FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 78

I thought Asad's family is kinda conservative.. if they are, then keeping in mind the fact that hindu-muslim marriage is forbidden in Islam, how come Dilshad can react so normal on Karan being a hindu.. very strange!! 🤔

so Anwar had come to Mumbai to meet Zoya.. what abt Dilshad?? did he meet her too.. how was their meeting like?? flashback please!!

did Dilshad forgive Zoya and all her lies in her heart? why? bcoz Asad is missing so there is no point in still holding grudges against her?

doesn't navy inform itself abt the missing officers to their families at their concerned addresses the moment they get some confirmed info regarding their whereabouts?😕 especially abt someone who was missing for over 5 yrs..

Zeenat is already Ghafoor's illegitimate daughter.. and now Humaira too.. means Z-H are real sisters.. how come Zoya didn't know abt Humaira before.. even Zeenat kept longing for her father all those years but never for her real little sister Humaira.. how weird!! 😵

why didn't Razia marry Ghafoor.. matlab do do na-jaayaz auladein ho gaeen, per aisi bhi kiya majburi ke shaadi ka khayaal na aaya..

seems like Razia forced Rashid to make Humaira his DIL.. Razia knew that if Humaira gets married to someone else, she might get divorced after revealing of her secret of illness to her susraal.. in Ayaan's case, she will ultimately get sympathy..

Ghafoor-Zoya relationship is beyond my understanding.. Baap-Beti dono hi niraale hein..👎🏼

Rashid is a cheater, doing illegal business, dumped his first wife and kids, but still we should take him as a man who had been betrayed by others and by fate.. really??

Zoya ka ye yaqeen ke Asad musibat mein mujhe dhoondh lenge, thoda kamzor pad gaya.. Asad aaye zaroor hein lekin musibatein talne ke baad, aur halchal machaane ke liye..

if Ayaan is Prithvi of Faasle AK version, then there is a high possibility of him turning into a bad guy.. wont be surprised if he attempts to kill Asad out of jealousy after knowing he is Zoya's Asad..

part 27 = jalebi

'mujhe fakhr hai tum par'.. there is H after k..

I guess ur QH forum readers didn't read ur old ffs.. they don't know taking 5 years leap in the story achanak se, is one permanent feature of all ur stories.. so here it was due actually.. 😆

Originally posted by: Aye12345

Oh my God!! You just keep making it more and more better every time you update!! When i read the first few lines of it, there were so many things going through my head: 'Five years later' - Wait a second, what in the world happened, where have i been all this time, did i miss something? 'Farhan calling Zoya Ammi!!' - Held my heart; thought i was having a heart attack, then calmed down because my stupid brain realised that he was probably Humaira's and Ayaan's child. I felt relieved and then i felt sad again because that means that Humaira is no more?

I haven't revealed anything there...wait for next few updates to find out

Anyways i carried on reading and i couldn't help but feel sad and happy at the same time, because everybody in a way moved on slightly, but at the same time, they were all still hoping that everything can go back to the way it was!! But i'm sooo glad that Akram and Ghafoor are out of the picture, hopefully!! And now, Asad will have to guard Farhan and hopefully he will come face to face with Zoya *jumps up and down* i'm sooo excited!! I hope you can continue soon, i absolutely LOVE this ff, thank you so so MUCH!! x

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Ohk firstly i am so so so sad for commenting so late😭...i know you won't mind but my heart broke a little...the one day that i wasn't constantly stalking your post and i missed it,your best and your favourite wala update i guess and i missed it and by so much😭

I want you to catch up on your sleep instead😆

Well coming to the update...it was amazing as usual and so so unpredictable...i didn't expect a leap and that too a five year long leap😲and well at first wen i read zoya being addressed as a mom my heart leapt with joy thinking is asa really back coz i knew for sure that zoya couldn't have moved on with her life but then wen her ayaan addressing her i feared that the most dreaded scenario has come true but two lines into into conversation nd i knew no no nothing like that has happened and l knew for sure that Farhan is not zoya's son...

A karan wahi fan are you di?😃

Not really...he is a bachcha 😆 but this forum seems to like him a lot that's why I included him here

well i knew Dilshad couln't stay mad an angry at zoya foreever..I think she is hurt more for hurting zoya...she did everything for zoya and her future only if she knew asad n his family were and will be her everything😊Zoya paid for dilshad's traetment well that wasn't a surprise a daughter would do anything for her mother but m glad ilshad has finally agreed to meet zoya...

yes,my asad is back and yes yes yes my guess was right he did end up in Dubai😃and i have a strong feeling that the tip off was from Zeenat as she had visited Dubai the same time...

Zeenat visited Dubai 5 years ago but Asad just got released...u will be surprised when u find out the truth😉

Agar zinda raha, tho hamesha unke paas rahoonga aur agar nahin, tho unse aur zyaada door kaise jaa sakta hoon?"this line brought tears to my eyes di and i am still pretty shooken up...M proud of asad a true soldier of his nation...so asad is going to come across his past really soon...him driving by his house and getting overwhelmed was beautiful di and how unfortunate that a brother couldn't be present wen her sister ha been proposed for marriage..."Kyun umeed rakh raha hoon main? Of course she won't be here. Five years is a long time. Only if he knew that fo zoya time has stool still since the day he went missing..

i love how zoya his helping Farhan to live as a normal child reminds of the serial 'aapki antara'...the idea of her Taj Mahal and being only estricted to her and Farhan shows the purity and sanctity of the relationship that has grown stronger over the years...the monologue was beautiful di...lagta hai yeh painting bhi aapka intezaar kar rahi hai!"you manage to moisten my eyes and give me goose bumps yet again👏

I knew zoya would develop a geat bond with Rashid...my go m on fie...my guesses are coming true..aren't they?😃gaffur just left zoya never ever bothered to check up on her😕

let's see....

