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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

The OS was wonderful! 🤗

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Livingfree

@Livingfree

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

This was so beautiful! Loved it.

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Riti

@-Reeti-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Superb 👏
UPD soon 😊

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

really good...really heart knws...thnks 4 d pm dear

pari

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Mamatha

@mamathasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Its too gud Faiza...very touching...you have to beleive me because i read it while i am on call for an important status meeting for my project 👏...too gud ❤️

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

MINDBLOWING OS Faiza..

Loved it alot...❤️

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Beep beep at first the sound confused me, then it built the curiosity, then I thought it would be sad OS

Then I realised it has become a beautiful story,

The way you strafed it, it was so different and the internal thoughts of Zoya , I felt it was happening in front of me. It was so vivid

Zoya don't do this to me, that sentence was so beautiful. I am not a writer like you so I can't express really how I felt on reading this OS

But I assure you it was one of the most beautiful pieces that I have read 😊

You have become one of my favourite writers

Keep it up

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

sch a touchyyy OS...

man HOWWW?? HOWWW??? HOOWWW???HOW CAN U BE SOOO GOOD AT WRITING????nooo u hv to gv me an answerrr how can u rite sooo nicely???👏

ths ws ritten amaaazingly welll...

sooo different

sooo new concept ...

filled wid so much intensity...

i seriously caaant xplain u in words how curious i ws getting wid evry passing sentence...

i jst sticked to it... glued to it...

u knw wt vn i ws in 3rd standard my mother bought me a bag as a gift ...

on d front zip pocket of d bag it ws in bold letters "I WAS BORN INTELLIGENT "

n i thnk ths suits u PERFECTLLYYY ...

it ws jst oout of ths world...

i nvr thought smbody can xplain d mental condition of a person in coma sooo welll...👏

i swear im not exaggerating it... i seriously mean it...

awwwsm OS!!!!👏

Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

so sweet... just love it

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

That was a long OS but a beautiful and meaningful one nevertheless. Loved how Zoya was struggling to come out of the darkness of her coma so that she can confess her feelings to Asad !! Very well written.