini. Will try to update by Thursday evening my time

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

at first my reaction was 😲
then ayan came nd it sunk in that farhan is humaira's child lol
karan wahi lmaooo...that's for all his fans on this forum😆
Di this ff just keeps getting better bd better...ok I don't have words to say how fabulous u are!!
ps-i looked up the disease autism nd it was written it has some genetic connection...so did he get it ftom humaira :S


Autism is a complex disorder. Yes, genetics can be involved but there are many other factors...i will try to describe details in coming chapters (thodi education via the ff😃)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fanraya

OMG I am speechless, what a twist, Sangeeta, you are just amazing, this story is getting interesting day by day, too good,better than the actual show, you should join Gul's Cvs team..


her team is fabulous...I write without constraints or restraints😆 but those poor writers have many

I can not tell you how much I wait for your updates. amazing the way you have showed the leap, I really hope Asad and Zoe meets soon at Zoe's Taj Mahal? Why do I get a feeling that little farhaan is going to recognize Asad, but will not be able to convey to Zoe? or he will try to let Zoe know? or let Asad know that he has seen him somewhere? as only he is the one who has seen Asad in her room? Great prediction😃 An autistic kid who can't communicate will reveal a lot more than people who can speak😉

I am sure you are going to make their meeting magical, I am really looking forward to Asad and Zoe;s meeting.. I really hope Asad will not have MU about Farhaan.. I can not tell you howI am so hooked to your story, its just so beautiful, thanks a lot for these wonderful updates, please update soon, eagerly waiting.. A big hug to you🤗 you are a very talented and gifted writer..👍🏼 Thanks again fanraya...I hope u all like the Asya milan scenes because they are my fav part of this story😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

Gosh yo gave me a heart ache😆 It was 7 in the morning when i opened this thread..the first 2 lines made my head spin..i swear i dint have the courage to read on... just wen i made up my mind to read it, my phone battery died😆 it took almost 4 hours for me to convince myself and open this thread again(how could i miss my fav fanfic?😳)Such a fabulous update..eventhough i was sure zo dint marry ayan..i was secretly praying god that i should be right😆and the line FARHAN- ZOYA'S NEPHEW came as a life saviour😆 now asad is gonna misunderstand? yo are way tooo aweeesoommeee❤️fantabulous update..yo are a great story teller👏


yo ve given precap fr the next update in some of yur earlier updates right..ll be great if yo continue doing that😃 but anyways if yo don want its ok dont give precaps😳


Thanks aswini...yeah, just wanted to give a small jhatka at the beginning of the chap but did sort it out by the end of the chap because I didn't want to torture u all more😆

Instead of precap...i will give u a song to watch on u tube..will post it later😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome... the story was gripping nd well written... hats off to u

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