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This was beautiful, Faiza! Too good really! Iove that you described what she must be going through in a coma. Its such a hard thing to do, but you did so effortlessly. I really hope something like this is shown in the show

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Okay, i am stumped. Seriously woman, HOW do you write so damn well haan???!!!
When i first started reading this i was confused as to what this "beep" meant, and why on earth did Zoya think that she was in a trench, of all places? But then i read the words by asad and i could understand everything! The vivid descriptions that you added of Zoya's feelings and what she was going through...was just...BEAUTIFUL!!! Just beautiful!!

Originally posted by: teddyyy

The beep at first confused me. I was like what's the importance of this sound. The ending with its significance almost made me tear. Her heartbeat increased because of his voice an touch even when she was battling with death itself. Zoya makes me fall in love with her every time man. She saved Asad from the jerk and then she cared for his safety and health when she had just come out of coma. Asad's concern and love for her made me feel all happy and tingly. Gah, I need an Asad in my life!

Simply put, you never fail to amaze me!

This was truly amazing Faiza !! 😃

Loved it !! <33

So, so poignant and heart-wrenching.

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Awww thankyou so much, your comments are so encouraging. And yes, even in the show Zoya is just like that. Selfless. Deeply in love with Asad. And Asad in return madly in love with her too. But unlike the show, i try to take things up a notch.😆

Glad you liked it. 🤗

Liked it?! I loooved it! (: And no problemo haha, you deserve the appreciation! (: Your one shots always manage to keep the same characterization of Asya as in the show yet you make it so unique! Gah, I just love your work! (:

Beautifulll
I was a little confused at the beginning
I read and read and i try to find out whats going on exactly
I knew it That she is dreaming and the voice she heard its asad voice
But i didnt think she is in the hospital, i thought she is at Home and asad try to get her up
But then he Said " u cant do this to me please Cme back " i Said to myself ofcourse zoya in danger between Life and dead for sure , but i failed to find out That she is in hospital
Anyway really beautifull and what an End PERFECT i just loved 'Shhh, Zoya. I know. You don't have to say it. Atleast not before I do',
haye
ne even she was in coma but asad s voice and touch didnt fail to increase her heartbeats
--- beautifull beautifull beautifull i dont have words
Hats off to you 😳

glad it has a happy ending