{|AsYa| OS: The Heart Knows...}

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Awwe such a beautiful OS Faiza ! <3 Loved reading it ! 😳🤗

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

the writing styyle of this os was really very unique one
never read something like this
a little perplexed at beginning but till climax
i understood what it really was
really enraptured by this os😃
the significance of beep to heartbeat was really
awesome👏

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

loveeely os
little confused at start
but at last i realised what it was
reallly enraptured by it

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Unique style of writing and very beautifullly illustrated...Done complete justice to the character even in such an emotional update...especiallly how zoya reacted with each and every beeep and touch,,,,goood work.

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astonm

@astonm

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

AWWW!

this story is cuteness to the power of infinity! I so teared up near the end! You my friend are a wizard with words! Woot Woot! 👏

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

tis is really beautifully awesome...just luv it...luv the concept too...especially hw u describe each n every situation tat zoya felt...wat keep her goin n hw strong is her love i had tears ...it just so wonderfully brilliantly written...thx fr the pm...ur really a wonderful writer...

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Aiman

@SparklingEyes29

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

when i start reading i thought zoya is dead & its a sad OS bt the ending make me happy. It was briliant OS 😊

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Love it! ❤️ It's super-amazing, as usual! 😳 U have excessive talent! 👏 👏 👏 I loved the way u described Zoe's confusion and other feelings, in this. 👍🏼 Your writing is always beautiful, outstanding, and unique. I ❤️ your dark writing a lot! Stay fabulous!!!! 🤗

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

OMG I have no words to describe how amazing this was.. Literally brought tears to my eyes.. This was sooo beautiful.. Zoya saved Asad's life.. How amazing is that?! I loveeed your describing words throughout especially when describing Zoya's trouble.. It gave me goosebumps when I read that she went into coma.. But once again it was Asad who brought her back to life.. This was just simply amazing and I have no other words to describe how beautifully written this is.. It just loved it .. Great work