{|AsYa| OS: The Heart Knows...}

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

luks like something like this has to happen for asad to confess

Quote

Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Love it ... really. I loved the way you described the entire state of coma.. His voice , his touch , his tears and the beepsss... Really, very touching... I always think what happens to the person when he enters coma , does he or she knows what is happening around and what is like their thoughts in that state... But, I guess I'l never get an answer nor I want it... But then may be I'l take it that may be this is what happen when the person is in coma..

Very well executed.. Love the way you play with words.. That is an art.. Seriously.. You writers are so gifted and I love your stories hell a lot..

Do write something soon , keep smiling and keep writing as that is what keeps your readers going...

Dee

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

oh that was such an amazing os

great work dear

Quote

Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Quote

_Ridz_

@_Ridz_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

OMG Fuji i almost had tears... this was beautiful... just the way i want the ajmer track to end...you know how much i love you for this...awee

Quote

..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

well atleast u showed this donno wats gonna happen in the show...!!!

awesome os...

Quote

CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I'm speechless after reading it...As if I could feel Zoya's emotions while she was fighting the darkness around her..Fabulous piece of work!!👏

Quote

Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..
I'm speechless after reading it...As if I could feel Zoya's emotions while she was fighting the darkness around her..Fabulous piece of work!!👏

yup tongue tied and speechless is the write way to express the feeling I got on reading it to

read it for the second time and I think I will read it again😆

I was wondering if some one has to shoot the scene for the show how will the picturise Zoya'a struggle through the darkness of coma. It would be difficult I suppose😆

thats the power of written word which the visual media can never create

your words were simple yet so powerful so potent that they leave a lasting impression afterwords and one is drawn to read it again.

I loved the beep effect that you have put.

And the beep got stronger and stronger as his voice became clearer and clearer

wow I loved this intense depiction of love

This is my second comment on the OS😆 I am sorry dear I think I am becoming poetic after reading it🤣

And I am going to read it again😆

Edited by Nandiniraizaada - 12 years ago