OS: Problem, Mr Khan? (last part pg 37) - Page 12

Originally posted by: jazmeen

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Man I just left house and when I sat in bus I saw ur pm and a big smile crept my lips
I was like yauyyy


And after reading ur update I was smiling like a fool and someone gave me look lol
Loved the update it was superbbb
I wanted a jealous asad but I still loved asya in it.the confession was damn goood. You did make it sound so damn real.

I loved how asad's sui was atki on same line what was ayaaan doing here
lol

M gonna reread both the parts bfr I start my work so I can smile all day.


And plzzz con with it plzzz I wanna see najms and dilshaad teasing them with ayaaan
Plzzz puppy face 😳

Originally posted by: princessradhika

so cute & adoreable.🤗..asad zoya convo was beautiful..u showed their emotions so perfectly...finally asad confessed..and i loved the scene that followed after the confession❤️..the last two dialouge was hilarious, asad asking zoya if she would continue to call him mr.khan and zoya's immediate reaction that he has a problem with that too😆..only zoya can do that..all in all it was outstanding👏👏 and i loved it...do write more..

Originally posted by: giee

dint like it????
u must be kidding me ??? 😲

i simply LOVED IT 👏
i could seriously imagine the scene
n dat my friend proves dat u r an AMAZING WRITER 👍🏼

all the jaw dropping moments were fab 😆
*the hug*
howww adorable ☺️

confrontations are always special 😳
again i m *awestruck*

p.s-dis was d end rite??? 😭
i want moreee pleaseee 😆

n thanx fr d pm 😃

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

hey tnkk uuu chooo mch 4 d PM!! i ws sooo eager 2 read d nxt part tht i myslf chckd it again n again n iv already read it n i mst telll u it ws faaab!!! vryyy nic update!!! tnxxx alooot 4 d PM!!plzzz update sooon n PM me!!! 1ncc again tnx alooot!!