So zoya doesn't know about Rashid's illegal activities and his involvement in asad's disapperance..

yes, Rashid has purposely shielded Zoya from the shady side of his business

.i wonnder what turn their relationship will take wen she comes to know the truth..ohk so ayaan and zoya have a strange relationship expected...she loved humeira's son which I guessed in the beginning as her own but Humeira being Zoya's half sister was a complete shocker...so i guess Razia and gaffur have two daughters Zeenat and Humeira assuming Gaffur wasn't that a ladies' man😆 Correct!

Ohk so zoya developing such a strong bond with Farhan and humeira being no where in this update i think either she passed away or she is really really sick but i hope its neither

i will elaborate on Humeira later. Had a hard time fitting everything in one update

So finally the brothers are face to face..i wonder wen will asad come fact to face with zoya and discover that his father is alive and has been in mumbai all along... will he misunderstand her wen he comes to know that she has been living with Rashid all along? what do u think? So far ur predictions have been right😃

P.S.-I know i can't possibly explain how brilliant this chapter was👏i love you bass🤗and m sad and zorry for being so late😭i failed as a stalker this time😭 Love u too and no need to stalk😆 in exchange for precious sleep

Originally posted by: webuser7

😲Sangeeta, now that update was a stunner! Fast paced tho pehle se hi tha, is mein tho 5 saal ka leap! Wah! Twist isse kehte hain! Completely unpredictable! 😉

Thanks RK...people who have read my old ffs won't say that because most of my ffs have leaps😆

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Some highlights for me:

• Farhan: Bless you for saying Autism is not a handicap. Loved the way Farhan is OK with physical contact with Zoya and dabbles in finger painting. Normally such kids avoid social contact, right? Shows how special Zoya is! Aren't autistic kids also gifted, meaning their brain is especially developed/advanced in something? Ex. Dustin Hoffman's character in Rainman had a photographic memory. Will Farhan have a "gift"? Autistic kids have a spectrum of symptoms- from mental retradation to super intelligence. The common theme is poor communication/language and social skills. That's why Farhan is late in talking and so far has only bonded with Zoya...we will find out why later
• Main jahaan rahoon: What a beautiful song! I am currently listening to it! It actually made me cry thinking of the lovers separating!! Where's that box of Kleenex when you need it? As you said, we are getting unpredictably emotional as we "age"!! Damn the Fateh Alis (No offense meant. I am a big fan). Their songs are so good. The emotional ones are so soulful and moving! Oh...i love this song too. I had to listen to this song 10 times while writing the part...songs help me conceptualize the part that's why I usually include one in every part
• Humeira: is Zoya's half sister?! Huh?! 😕 From which parent? Siddiqui? Who's the mother Razia? That would make her Zeenat's sister. Another mother? Siddiqui had 3 women in his life? How did Rashid allow Siddiqui's daughter to marry his son? Why do I feel Humeira is Zainab's daughter? Did that contribute to her suicide? Where is Humeira? Multiple personality disorder issue? Did she "inherit" some faulty genes from Zainab? aage aage dekhiye😃 but I wil simplify it for u...Zeenat and Humeira are real sisters
• ASAD IS BACK! Woohoo! Poor thing was a POW. Tip from Istanbul? Hmm! Anwar? Or someone who knows Rashid? Waiting for AK to come face to face with Zoya. Hope he does not misunderstand Farhan to be her son. But, she will recognize him, beard or no beard! Waiting to see how it unfolds.
• Asad said "Agar zinda raha, tho hamesha unke paas rahoonga". Will he quit the Navy after this mission is completed? So, he does not remember (yet) Ayaan Khan or the Art house. Interesting!
• That was a one time gift he managed to get for Zoya but gradually he will recall the connection between ayaan, bombay arthouse and his gift😕
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• Of course, 5 yrs of being a POW has taken a toll. I guess it will click in place when he meets Zoya. He was instrumental in getting her there. So, indirectly he did help her in her time of need. Has Zoya been calling the Navy periodically for news about him? She knows the body was not his. Do Dilshad and Najma know?

Let's assume she has😃 warna aap aur Annu bechain rahenge

• Zoya: is a champ! Made a life for herself, bonded with Rashid, anonymously funded Dilshad's treatment, is taking care of an autistic child and above all has made a Taj Mahal for her Mr. Khan! What a woman! 👏 she has decided to live without moving on..
• Rashid: glad he took in Zoya. But, he is still a weak man if he took to drinking! Lets hope he had a hand in the tip from Istanbul. Loved the fact that he still took in Zoya in spite of knowing she is Siddiqui's daughter! Only for Asad, Najma and Dilshad!! For Rashid, any contact with his first family is more imp than his animosity towards siddiqui. Yes, he is weak and that's why ended up in this soup also...he is trying to redeem himself though
• Karan Wahi? Really? 🤣 for all the young gals on this forum. I don't care for him
• Dilshad Najma scene was nice. So Dilshad is not against Zoya.

I love how your dialogues keep in mind the Muslim/Urdu way of speaking, so one sentence felt out of place:

Ayaan touched her shoulder slightly, "mujhey garv hai tum par." thanks for that big blooper...corrected it to 'fakr'

I think "naaz" would have been more appropriate than "garv"! Hey, you wanted some critique to keep you grounded. That's all I could come up with!!😆 yes...please keep pointing them out😆

Will wait for all the questions to be answered in future updates. Love your story! Please update soon if possible!! 😊...will be a few days as I have a busier week. thanks again for ur wonderful comments