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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Champa2012

@Champa2012

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

Many places you have Khushi instead of Zoya and Arnav instead of Asad. Looks like you formatted your Arshi OS to suit this. Nice one.

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

You have to edit the Arnav and Khushi from this OS!

You got me confused for a while!

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Oh wow such a gripping story!! The description was so vivid, and I had half-prepared myself for a sad ending. So glad you made it end on a happy note though (: Loved it!!

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Terribly sorry, guys. I wrote one for ArHi and recreated it with required changes in plot, but guess forgot at some places. Sorry for the inconvenience caused😔

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

The beep at first confused me. I was like what's the importance of this sound. The ending with its significance almost made me tear. Her heartbeat increased because of his voice an touch even when she was battling with death itself. Zoya makes me fall in love with her every time man. She saved Asad from the jerk and then she cared for his safety and health when she had just come out of coma. Asad's concern and love for her made me feel all happy and tingly. Gah, I need an Asad in my life!

Simply put, you never fail to amaze me!

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Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

At first I thought it would be a sad OS, was prepared to cry

But thank god it wasn't

Saved some tears

Great OS Faiza

I loved it

Still one of my fav. writers on the forum :)

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

This was sooo awesome! Fuji loved it to the core ❤️

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

In the middle of the story I realize what the 'beep' and that she was in the hospital!

But seriously, very well written, had me gripped throughout because I wanted to know what had happened exactly😊

Asad was just perfect except at some point there was a glimpse of Arnav(not that I mind😉

Emotions were well expressed and I could imagine the whole scene right from Zoya describing her surroundings in the trench up till her waking up and Asad hugging her!

Read an emotional OS after a really long time and may I just say, it was one of the best that I have read!

Great work!